MG New OS : Pyaar ka Rang - Page 3

Originally posted by: pop77

Happy Holi !!!
Nice OS..Maan & geet grown up together..They love each other..Maan flop her plan to change balloon.


DO you going to write next part?

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Happy Holi once again!😃 Thanks 4 da wonderful surprise OS! 😊u shld write more OS! stupendous fantastic OS! ⭐️beautifully written! 👏Love hw it started with Maan n Geet as children n dadi telling them abt the Holi and the significance! Little Maan n Geet r so cute! Maan always put colours on Geet first while she was asleep! Geet annoyed! She takes her revenge! Seventeen years ahead, Geet is talking her friend Sonia abt wt she is gng 2 do 2 Maan! she helps Geet make the Holi stuff which is especially 4 Maan! Geet cribs 2 her babaji then she has 2 get ready in the night as Maan always manages 2 colour her in the morning. Maan successful once again n Geet failed 2 execute her plan. Geet upset! Geet goes to the Khuranas n greets everyone bt avoids Maan! she is deliberately dng this 2 confuse Maan! he is waiting 4 her to take revenge! Maan pulls Geet! he changed her balloon! Geet annoyed! Maan will nt let anything harm her! so sweet! she teases n taunts him! She says he is secretly romancing her for the past 5 years n is scared 2 do so b4 everyone! Maan pulls her in front of everyone n kisses her! he reveals he spoke 2 dadi n his parents abt them n they will speak 2 her parents! he goes n leaves and Geet shocked! ahh can we have another part! It seems incomplete! 👏👏😊

Originally posted by: sagorika93

fabulous one shot dear ..
thanx for telling us the holi story through the os .
noughty geet planned a special holi surprise for maan but maan is more smart than her 😉 so he made a little change in her plan 😆
maan already talked with his parents about his n geet's relationship and they are ready to get them married ..aww ..

Originally posted by: meravigiliso

Wish u happy holi .pyaar ka rang bahut hi sundar tha and uski rangat hamare chehre Mein bhi aa Gaye ...

Originally posted by: libros

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Thanks I'm glad you liked it and the Holi story part... hope it didnt feel like a mythology overload...</font>

Originally posted by: sagorika93

not at all dear ..u wrote it very beautifully

Originally posted by: libros

Hey...thanks... I'm glad you likes it...and didn't feel a mytho overload😆...

Abhi its a tradition na Maan beating Geet in the Holi war😆😉... but every person has his day...who knows maybe next year Geet wins🤣

Another part😲 I havent planned on a part 2 for it... the main motive of the OS was to bring the story of holi and how the festival is celebrated