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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

through thee eyes

Fantastic OS! well written! Geet new in the city! she speaks 2 Maan! she js sees him n starts 2 chat! Maan is a lawyer! he takes her around the city n shows her the place!

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

remember me
beautiful os . rishab married geet when he loves madhu just becoz she is mangalik ..this is ridiculous . I seriously wanted to slap him hard .
thank god he realized his mistake before its too late . maan told a story to them ...maanveer and geetakshi's love story . which is beautiful . geet was geetakshi in previous birth and maan was maanveer . maanveer finally fulfilled his promise ..he found his geetakshi aka geet ❤️

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

carpie diem
awesome one shot . I loved maaneet's moments in it . both met only one day before but they mingled so beautifully that it seems like they know each other forever . though geet was little hesitant before but maan make her comfortable with him . both went for diving and it was a out of the world experience for geet .
but every good things come to an end so ...geet's journey also :( but no worries both have exchanged their numbers so m sure very soon they r going to meet again 😉

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

finally read all os and all are awesomely beautiful ❤️ . the writers did a fabulous job 👍🏼 its difficult to choose one ..because I really liked 3 os the most ...but we have to choose only one :( so my vote goes to "captured through the viewfinder" 😊

Edited by sagorika93 - 9 years ago

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

captured through viewfinder wins my heart and vote

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Read all stories all are wonderful stories..but my vote goes to See Through The Viewfinder...

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

thanks for posting

all stories are beautiful

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Hopeless

@hope_less

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Carpe Diem... very close to reality. simple and something that we can totally imagine happening in our lives.
nothing flashy or cliche. meeting a stranger to becoming friends and talking simple, that is a regular in everyone's lives.

"Oh yeah what about the whole Carpe Diem thing? You read about it but have you tried to follow it ever? If you dont have a personal life have you thought of quitting and just doing what you like. Living the moment where you don't have any worries about office, project, client and what not. Geet learn to live your moments. These small moments only go on to make your life meaningful. Living like a robot is not living it's more like slavery. So stop being a slave and start living"👏👏👏👏

Miss Writer, I hope am able to start following these words! You pressed the right nerves😆