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Posted: 7 years ago

TERI MERI - ABBY 12

This story brought tears to my eyes right from the introduction of Geet till the end...It was such an emotional journey for me reading it...Until now I have not gotten over the emotional turmoil that it has brought deep within my heart...An innocent child had to bear so much from such a tender age...from the man the world called her father...a coward who could not recognise his own failure as a human being, a husband, a father and a businessman...who blamed the innocent angel for all of his own failures & loss...a heartless monster who threw a helpless innocent baby to such disgusting people in the name of a lie...that she can meet her mum...how she blindly trusted that monster and went with those unknown disgusting people...only to be betrayed...How she ran & ran asking for help...only to be turned away by a child Maan...How much she tried to run away so many times in search of her BJ...And one fine day God helped her finally escape when those evil people were planning to sell her off...Such people who indulge in such things should be burned alive including Geet's father...And luckily God gave her an elderly couple who adopted her as their own daughter...For once she savoured some happy years and moments in her life...Until a cruel accident took the life of her adopted parents and she was once again stranded alone defenseless in life...And to save herself from some vile disgusting men she ran to save her life and landed herself in such an isolated world to live...With nothing on her...With nobody to even talk to...Away from the cruel world which only gave her pain...

Destiny once again brought Maan face to face with Geet...but he never knew she was that little girl he had turned away on that day...and till today suffered from nightmares calling out to her...How selflessly Geet saved Maan's life and that drew him to her with all of his soul with such love and strength...Geet couldn't stop herself from falling in love with him as much as she knew that she would not fit in to the current material world...she tried her best to push him away...But God has his plans...The way she broke down after telling him never ever to come look for her again...if not she will leave this place and he would never be able to find her...it broke me down too...And the way she tried to come into the city to return him his wallet but the way she got looked at and treated by every single person tore my heart and I totally broke down...How she saw her BJ & yearned to run to him...but stayed away from him...only his happiness mattered to her and she was not sure how he would react seeing her in such a state too...so she thought it best to leave him to his happy life...How she was manhandled by the security who told her that Maan asked them to get rid of her...Geet was so broken that her hero could hate her so much to do that...But didn't know it was his baby...Thank god he came there on time & managed to save his baby at that juncture...

I loved the way Maan understood his baby so much from the little of her past that she told him of...He could not bear all that she had been through...and how he vowed to make her his princess...giving her all the happiness in the world...How the great MSK snuck away from his world to a world of their own...away from the prying eyes of the whole world...how much they missed each other so so much after his absence being away for his work trip abroad...gosh...the way Geet tried to surprise him by wearing the saree & accessories her got for her...and came all the way to see him...only to realise that its his birthday and got turned away as she didn't have an invitation...how she helped Dadima with her sprained foot and Dadima liked her so much...Thanks to Dadima bringing her in she got to meet her hero finally and how much they missed each other yaar...so sweet...and Maan got the best birthday present in his life...Their passionate encounter which leaves Geet baffled and confused that she runs away...And thanks to Annie emotionally blackmailing BJ using her Dora a.k.a. Geet...BJ was on the way to Maan's birthday when he finally found his long lost sister Dora a.k.a. Geet...while Geet was on her way back to her lonely world...

Geet's life changes once she is back with BJ and Annie and she tries to find a way inform her hero of where she is...Maan was frantic when he didn't find her for a few days...He mistakes the scene where he sees his baby with BJ...and when his detectives bring her to his farmhouse he learns the whole truth...so happy he is and he understands her so perfectly...that her lonely private world is only for their knowledge not anyone else...not BJ or Annie...Finally Annie and Dadima discover that Maan & Geet are in love...So cute na...the way Annie captured everything and Dadima broke the truth with evidence to the great MSK...That was so fun to see...And their journey to marriage begins...But then when Maan learns the real identity of his Geet...being that little baby girl who had asked him for help and how he turned her away...he could not stop blaming himself for the way her life had turned out...and this guilt he could not handle that he leaves the engagement...which deals a big blow to Geet...who feels betrayed once again by this humanly world...Maan then goes in search of his baby...to explain and convince her to come back...how much she loves him...but that pain of being stranded and left alone by people whom she considers her loved ones is something that was so deeply entrenched in her...and what he did to make her secure in his love...their marriage in private but legal...but as fate had it...that evil monster came back again with crocodile tears to end her life in order to get his son back...Once again betrayal, loss and pain entered his baby who was on the verge of dying...But Maan never gave up...he brought her to their own private world away from everyone...a remote world where she had lived in peace...although she was in coma Maan never gave up on their love and fought every single day to bring his baby back...And he did after a long battle of 9 months...

I am still reeling in the emotions of this story as I write this comment. Hats off Abby12 for such a deeply emotional and heartwrenching tale of Maaneet. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. Although I was in tears from the beginning of the story...I am in love with it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
protecter a really brautiful story 😊
by rose superb creation
geet a rockstar n a schyco fan want to kill her n maan
id appointed as her peraonal bodyguard to protect her
but at last mystry reaveld that its mu gungan is nt a killer feeling bad fot him poor him hw hr saved her nice story
thnks fr pw preety di
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sagorika93

many many congrats for ur upcoming new life ..
lots of love and best wishes from my side .❤️
be happy always 😊


thank you so much dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ek anjana chehra jo bangaya Zindagi
What an beautiful story with all the positivity
Loved how maan fell for geet at first sight 😳
He would come to park only to have a glimpse of her
And our cute geet how she would listen him playing the guitar and trying to see his face and always fails
Gradually both become friends and maan makes her fall for him by his gestures
Even though she loves him she was afraid to accept her feelings thinking that she would loose her friend
Liked naintara , dev , Yash , Meera and our geet's bond
Even geet's parents are so open minded and love their kids , always want them to be happy
Our Dadi is as always cute , funny and such an matured lady , I always admired her for what she is
Also the way story flows where maaneet are friends also maan's younger brother dev is a also friend and senior to geet , where he is unaware about maaneet's friendship this is awesome
And finally when dev gets to know the truth is so funny 😆
Poor guy got the shock of his life
Finally all the couples get married and lives happily
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful story 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
INNOCENT LOVE by tellyme

Maan married to 10 year younger Geet...
Maan was against this marriage and feels guilty for betraying Sam whom he had promised of marrying...
While Geet is madly in love with him...
Both went to London after marriage...
Yash & Meera are nice to her...
Sam always plotting to seperate them...
Geet irritating Maan with her child-like antics...
But soon Maan gets accustomed to it and all this becomes a part of his life...
That evil Sam tries to seduce Maan but he somehow escape 😆
Slowly maaneet started coming close...
Shouting on geet maan left on tour without talking to her...
But later realizes his folly and came back only to get to know that Geet is in India...
Not able to bear the distance he too goes India and soon both rekindle...
Coming back to London they become one...
But soon Maan realises that its affecting her studies...
So he left her for her own good till she gets matured...
But when he return back things have changed...
His family is angry with him and the shock came when he gets to know that he has a sweet little baby girl Maanya...
And then they live happily everafter 😊


Edited by _CrystalFlames_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Love make life beautiful
People are meant to be... how ever things may change and how many obstacle come... there always end up to gather..
Many FFs read ..we still want... maneet one...which ever color they are represented... how many shades they give... this us... like fate.. we b8nd then to gather with us...
Maan went thru all the face... to recognize the feel ,the want ...
But my evil side want maan to suffer little more getting the peace of having the love with him...
Geet was strong... would say getting strength from obviously maan...
Always love Dadi "The match maker"...
The villain were could the situations... which was indeed created by maan himself... but said... where the thrill when everything if get easily ...
Thanks for sharing..
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Posted: 7 years ago

A Girl Who Was Born On 15th October (MayaMaan)

A very touching and beautiful tale...of Maan who found his true love in Geet only to lose her...Geet who found true love but had to fight her fate to survive...But in all this their love symbol was born unknown to Maan who was relentlessly searching for Geet, never giving up...Unknown to him, Geet knew he was looking for her but stayed away as she didn't know what destiny has written in her fate and she wanted his happiness...but she never hid the fact from her doting father nor her angelic daughter...Fate has its own strange ways of working things out...when Maan finally returns he is led to his daughter in a sweet encounter and they start chatting...the chat which eventually leads to Maan finding out every single detail about Geet, his daughter and why Geet was running away...she was preparing to face her death...

I loved the way Maan & Zeena bonded as father & daughter...Zeena is a true blue adorable MSK junior. And am so so happy that Dadima & Dev so wholeheartedly, unconditionally loved Zeena and supported Maan in every way possible...Maan celebrates Geet's birthdays in her remembrance hoping that one day she will come back...which she does fully cured as all she did was to fight her illness with her might so that she could live her dream life with her heart and heartbeat...Maan & Zeena. Loved the story so much & it got me so emotional especially the father & daughter bonding between Maan & Zeena.

Thank you for such a beautiful & emotional story.

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Posted: 7 years ago
MIST 2 :
loved this season 2 mist also tgere is lot of similarities yet various variations in tge story. In season 1 geet is bold and mature. In this geet is naive girl.
Loved geet character to tge core. She is the best. Maan a buisiness tycoon who lost his love unable to accept geet . Later he fells for geet. And understand each other.
This Dev is dumb. Hate Naintara and SAM. They both dont have any humanity. Geet saves dev from Naintara.
Meera entry made dev life better.
Loved the whole story loved maaneet love story from thw begining to end. Begining i got angry on maan for behaving rudely with his wife later he changed alot and i love passionate maan 😉
Loved the story thank you for the password.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Bandhan saath ...
Awesome ff ..
Geet s the princess in her family and every one loves her so much ... Loved sujal character he s very possessive bro of geet and loves geet so much ... Maan hate his father and step mom ... He s strict and hard person but loves his beloved one so much ...
Dadima wanna to get maan marry and searching for girl ... Dadima going to meet geet family and maaneet r speaking and geet s very nervous ... Both accept with each other and maaneet marriage got fixed ...
Geet s very crazy and prankster ... Maan s falling for geet ..aniee does not love maan and after geet came in km ... Km s filled with color and laughter's ... Geet s missing her family so much.. Aniee hurted geet and crying ... Maan s consoling her and aniee s getting jealous ...
Aniee s pregnant and geet s being support to her ... Aniee s changing herself and all her family supportive to aniee in her cruel state ... Arjun fallen for aniee and accepted with her past ... Yash s always fear sujal ... Geets pregnant and all r happy ... Maan s taking gud care of her and blessed with babies ...
Thank u pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
You Complete Me

A very heart touching FF. I really didnt want this to end..
It was so very well written that whenever maan and geet were close i was literally praying not to separate them
Naintara is always as cruel as possible.. It was a bit better when Dev really wanted to keep naintara away from maaneet..
Maan always stood as a pillar for geet and never left her side..
we really got see a different version of daadi, a strong, patient and heartwarming person...
As always all is well that ends well..
Truly beautiful story written by Soumya..
Awesome writing!!! 😊

Sandhya Khurana



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