Re-Written FF||Collide||Chapter 8 Pg 21||4th February||

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Another version o collide :I

Though Im liking it as it's more detailed n has some maans POV but I had no problem with previous one :I

Well geets name is different here :P

Geet Myra Desai :V

Well geet hands had an authority n bold type thing :P

But like this new name different than others :D

N pari geet same as usual closest friends :D

Vicky n geet still together n geet couldn't broke up :P

But soon it's gonna happen. :P

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Part 1 - Nice start. So geet is with Vicky who goes behind the girls who flirts with him. But geet want loyal & honest boyfriend. Glad that we have maan's pov in this version. Maan seemed little attracted towards her, even when he knows that his brother & she were dating. Meera told him that she has to teach Vicky. Geet decided to break up with Vicky but could not do and trusted him.

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 16

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

I see the characters hold a little bit of the hardcore personas still and Maan being the distant one but still there. Meera and Geet i feel will butt heads maybe. Vicky is protective of Geet. Her father seems like a strict but loving one!

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Woww new version of Collied 😃

Chapter -1

Aaahaan looks like maan have hots for his brothers girlfriend 😛

Liked kate, jake, pari's friendship with geet and jake's protectiveness towards geet ..

Well hope vicky isnt cheating on geet but if its happening im sure like geet threatened to pummel him ..she'll is fully capable of doing it ..

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

nice update..
waiting for next update..

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

its good part

with all pov's

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

m just wow...

so much exiting to read it again...

loved it...

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

interesting update with lil info of characters...

as usual geet had a strick father...

pari n geets bonding is very well...

viky is very protect to her...

maan is not aloof as well but he maintane a distance...

rest r best...

waiting for nxt...

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Superb update !!

Hehe sid is bit strict here from previous story ..like literally washing mouth with soap becoz geet sweared ..😆

jake-kate disturbed by his grandma & then her lecture was hilarious ..😆

waiting for strip event for charity 😉