New SS: Sirf Tere Liye... Last Pt4/pg8, 10/12/2016 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res
me first..


Meera ka intazar is yug me toh khatam hone do

Ab to meera ko uska kanha lauta do...


absolute beauty it was ritzz.

I was so curious to know what was it about geet that she ran away from Maan. but then you gave a third angle... the slow poison!

It was meant for Janya but somehow Geet took it upon herself, protecting her. and thats when I actually realized the Meera-kanha connection

even meera was poisoned. but her devotion and love for kanha proved more potent that the poison.

that is what true love it. it saves you from every bad in the world.

Love is like the only thing in this whole world that has the power to make you soar high and destroy you at the same time.

That is what happened between maan-geet-janya!

Janya realized their love and united themselves.

but my most fav was those last lines you worte...

a door will always remain open for us. but it is our choice whether we take that door and go to the light ot remain locked in the darkness.

totally loved the whole thing.

its soo good to see you back here!



Mujhe kaanha nahi bas geet ka maan banna hai

Tumhari zindagi ko khushiyo se mehkaana hai...

so beautiful. I loved how he said he wanted to love her as Maan and not Kanha... and with that he took my heart away!



Meera ko bas intazar tha apne kaanha ka

Wo khush thi intazar main pyar paake kaanha ka...


intezaar mein pyaar paana...

how crazily beautiful yaar!

hats off woman.

this is the most beautiful of all your works!

am so proud of u

🤗


Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
lovely ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update rittz ..you expressed each ones feeling very beautifully in the poetic way ...finally Meera ko uska Kanha mil gaya.. . Please do keep writing these beautiful poetic stories... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Padey padey ro di hu ... teri kahani mai dil ko kho gayi hu
Lovely

Just wants to say ... what a back ritu . welcome ...ab na jana ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
part 2
Aww man this was such an amazing one specially the way geet described herself as meera while pari describes her as radha

Dono ko toh samjh agaya ke kya ho raha hai lekin humare kanha aka maan ko kab samjh ayega yeh?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
hi thanks 4 da pm n stupendous update! beautifully written! Maan n Geet's feelings well portrayed! nice end
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3
Bichad gayi maan ki geet
Aur janya ne samjhaya maan ko ke geet hi uaki radha, rukmini aur meera hai
Finally maan samjha aur geet ko dhundh liya
Geet ko leke todha confusion hai ke kya wada hai
Rohan bechara na geet ka dard dur kar sakta hai na kuch aur
Waiting ke ab aage kya hoga
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4
Wowww such an amazing update and end to the story!
My heart breaks for janya! Someone tried to hurt her before and now she had to give up her love
Hopefully she would have some love in her life in the future
The debt that janya owed to geet for saving her life was payed by returning maan to geet
That is such an beautiful way of how god works in mysterious ways

Finally maan realised what geet had been telling him that his dream land isnt reality and seeing all what they have faced has made him mature

The guilt and pain which geet held was not something anyone should live with... Yet she did and still was an amazing person who gave up her love to save him
Woh radha banne se acha meera ban ke jeena chahti thi

My most fav lines were this "Meera ho Radha ho ya Rukmini par ho toh tum is Kanha ki... Saathi hu tumhara jaise ye baasuri hai meri"

Full story main Radha, Rukmini aur Meera ka hi zikar huva lekin finally Kanha ka bhi huva woh bhi khud Maan ke muh se hi!!

Ritz this story is such a fresh breath of air in this world of stale air!! I swear i cant tell how proud i am to have been able to read this different style of story telling!!

Hope u write something like this again!! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely n very much emotional

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