Re-Written FF||Collide||Chapter 8 Pg 21||4th February||

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@Queen0fDarkness

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@fict

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Intersting part. Meera has developed a crush on Vicky and Maan tried to warn her about Geet being Vicky's gf. Pari's dad was insensitive but looks like he doesn't care much. Sid seems like an ideal dad though.

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Really nice update, I think Maan loves Geet but is not going to say anything due to his brother, Vicky. Liked the way he was able to understand her painting and derived that it meant Believe...love Pari and Geets friendship and hope nothing comes in between them...scared if Meera falling for Dev it will hurt Geet a lot but then Hopefully Maan I'll gather courage to pour his heart to her...

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Meera got a crush on vicky 😲 haa wait till geet knows this, im sure she'll claw her eyes out 😛

So this time pari have dad but he is also ass like her mom 😡

geet's painting inspired maan ..hehe its always fun & pleasure to read sid's scene 😃 He is really coolest father [|8]

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Hey firstly welcome back

I am extremely happy to see you back, was missing your writing like crazy (even sent u a message on fb)!

Now coming to the story, loving the new Collide even though I don't think that the previous one wasn't good =)

I also like that you have envisioned Karan Tacker as Vicky, suits the character =)

But I really wanna know what made u choose the ppl who are playing Meera and Pari?? Any specific reason behind that?? =D

Now I am sure Sid is an awesome dad to Geet but tattoos??? Ahhh not a dad thing lol =P

Geet seems to be holding onto Vicky just for the hell of it, but does she actually love him??

I like Meera and Maan's friendship, they're adorable!

Now for some reason Maan seems to be intimidated by Geet lol =P

Wondering where will this lead to??

I will add to my response once I re-read it, loving the story though =)

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Fabulous update. This version of Collide is a lot more different from the previous one. I am liking this version more.

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

nice update..
oops ..vicky pissed off with he dance steps😆
bt hv to do it otherwise geet will kick him😉
maan n meera frndship is very nice .both r very mature n understnding..
whhooo...meera have a crush of vicky😉..
bt maan warned not to do something stupid else will geet will surely kill her..
poor pari..never get the love of parents ..
geet paints too.interesting..
last part was awesum..😆😆

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saro

@saro

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Part 2 nice update... Geet warning Vicky,maan gives advise to Vicky... N lots of Vicky...

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Awesome!!! Meera is falling over vicky but if geet finds out she is dead. ..paris relation with her parent's is the worse. ..they don't care..it's just money and all...the last scene was hilarious. ..vicky and geets dad got the wrong idea about the girls