MYSTIC CONNECTION- Part 54 Page109 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Such a beautiful and weird. Cocept and interesting. Bhi hai geet has some extra sensory power r some sort of body telling her forecast now have to see how these two poles a part fellows become one please do send PMS thank.u
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
I was thinking
K geet pagal hai ya maan
Ohhh god suspense mein stop kardi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Nice update!!
This Maan ever soo rude 😳
Maan took her to hospital!!
That lady coming once again in geet's dreams..
Loved the update :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Heya thanks for the pm 😉
Superb Update Nilu 😃
Maan is so insensitive, I literally threw her out from his car 😲
Me loving geet's super power.. is time kon aya uske ghar.. Is it Maan 😕
Waiting for next..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Lovely update maan lies to save him and geet he is getting affected by her he himself dosent know why he drops her to hospital filling his details he even leaves his important meeting to take geet her home he looks at for the first time she is very weak and fragile geet having another dream from which she is rudely awakened by maan who kicks her out of his car geet suddenly remembered of last day details and has a good feeling geet is in her home when she gets late night visitor it's maan I am sure of it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
nice pt
maan have to b with geet and he left fr his meeting
but again he came yo pick hr and dropped hr in front of hr house
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

PART 4

She is getting some weird feeling

Aur ye achanak kaise ho gaya. Aaj to wo sab acha-acha bhi feel kar rahi thi

She asks from the door ki kaun hai

Again knocks

Usne koshish kiya to feel but it won't work; uski koshish never works when she wants it to

Door khola

Peeche ki taraf gir gai as huge Maan leaned on him with his double weight, drunk dead on his feet

Geet thodi der ke liye blank ki ye kya ho gaya

G-Ahhh!

She struggled getting off and pushing him off form top of her and phew he was so heavy

Geet ka maan kiya ki Maan ko ghar mein chod kar ghar se bhaag jaye

Abhi sab blank hai Geet ke mind mein, Maan ka aana itna bada shock tha uske par uske upar gir jaana

Aisa hua ki, he got drunk and started driving somewhere. Chala to tha dusri taraf jaane ke liye but something happened and he just reached there

G-Ohhh get offf !!!!!! Pleaseee!

She is pushing him

G-Mister !!!!!!!!!!!! MISTER !!!!!!!!!!

He makes an effort to roll away to get away from the squeaky whining

She is again mister-mister' to make him go from her home

G-MISTER !!!!!!!! MISTER !!!!!!!!!!!!

She shakes him

But Maan has gone out like a fused bulb like Geet did yesterday

Not ready to wake before he wants to

Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha kya kare

Paani daalti hai uske upar- no reaction

G-HELLOOO HELLOOO

Checks his pulse, chal rahi hain

Dil ki dhadkan check kari and then press her ear to his heart

She checks his breathing

He lets out little snore that pacifies her and turns a bit to get comfortable on the floor his head landing on her lap

Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha kya kare

Idhar udhar dekha, head ko neeche slid karke uth gai

Bhook to marr hi gai thi, chadar odhke apne bed pe simat gai

Ache se gate lock karke

Kaafi der neend nahi aayi, she was all sweat

Middle of the night she heard something, jo neend aayi thi wo bhi tutt gai

Uthke dekhne gaiyi to floor pura ganda

Maan was puking

Sab poncha lagaya, saaf kiya raat ko

Buri hallat hai bechari ki

Maan ki adhi neend khuli thi

He staggers and falls on the bed taking her takiya chadar

Geet to ab ro degi

It's not like she is afraid of him physically. She is more psychically wary of him. Wants to keep distance coz she feels bleep of attraction

Safai karke she goes and puts on her gloves. When she was young she used to put them on. She stopped doing it when she controlled her body and face reaction par yahan reaction control karne ki nahi reaction na hone ki baat hai

Geet full sleeves ki T-shirt pehni, full length ki jeans, pair mein socks

Jaakar wo sofa chair par baith gai jahan wo baith kar book padti hai in the same room

She doesnt want him puking on her bed coz that would be impossible for her to clean up

She was still wondering why was he here

She can't help but look at his features and in the dark learnt he curve of his lips, plane of his head the sunk hollowness of his cheek near is mouth

Who was this man...who...who?

To socha ki wallet check karna chaiye, ye to bolega nahi. Neend aa nahi rahi

She tiptoes to him, dheere se reaches inside his pocket thankful for the gloves a barrier between his skin even though his cloths were there

Wallet niklala driver's license dekha

Maan Singh Khurana, male, age, address chap gaya sab Geet ki memory mein, license number bhi; aur dekha purse, kaafi sare credit card hain, visiting card nikala Maan ka, company ka naam, Maan ka number, designation: owner sab note kiya mentally

Kuch paise the wallet mein, kuch aur logon ke visiting card bhi the sab band karke Geet ne chup chap wallet wapas rakh diya

Maan thoda turn hua, a lock of hair falling on his forehead

Bina kuch soche, Geet ne side kar diya and then she hissed and leaped back hyperventilating ki kya kiya, kyun kiya, what is wrong with her. She doesnt even like touching people even when they need help aur isse to help ki bhi zarurat nahi thi phir kyun

She looks at her gloves thankfully

They are not coming off as long as that man is around

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Subah hui

Geet ki neend khuli wo jaa chuka tha, table pe Geet ka khana bhi khatam tha

1 lakh ka cheque pada tha

She takes it up and tears it up and burns the pieces

Jaakar jaldi se taiyar hui got to go her job

She works in a seven star hotel as the manager of the pet nursery

Poore din animals ke saath rahi almost feeling relaxed

Phir shaam ko gathered enough courage and called Maan

Number Maan visiting card par tha

Maan ne phone uthaya nahi

She glares at the phone

Geet phir dial karti hai metally pushing him to pick up

Chanting pick up pick up pick up

M-WHAT???

G-I am the one who should be shouting. You puked on my floor!!

He narrows his eyes

G-Hogged my bed and ate my food!

M-You'll get another cheque

G- Who do you think you aer, goldi-freaking-locks?!

Maan ne phone kaat diya

She calls again

Nahi uthaya phone

She keeps calling

She would rather call of hours on end than meet him in person

But all in vain, he did not pick up the phone

Shaam ko Geet ghar gai

Ghar pohonchte hi uske darwaze pe ring hui

G- Who is it?

Then again ring

She runs and fetches her gloves and puts them on and opens the door an inch to see ki kaun hai

A suited booted man in formals is standing in front of her door

Ms Geet?'

G-What do you want?

She says without opening the gate further

This is for you, mam. Sent by Mr Khurana'

Haath mein thanake chala jaata hai ek blank cheque

G-Wait wait!!!

She grabs a pen and paper and writes note

k- Give this to him, please

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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Nice part so it was maan why did he came he could go anywhere hmm he gave her check geet didnt take good thnx 4 pm

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