Re-Written FF||Collide||Chapter 8 Pg 21||4th February||

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

hi thanks 4 the fantastic update! well written! Meera n Maan r friends Meera has a crush on Vicky! Maan tells her Geet is his gf! If Geet gets 2 knw then Meera will b in trouble! Feeling 4 Pari! Her dad is so mean! Geet at Vicky's place! Maan is there as well! Geet painting! Maan gets her motivated! he admires her painting! Sid is an amazing dad! is Maan in love with Geet??? update soon

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

meet likes Vicky n ma'am warns her any guests wreath...
unknowingly ma'am too understand feet better then Vicky...
Vicky is like some must Milla type guy...careless... carefree
Paris hate her parents ... they r like a curse on the name of parents...
I liked sid character very much he always console feet at missing her mother...
I wish meet n Vicky pairing n ma'am with best...hope for best

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Wow. So this time you're giving a first pov for evert scene. That's a good change.

Geet's dad seem to be a tough guy here. Not the overly sweet dad who supported his daughter in everything she did. Even though I can tell he loves her immensely, he doesn't seem to be blind or pamper her too much.

Dave is Maan's uncle and Geet thinks he is hot for his age. Lol.

Jake's scene was funny. God. Looks like every parent is struggling to keep up with their children's lifestyle. Here his grandmother seem displeased finding him in bed with Kate and admonished him. But it had no effect on him or Kate. Wonder why he didn't bolt the damn door if he knows his grandmother just barges in whenever she wants.

Vicky is being tutored by Meera. Geet seems to be a very possessive girlfriend. That too when she doesn't even love Vicky and is with him for her own emotional selfish reasons. Maybe that's the reason why Vicky ends up falling for Meera. Who would want a girlfriend who doesn't trust you? Geet is behaving like a psycho crazy bitch. Lol.

Vicky doesn't obviously seem to take Geet for granted. At least not when he defended Geet so fiercely in front of Meera. So looks like he at least admires her for the person she is and has accepted her. Not sure if he loves her, but can say that he respects her and values whatever relationship he shares with her.

Mia also seem to be very strict mother. Wants her children to study and have a degree. Vicky wants to chase his dreams and Maan advised him to have a back up plan incase his basketball career doesn't flourish. Maan is right there.

Maan seems to be very mature and responsible guy. He works at the garage and then even works on weekends at some other place. Doesn't he have a social life? Friends, party, date or simply hang out? He looks a career oriented guy. Wonder if his dad is the reason behind it. Cos he obviously enjoyed playing basketball with Vicky but simply hates the idea of having it as a career only cos his father played the game. So the brother duo stay with their mom?

The gang met and discussed about the fundraiser event and basically have fun.

All the parents are quite similar yet different from their previous version characteristics.

This version is more detailed than the previous one. The background of every character is a good change.

-Sanjana!

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hmm. So Meera already has a crush on Vicky. Looks like even she can't help but fall for his charms when Geet thought Meera was immune to him. Lol.

Maan seems to be a very serious and isolated type of a guy. Like one who wants to plan his life and make something of himself. He is already wondering what kind of job he wants to do but is quite unsure. That is until he sees Geet's painting and derives some inspiration from it. I don't know if I'm reading too much between the lines. But it looked to me as if MG already share some kind of connection between them which can't be explained in words. They are not even friends yet there is something between them. Won't say it's attraction but just something.

Geet is quite distant too. She is holding her feelings back and refuses to talk about it. Not even with her dad. She definitely has emotional issues. She loves painting whenever she 's upset I think. Music is what reminds her of her mother, makes her feel close to her mother. At least that's what it did in old version I guess. So what does painting help her achieve?

So for a change we've Pari's father. In previous version he was a silent character. But here we know he is exactly like his wife. God how much I hated Pari's mother. She was a bitch and so cold. Pari's dad seem to be no different. He doesn't care his daughter needs her parents emotionally. But they're trying to compensate for the attention, love and care she deserves by giving her all the materialistic things.

Sid is trying to break through the walls Geet had built around her. But even he can't reach to his daughter when it's obvious she is remembering her mother.

Geet tried to cheer Pari up but got caught up in a rather unintentionally hilarious situation that almost gave Sid a heart attack and Vicky to retreat his steps and go back from where he came. Lol.

I'm glad that the all the characters are same yet there is a newness to them all. I'm liking the changes far.

-Sanjana!

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

very interesting update

maan - geet - vicky

meera- vicky -geet😉

going superb

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Thanks for awesome update...maan-meera friends...Meera has a crush on Vicky...! Vicky's girlfriend Geet..! Maan in love with Geet ...pari-geet gr8 friends..excited for next..!!

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Intresting part..
Meera developed some feelings for vicky and maan warn her about geet being vickys gf..
Maan confuse soul not decied any thing about his future and geet's paiting inspired her..
Sweet and cute friendship between pari and geet..
Waiting for next part..

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Please Update your other stories..
Waiting...

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Heheheheh the ending part :P

These two r crazy!! :P

Geets painting give Maan his destination :)

.well geeky has fallen for Vick!!

Geets Bf!!!

Lol Maan u r right

Geet will kill her thrice :v

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

OOO Meera has the hots for Vicky wonder if Vicky feels otherwise! I feel bad for Pari still battling for love from her parents but she has her sister form another mister to help her make it through! Maan might mean something to Geet later on who knows u have will have your way of establishing this :)