Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#801

Good story and good ending...but am totally confused about the epilogue...I did read your note about it not being a happy one and I am completely ok with that...its just that...what kind of a dream did maan's father have that geet would not let that come true...In this world everyone has dreams, but they do not abandon people whom they love for that...this partner is there with them through thick and thin and in troubles to make those dreams come true...so that is the part which confused me...also did he manage to return meet's money to her...

otherwise excellent story...i was just trying to understand the ending that is all..i am ok with it otherwise

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SHAJADHA

@SHAJADHA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#802

Awesome update

Happy to know that geet died

Having confusion, is maan ever know that geet has been died

interested for the second season of this story

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#803

abba...i want a sequl dear...ofcourse maan has left without explanation..i mean common if he was to leave her y hee would try to cook nd put or say to leave it tto burn... he had promised her... something went pakka wrong btwn d time geet woke nd maan missing
seems something fishy..
okay the title says longing...
bt us longing ka kahi toh ek stop hoga..
am waiting for answer...

last part..good he did wat to dat rathod.. loved maneet moments nd der promise...
am already waiting..for its sequl

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Sneha

@neasya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#804

loved the story a lot dear...
but it has sad ending...
as much as I hate sad endings but it is also true that each and every story will not have happy ending...
but I loved your story

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sss333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#805

everything awesome except the end.that doesn't mean I can't accept sad ending.but some thing missing.

I can't justify maan"s act.

and poor geet died bcos of maan.

he consummated the marriage later says I'm not deserve u.we are mismatch.it makes me feel maan is selfish person.

my aim is not hurt the writer.

I feel something missing to understand maan's act.

Poor geet.she died. is she deserved to be die in the end? really felt bad for her.

I hope I will get all the answers in sequel 2 of longing.

awaiting for ur update season 2 dear.

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#806

I didn't liked the ending...something is amiss in the story...not satisfied

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priyasree

@priyasree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#807

Thanks for this wonderful story

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#808

Never thot dat this will end like this
i wish to read another season this story where maan come back to his geet..

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umaa

@uluvmg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#809

oh Last Part... awesome update(sorry Late comment)...nice to threaten Rathod for his property, Romantic SR.. sad to leave Geet for his dream...love to read 2nd part(season)...if possible Jr MSK/Geet's childhood/teenage story...thanks for pm..!!

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#810

nice & hot update .
maan Mr.rathod se apna paisa wapas le liya ..because he want to return back to geet .
geet was so worried for maan ..after seeing maan it was like uske jaan mei jaan aayi .
loved maaneet's Union ..

I m sorry dear but I didn't like the epilogue ..its not because that I don't like sad endings ..
I didn't like it because u left too many questions unanswered . anyways I m sorry if I hurt u :(
thanx for the pm :)

Edited by sagorika93 - 9 years ago

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