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Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#831

achcha hua jo sab khatam ho gaya last mein...

I am sorry I read ur this story...

I will never read any stories of urs from now...

hadd hai kisi story ka koi matlab hota hai...what was it...a joke...

you made a joke of readers feelings and then you demand that you don't want negative reviews...

wow...what a joke...hell with ur story...

thanx...

Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 8 years ago

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

achcha hua jo sab khatam ho gaya last mein...

I am sorry I read ur this story...

I will never read any stories of urs from now...

hadd hai kisi story ka koi matlab hota hai...what was it...a joke...

you made a joke of readers feelings and then you demand that you don't want negative reviews...

wow...what a joke...hell with ur story...

thanx...

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#833

hi dear read ur stiry all parys in one go ifs superb but its end so confusing wy in end maan suddenly left geet if he luv her that much if he going to leave her wy he came back in her life geet died its i dont know wat say its confues with ending plz dear gave ita sequel n clear the confusion hope u will contine with this plz think on this request

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#834

i read for the first time ny of ur story...read all the parts together in one go n now 3.45 am n got surprised a tragic ending which i didnt expect...now it seem it would b better that there would not b ny epilogue...i even dint know if there ny sequal of this story...they deserved each other...maan could fulfil his fathers dream with keeping contactvwith her...she suffered a lot n he also...they didnt deserve this...tara deserved moore punishment..feeling too mch sad...nywy beautiful story