Re-Written FF||Collide||Chapter 8 Pg 21||4th February||

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Nice story, I really liked this version of Collide, for some reason on the previous version maneet relationship was unreal. Here I looks like maan kind of interested in geet. Hope it will not be pari then geet for maan.

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Thank you for posting this one as you I wanted to read this one again as the continuation too. You really have fulfilled my wish. I will read it and comment on it.
Thnx

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hehehe geet n Vicky both need to clean up their mouths :P

Geets dad seriously did that too :P

Maan is the introvert type :I

Waiting for Maan n pari :v

Err will this time also Maan pari ?? Or geet Maan at first :P

Well that won't be pleasing one to see Maan ditching geet n going to pari :I

Jake Kate n his grandma... Oops sorry for them :P

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

hi thanks 4 updating! splendid update! wonderfully written! Geet n Sid share a lovely relationship! Geet loves 2 annoy him! she forgot 2 inform him abt the car! Geet comments on Dave! her dadi irritated! Pari n Geet r best friends! she teases Pari! Geet angry that Vicky is wid Meera! she leaves! Meera tutoring Vicky! he tells Geet is nice! Maan tells his mom abt Vicky's tuition! Vicky upset! Jake n Kate caught by his grandma! Seems like Maan has no friends! Update soon

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Interesting update. Sid is the same, liked his mouth washing dialogue. Vicky defended Geet in front of Meera. Kate Jake scene was funny with his grandma scolding them😆

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

interesting story..
i hvn't read it before bt now i will read it.as u again rfeposting it..
starting is nice..
all characters r nice..
maan is bit matured n calm n while geet is so cool/
mouth washing part was aawesum😆\
vicky is flirty bt like geet ..
liked when he defend gget i front of meera..
nd also vicky gettingwarning from his mom..
update nxt prt soon

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Collide is really back and changed!! Geet had car problem and maan gave her a ride...maan seems to be attracted to geet and meera noticed...Vicky is flirty but hope he stays there.

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Part 2...geets dad and mia are more hard on their kids...vicky is moee carefree he wants to chase his dream but no backup...he tells meera to not judge geet...jakes abuela is awesome...her grandson is nakwd on bed and she lectures him...geet is a though nut and not sure vicky can handle...maan and vicky have an uncle dave...thats new...waiting for next part!!!

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

part 2 - liked this part. sid is too harsh in this version. i liked him here too. literally he did wash geet's mouth with soup...omg. i wonder how he approved of vicky & geet's relation.

liked there gang enjoying to the fullest. strip show..? interesting.

maan wanted to keep vicky in control as he was only concentrating on his sport and ignoring his study. he wanted him to study as a backup. so maan hates his dad.. who is this dave..?

jake-kate part hilarious. his grandma barged into their room while they were naked and her cursing in spanish was hilarious.

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hope Vicky is not really two timing Geet, she will be really upset as she looks like an emotional type..although she pretends to be tough...Maan though I think is already awed by her and looks like he is interested in her but does not want to admit it due to his brother...

Thnx