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Sowmiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Thanks for the update

Will be waiting for the next update

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

superb update

pari is aiming maan where as geet new boy

and meera is affect by vicky and behaving strangly with himits worried him

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

All the characters are so real as if you have friends in your college and are involved with each other's lives and day to day happenings and watching each other's back, yet they do not interfere with their personal lives...they know how to give breathing space to one another. It would have broken my heart if Maan would have given Pari importance while dropping but he was so aloof...I kind of liked that...I think he has a soft corner for Geet as suggested by Meera and Maans conversation, interesting part to know about Aryan, Mia Maan and Vicky...very interest and intriguing story...love your way of writing these stories everyone is so different from each other...

Thnx

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InkedImagination

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Oh that was a beautiful update and the heart wrenching poetry by Geet was so nice...loved every word of it and could feel her silent cry of loneliness and melancholy...she puts up a very brave from but is really a very soft sentimental girl from her heart...she is just looking for someone to love her and be with her and reciprocate her love just as she loved her mom and does not want that person to ever leave her and go away...only her dad could see her real tears and emotions...

Thnx

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Part 1

It is nice starting. Geet's car broke in the middle of road and by chance maan was going from there. He offered her lift but she was kind of ignoring him. Eventually she agreed as she was getting late for her class. Why was maan watching geet and thinking about her. Is he having feelings for her. Finally geet said thanks and left from there. So meera and maan are friends. She also noticed how every time he watches at geet. So vicky is geet's boyfriend. Geet doesn't like his habit of flirting with every girl. She told pari that he will break up with him but again she couldn't do. Why pari said to geet to not to use vicky to distract herself.

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Part 2

Nice part. Geet and her father, their bonding is great. He is strict but friendly too. Geet gets pissed off soon. Omg i am shocked reading that once geet's father put soap in her mouth to make her stop speaking swears.

So finally meera started to give tuition to vicky. Geet warned meera to not to flirt with vicky which made meera grumpy. She spoke something about geet which is not liked by vicky. He warned her not to speak against her as she knows nothing about her.

Mia wants vicky to concentrate on study. He loves basket ball and wants to make his career on this field but maan suggested him to get graduate so that if it wouldn't work for him then he will have some back up plan to make his career. N seems like it went into his head.

All friends of geet and she herself is here in mia's cafe. Pari seems to have crush on maan.

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loveguruDD

@loveguruDD

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Amazing story

I completed reading it and loved it

Really different from the previous one

Geets character is so much fun and crazy

Geets dad is nice

He shows that he is tough but he loves his daughter

Maan n vickys dad is back and their mom is now tensed

Eager to know what will happen when the brothers will get to know that

Meera is falling for vicky

And geet brokeup with vicky

After all its maan who will be with geet

Eager to read what will happen next

Continue soon

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Part 3

Great part So finally all started their preparation for their performance. Vicky is interested in only his basket ball otherwise everything annoys him. Omg meera started to like vicky. Maan was shocked hearing this. He warned her to not to think about him as Geet will not take it easily. Meera told maan that it is just her crush. But I am sure it is going to be something more.

I felt bad for pari. Her father was really insensitive. Her complains matters nothing to them. She left from there as she knew they can not understand her neither she.

I must say geet is very talented. She can sing and also can paint. She is at maan's place as her home brings only hurtful memories for her. maan saw her painting and was impressed seeing that as it was depicting dreams and all.

Pari was at geet's place. Geet consoled her by saying soothing words. Vicky and sid were shocked seeing geet and pari's position and when they both realized they burst out laughing

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#140

Part 4

So geet broke up with vicky. Yup we could see they are not loves but just friends, very good friends. Though vicky was little sad but I am sure he will be fine soon. Meera was pleased hearing this news. She shared this news with maan too who was also surprised. Maan is writing a book.

Kate and jack was doing argument when geet and Pari entered in their apartment. Geet told kate that she was the one who was hugging jack. Are pari and danial together.

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