||Bon Voyage OS Competition|| Results : P 16 - Page 10

There were all beautiful stories and amazingly told, each and everyone of them spoke of the sheer excellence and the magnitude of the writer's capability. If I could I'd choose more but unfortunately i cant. Some of the OSs would definitely live on with me for a few more months/years or life. Needless to say i loved reading them and wonderful competition

But my vote goes to Through the viewfinder

It captured a bit of my heart is all i can say, beautifully told and amazingly conceptualised.

Thank you to all the writers and specifically Veil for letting the romantic in me to roam free from Italy to parts of India.

(ok now i can rest, le dones 😆)

Through the viewfinder is an amazing os...I just loved this simple love story...It's so pure and magical...and the confession part was amazing...The whole os has many such scenes which will always be etched in my memory for a long time...

Loved the stories.

The Chef's Special

the snow clad mountains..the alpine trees..the train journey through the amazing nature..and Geet traveling alone with a handsome stranger..that's perfectly entrancing setting.

although it was not difficult to guess the stranger as Maan, her husband, I liked the flirty act played by him to woo his wife and have her talk to take out the frustration..

and I loved their conversation that had been cleverly put up along with the humor throughout..specially the one where Maan was trying to stop her from getting down at wrong station as he assumed and accidentally getting a slap in return..😆
and also the Maan and Geet in it, they were a delicious combination of sweet creamy mascarpone dessert and a spicy, tangy spaghetti pasta..

loved and enjoyed the recipe :)

Captured through the Viewfinder

it is a beautiful story..the picturesque outset alone was sufficient to capture the heart.
Geet considered herself inferior in looks, while Maan has a sight to look beyond the exterior..

her description through his eyes was charmingly beautiful..
the temple part..the jasmine flowers..him lifting her up to get her wish fulfilled, she never left his mind since their first meeting and he had his complete focus on her.

loved Geet's subtle emotions and reactions including her running away, they were most natural given the background she had..finally she decided to embrace the happiness and not just once, but with him she will feel like an exotic bird for the lifetime..