Re-Written FF||Collide||Chapter 8 Pg 21||4th February||

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Characters

You can imagine whoever you like. These are just who I've imagined as the characters for this FF. 😊

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

wow!!! Collide is back
will love to read it again..

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swetha03

@swetha03

Explorer

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Posted: 9 years ago

super update..

the earlier one was really emotional..want to read this story again with the new changes..

congrats too...😊

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting
geet n vicky r together..its been 3 years now
maan helped geet when her car broke down. Seems like maan is intrigued by geet...cont soon

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-Halima

@-Halima

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow, it's amazing that you are rewriting Collide although I loved the previous one as well.

Karan Tacker as Vicky is a great choice, this reminds me of his character Sameer from LNMDJ.

I hope Vicky doesn't cheat on Geet but even if he does I want a strong Geet who can handle him and even kick his ass.

Maan is already getting pulled towards Geet when she is his brothers girl, hmm interesting!!

I am already hooked on the story.

Eagerly waiting for you to continue.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

fab banners superb cs! Collide is back 😃 hmm the previous version wasn't that bad! terrific update! brilliantly written! Geet's car breakdown! Maan offers her a ride 2 college! Maan mesmerized by her! she is gng out wid his bro! Meera gng 2 tutor Vicky! Maan looks at Geet! Meera confronts him! Geet suspicious of Vicky! Pari n Geet talk abt Vicky! Geet warns Vicky! update soon

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wait! Maan already seems to have some hots for Geet? Am I simply reading too much between the lines or did he really behaved as if she is some star who happen to bless him by accepting his offer of a lift to college?

I'd thought Geet is genuinely concerned about Vicky cheating on her. She wanted to break up but instead she ended up doing the exact opposite. And from Pari's comment it looks like Geet is the one using him for her distractions. Also I'm surprised to know they're together for 3 years. But it's obvious there is just attraction and not love.

Jake is the one I've loved in previous Collide a lot. His protective instincts towards Geet are strong.

Looking forward to read this one.

Also best wishes for the new version. Hope you feel happy with the outcome.

-Sanjana!

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

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Looking forward to read the revised version. Maan taking an interest in Geet even though she is his brothers gf as of now. Geet wanting to breakoff with Vicky but still hesitating.