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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update, well written! Maan comes 2 her place again! he is drunk! Geet upset! he messes up! Geet sees a vision of them n is shocked! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic part

Maan now takes Geet to hosiptal and also drops her at her home , Geet thinking that Maan might be a thief while he feels disgusted with her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fascinating part

Maan gets drunk but now he comes to Geet's home leaving a cheque for her but she later phones him and again he sends another blank cheque to her lets see now what she does and what Maan will do
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update
maan send a blank cheque to geet but she didnt accepts it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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maan again comes to geet house drunken.
geet tries not to touch him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5

So whenever Maan is drunk he ends up at Geet's place

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Posted: 9 years ago
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intriguing
she is a psychic
so what is her connection with maan
A girl who can feel to much n a Man who can feel nothing
y is Maan coming to her home over n over again
what was in the letter Geet gave for him
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 6

As his skin touches her she sees a visual of her and his. Both of them locked in each other's arms. Both of them smiling looking into each other's eyes in an open field on a sunny day with no one around, just them. Feeling most at peace as she had ever felt in her whole life, feeling secured and protected

But the visual ends making her most uncomfortable and astonished and nervous

She quickly drops Maan on her bed and walks away pulling out stuff from cupboard looking for the darn cap. But aaj tak jab cap kharidi nahi to milegi kahan se

Maan agitates drunkly at her going afar

She pulls out a cotton scarf and ties it around

Then she goes to him and frowns

G- Alight, you are fine and you are sleeping on a very comfortable bed. Why the hell are you mumbling now?! Sleep

She says with irritation and mounting anxiety because of the visual she had

It felt different

She never ever had visual with herself in them. She only saw the lady in dreams. This was the first time she saw herself. Damn frightening!

Maan to so gaya

Geet side bethti hai palang ke edum edge par bhagne ko taiyaar

He slept like fetus after a while

Geet usse chaadar udati hai and watches him settle into peaceful sleep

Uska kya hai, another wakeful night is not a big deal

Phir Geet ko laga ki bohot ho gaya, ab jao, niklo, stop looking, stop ogling at him

Jaie taise wo uthi wahan se

She looks at him again

She saw the mess he made and starts cleaning up

Socha ki khana bhi nahi khaya

She starts making food. She makes extra telling herself that it has nothing to do with him, she would eat it later and save herself some cooking time. She keeps telling herself she is not going to do one more thing for him

Khana banaya aur kuch bhi nahi khaya

Sab table par dhak kar rakh diya

Idhar udhar ghumi

Finally she dragged the sofa back to the sleeping corner and bed ke samne sofe par curl hokar falls asleep

She dragged it kyunki wahan she tried falling asleep to usse laga ki uska bed chota hai, what if he fell out or what if he puked. It would be better if she keeps an eye on him

Subah hui

Uthi to dekha pillow ke upar ek chit aur ek male rolex watch uske upar

She knows it's his watch. She would know it's his watch from a million watches coz it has his personality imprinted on it

Carefully she slips the chit from under the watch

These is only one word

Sorry

She feels guilty for all the stuff she had been planning on saying to him

What if he too was compelled by some need to seek her out?

Ye to socha nahi...

She had cursed him so much when she knows better not to curse people lightly

She gingerly picks up his watch, runs and puts it in her freezer

She doesn't want to look at it, she would look at it and then she would imagine the hand under it and then the arm then shoulder and that neck... and oh what neck and then the face then the...it is a disaster recipe

She strips the bed and washes the sheet

She is washing all cover to get rid of his smell

Uss aadmi ne wo note dia Maan ko Geet ka

It says-

Mr Maan Goldilocks Khurana

(Aage ek drawing hai, a circle with zigzag wale daan 3-4 car pointed se baal)

Stay away!

I don't want anything. No even money

Coz taking anything would mean having a relation between of any sort

(Ye poori line scribbled cut)

I don't want to have any correspondence with you. You better stop coming to my place even to just look at my house or I will be forced to change place and just forget my name too, if you can

Ps-My bed smells like alcohol

Maan ne dekha

He narrows his eyes

Apni table ki saari cheezein uthake phenk di

Office wale stunned

Lighter nikala, jala dia note

Udhar Geet ne bhi Maan ka note jalaaya although uska bilkul man nai kar raha tha

She would have liked to keep a souvenir or something of Maan's

Apne aapko daante hue she burned the note

Maan aaj pura din maha gusse mein tha, saare office wale kaamp rahe the uske paas jaane se

Maan sabse zyada khud par naraaz hai

Why does he end up every day at her place?

Geet kaam karti hai pet hotel mein, that place is an extention of the best hotel in the city

So that rich people can bring their pets along on vacation

Hotel ke side mein part hai wahan they can deposit them and the owners can go enjoy do everything and their pets are pampered groomed taken for walks exercised everything

Jo pet facility hai Geet uski head hai

It minimizes interaction with people and nothing happens while touching animals plus animals dent give her you are psycho!' looks if she is in her sixth sense moments

Not much about her is known to anyone, she is private

Hotel mei bhi she interacts only with the head manager

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Maan enters his client meeting that is in a restaurant

He walks in his usual tashan mein...sauve...personality hi aisi ki sabke head turn ho jaaye

He has plan for some evening drinks and snacks with his client

Maan bada intellectual sa, sab se baat kar raha hai

He is talk of the place, he is handsome and charming

Wahan Geet ko manager ne bulaya tha to discuss some matters

Hotel staff was apprehensive about a huge dog a customer has brought

Geet ko bulaya gaya

Wo aayi uniform mein, above knee dark navy skirt, white sa shirt and chota cute sa navy blue bow

Maan was in conversation with people, not even glanced at the girl

Geet aayi thi muh par chipkakar smile, as she neared the table her smile diminished

She would recognize that neck anywhere, and the wrist and the missing watch

Geet ki smile gai

She looks around

Glove Glove Glove Glove!

She reaches there, determined not to look at Maan

Wahan the manaager says to the man beside Maan

Manager-Excuse me Mr. Khan, here is our pet manager. A very talented lady, Ms Handa

She gives very nervous smile

Maan glances without turning his head but his lips are in a thin line as he sips his drink

Mr Khan extends his hand

She locks every facial muscle in place and extends her hand to shake his hand

YUCK!!!!!!

She wanted to pull her hand back and rub it against her skirt

The man nauseated her

Foul black ugly churning liquid... slime, Geet thought with the nervous smile intact, no outward reaction except

The man was staring hungrily at her


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Thanks for the overwhelming response, please send me a request if you are not in my buddy list and want to get pm for updates. Secondly, sorry for delayed update, I joined a job so was busy. Will try to make it up over the weekend. Much love.

Special mentions-

@Hira2010- Iloved your shayari...it was so hillarious n fun was reading it again n again also so apt for the situation...aisi lines har part pe likhte rehna

@_SharmeenLuvsGC- hehehe dear..i love you enthu...sorry for delay...enjoy the part

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulation for new job. Its a beautiful update. Besides disadvantages i wish to have some power like geet to understand ppl a little whom we face daily.so update soon as job treat. All the best.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for new job👏. All the best.
Edited by Risingsun626 - 9 years ago

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