Re-Written FF||Collide||Chapter 8 Pg 21||4th February||

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

part-4
oops m i dreaming or did geet really brokeup with vicky n that too soo coolly :o
ahh meera looks more happy knowing that geet n vicky brokeup..loll.
maan writting sumthing inspired by geets painting..m loving it

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

part-5
ahh loved maaneet's convo soo chilled out n cool..loved maan's new name mr. miserable..too gud
loved the fact that geet still believes that vicky is her best frnd..
loved the update

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

part-6
superb one..loved the way maan recorded vicky's dance n played infront of all..loll that was super funny..m loving geets dad he is strict yet soo caring n understanding..something from past is haunting geet wondering what is it??
too gud

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

oops dave's plan flopped n mman didnt even gave a look to pari..loved sid n mia's bonding..too gud...maara is falling for vicky wondering what feelings do vicky hold for meera..maan denied meera's views abt him liking geet..the update was fab

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

part-8
ahh this update seems a bit emotional..
loved the part how geets dad gave her warnings abt wht not to do..loll that was hillarious too gud..geets song was emotional n heartouching n it made her dad soo proud of his daughter..loved it

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

nice geet performing in funtion sid also go there secretly to watch her perfirming meera rejected maan idea to bid for vicky she cant bear the heart break geet sing beautiful she got a big applause her dad is emotional to saw her daughter singing that song geet starting taking intesrt on her mom hobbies paiting n singing nice story is superb contine soon

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

chapter 2

I don't remember the older version of this ff.so I don't know how maan and vicky father was.. that maan is avoiding everything he used to do.. and I'm sure he is nothing like his father.. he is instead of enjoying is working so that vicky can enjoy..

one thing I noticed that both geet and Vicky defend each other..like in this one vikcy didn't liked meera judging geet without knowning her.. before bf he is geet best friend .. <3

awesome update

loved it

Edited by Kawan - 8 years ago

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

A hint of Pari's future profession

She'll definitely rock on that :v

Geet sang for the 1st time :)

Sid is correct her mother took their hearts with her :(

Well Dave is funny :P

32 years n claims him as kid :P

Thn others have just born ;)

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

fantastic emotional update! superbly written! Sid is cool n strict dad! Dads will also protect their princesses! Sid n Mia have a chat! hmm will there something between Sid n Mia in the future??? Dave is hilarious! Mia is a sweet person! Hmm Pari into designing! she seems 2 b immensely talented! Meera fears heartbreak! Geet sang n blew everyone away esp Sid! she pretends to b strong n she is really emotional! he sees her performance secretly! Geet sang 4 mothers - so touching! Sophia took all the happiness away wen she left! update soon👏⭐️😊

Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago