Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16 - Page 83

hiii
plz dont end here this story😭😭
i want sequal for this ff😃😃

Part - 34

Wow lovely emotional update..te way my maaneet sharing they pain holding each other was lovely..te way my maan started to narrate his past to his geet thinking he can heal his wounds..i love te update yar

Part - 35

Wow lovely update..te way my maan opening his heart and te way geet listening to him like soothing his burning soul was lovely..opps te way tara confessing her love even though its his past but geet was jealous was lovely..i love te update yar

Part - 36

Wow lovely cute update..te way my maan saying abt his life which turned upside down after geet's entry and how they destinty made them one, maan know his possessive wife and her gussa and his words which made her feel special was lovely..te way my naughty maan teasing his geet and they new life begins..i love te update yar

Part - 37

Wow lovely emotional update..te way geet searching my maan and seeing him te way he sitting in his ghar she realize te value of tis place and te way her anger on rathods for cheating him..omg my maan ki anger but it was for tat rathods who made him fool..i love te update yar

Last part

Wow lovely emotional beautiful wow update..my maan ki pov was lovely and he rush to rathods to show them they place and te way my maan threatening giving them so many shocks was lovely..opps geet ki pov and her worry abt my maan but both know they cant live without each other..te way my maan drinking his geet's complaining lips was lovely..te way geet's one word made my maan to lose his control and mark his geet as his..te way my maan claiming his geet as his precious possession and geet to felt so special was lsovely..te way my maaneet became one in every sense and they complete each other was lovely beautiful..i love te update so much yar

Epi

I don't why u end tis in tis way..i cant comment too yar..my heart is clenching..very painful end

Te way my maaneet journey started with hate but end in divine love but in a painful way..i love it..

Ohho what is this

i never like sad endings
in here its very unexpected and unreal ending!

I loved the story up until I read the last part. I understand iits your story & thats probably how you planned. I should have struck to your warning and not read the epilogue. Anyways it's too late now. I actually typed in a negative review. But since you mentioned that you do not want negative review, I had to rewrite the comment. It was a brilliant concept though. It was interesting. Kept me hooked till the end. I'd be Happy iif you've planned a sequel and all the loopholes can. Be taken care off!! Especially for all those who read the epulouge ignoring the warnings that you gave us (that includes me as well 😳.