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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Part 1
interesting concept...

in GHSP we have Drashti as Geet, and here Geet as drashti :)

meaning she has the sense of clairvoyance..who gets de ja vu experiences many a times or sees something of future and ends behaving differently or say weirdly because of it..
yeah, it is difficult to remain unaffected knowing some thing about the future in the lives of other people..

so she avoids being in crowd or in contact with people and is leading a lonely life..the loneliness drives her to get off of this special power she possesses..

while Maan is depressed, is in devdas mode, has become impassive because of the heart break..

is he the one, to whom the lady is referring to hold the hand and you will know..
because this time she will see her own future or their future...that is interesting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

o oh..she sensed the danger and saved him from the accident, but Maan thought she is an accomplice to the thieves..
Geet's pleading that she is saying the truth does not affect him, but finally for his own benefit and for getting slightly concerned about Geet, he cooked up a different story to the Police..


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3

Maan, somehow with her around is back with emotions, or at least for some time he was kind enough to take her to the hospital and get her treated, and also drove her back to her home...while she goes into kind of unconscious state between sleep and awake, where she does not have control over the things that she feels or does in that time..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4

ye kya, Maan in devdas mode again, guess he is like that every day..and galati se he is at her doorstep...so ke, khana khake as if he was staying in an hotel he also paid a lakh rupees..that is such a small amount compared to the mess he created bothering Geet..and abhi blank cheque bhi bhej diya...put an infinite amount there Geet..😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 5

She grabs a pen and paper and writes note

G- Give this to him, please

She gives the paper to the man and closes to the door and like morning, she tears up the check and burns the pieces

Maan ka aadmi note nahi de paaya, tab tak Maan nikal chuka tha jab tak wo aadmi pohoncha

Raat ko Geet aaram se TV dekh rahi thi, discovery channel

Gloves on, jab se wo admi gaya gloves nahi utre

Maan ka ka touch kara hua saaman bhi wo gloves pehkar handle karna pasand karti hai

Kuch footstep ki awaaz aayi achanak

Phir door knock

Geet curses ki kaun hai, she just hopes its anyone except her goldilocks...that Maan

Geet ne poocha kaun hai

She decides, tomorrow she is getting eye hole in her door

Gate pe knock hue jaa raha hai

Footsteps ki awaaz bhi asynchronous si

Geet ne zara sa khola, saamne koi nahi

A hand near her door and her face

Then wo haath zor se door pe aaya

It is a familiar male hand

She quickly steps out of the door way

Door push hua

Maan is leaning heavily on the door

Geet bilkul side, diwaar chipak ke

Maan with drunk wali smile, apna hi ghar hai..ghus gaya

Aaj to haath mein ek bottle bhi hai

Geet aur side ho gai, 5 kadam peeche chal rahi hai out of reach range mein

Maan pasar gaya aaram se sofe par taking a swig from his bottle

TV chal raha tha off kiya Maan ne

G- Alright why are you here?

Aaram se joote-voote sab push karke nikale, ek joota yahan doosra wahan

G-So you think you can give me money and I'll be something like your kept woman?

Geet thode chips khaa rahi thi, Maan muththi bhar leke puts in his mouth taking another swig

Crumple karke phek dia packet

She looks around

She sees a plastic cup and throws it at him

G-HEY!! Get. OUT!!

She says opening the door and pointing

M-Shhh shhh

He hisses

G- Oh really? AHHAAHHAHAHHHAHHH!!! AHHAHAH!! AHHAHAHAHAHHH! Get out out outtt OUT OUT OUT ouuttt GETT OUTTT

Geet points to the door

Maan gets up, red intoxicated eyes glaring at her

She glares back, can't he see she wants to stay away from him

He staggers to her

G- Stay away!

He walks up to her

She ready to run in either direction to avoid him

Their faces inches apart

Now she knows how high he towers above her

G- Don't touch me

She puts her gloved hands tentatively on his chest pushing him and trying very hard not to cop a feel of his muscled manly torso

Next second, he is on his shoulder like a sack

G- No! Don't touch me! Don't touch me! Idiot! Get away!! Don't touch meee!!!

She is kicking, pounding his back with her fists

She would have gone with her teeth too but then again then she may draw blood and contact issues

He staggers badly towards the kitchen with her on his shoulder, his feet unsteady and disbalanced

G- You'll fall! We'll fall! Let go go let go let go GOOO!!!

M-Shhh!! Jzt shhh shhh

G-Dammit why are you after me? Don't you have another place to crash? Can't you see this is bad!!!

Maan jo bhi tha fridge mein wo nikalke starts biting

He again settles on sofa taking a huge gulp

She trapped by his arm

She tries her best to get away, sewing no other choice she pinches him hard on his side

It doesnt affect him ulta he is laughing drunkly

G- Let go. Please let go of me. Look, I'll scream myself hoarse if you don't

He puts his half eaten left over into her mouth

She spits it all out

G-Thu-thu cheee!!

She again starts harshly screeching

G-Chodo chodooo chodo chod ochodo chodo chodo chdooo

His grip loosens

Geet quickly gets away

Looks at him unbelievable!' Hadh ho gai! He is sloppy drunk, bits of food sticking to side of his face and stile she can't find him revolting

She takes a deep breath, goes close to him again, picks rag and cleans his mouth

She takes off his shoes frowning very hard all the time

Then she raises his shirt a bit to see where she had pinched him. It's blue-black. She feels bad. Almost guilty of putting it there

His mouth slightly open as he is sleeping...looking like a boy

She can't imagine ki Maan ko scratch lage to usse itni problem kyun ho rahi hai

Geet sone jaane lagi to Maan rolled down the sofa as he was too big for it

She pauses irritated ki kya hai, why me why me why me

She goes back to him

G-Oye!!

She nudges him with her socked foot

G-Utho. Go to bed

He mutters something like...umm

Taking hold of his collar she pulls

G-Uthooo!!!!!!

He opens his drunk droopy eyes with struggle, then drunk wali smile

She drags him to the bed

His head is comfortably rested on her shoulder

Geet ab se sarr par monkey cap bhi pehen legi just in case

He is muttering some inaudible

M-@Gg7*((*&^&*

G- Leech

M-*&(KJ))*J*^% -hic-

His head brushes against her cheek

Maan is comfortably resting his head her shoulder, not letting her go.

She is so warm and soft and comfy. He feels like snuggling into her. He feels peace

As his skin touches her she sees a visual of her and his. Both of them locked in each other's arms. Both of them smiling looking into each other's eyes in an open field on a sunny day with no one around, just them. Feeling most at peace as she had ever felt in her whole life, feeling secured and protected

But the visual ends making her most uncomfortable and astonished and nervous

She quickly drops Maan on her bed and walks away

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Posted: 8 years ago
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A new MG story, superb!

This is different and interesting.

Both are weird in their own ways, yet similar!

When in senses, Maan does not even bother about her, and lands up at Geet's place after getting drunk, wonder what goes on in his mind. Poor Geet, always cleaning up after him and does not even get to sleep on her bed.

Waiting to see what Maan does when he realizes that he went there again and how Geet deals with him next. Continue soon, please.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Nice ud
maan again went to geet house after getting drank
geet told him get out but he didn't bother and behaving
like this is his house geet bechari cleaning main lag gai
geet again left hr bed
wwat will maan reaction knowing he again landed in her
house
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome Update Nils 😃
I don't know Maan jaan karke geet ke ghar of aata hai 😕 😳
He finds peace at her place.. but she suffers 😆
Ohh she got another visual.. nice haan 😉 😆
Loved it.. Cont. Soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
It for Maan

Pi kar nashey k do boond
Tery ghar mein tapak jao ga
Tere hi bistar par so jao ga
It lakh Bhagya mujh ko mein dheet ban jao ga
Kiyon k
Maan na maan
Mein ho tera maan
Hehehehheh
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for pm.really more than geet here maan is weird. She has some special power which make her to behave differently but maan he is quite idiotic to crash someones house daily. Or we can say this is their destinywhich forced them to relate each other . Nice update waiting fornext.

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