MG New OS : Pyaar ka Rang - Page 5

Originally posted by: taahir004

Superb , Amazing Just Fabulous

Thanks for the dedication I'm honoured 😆

I really loved the story Daadi told Maan and Geet it was so Intriguing

thank you for that

Geet mischievous and always planning her attacks but yeah she certainly cannot

out smart Maan he sneaks into her room every year while she is sleeping wow that is simply awesome and sprays with colour that has to be so much of fun

I'm going to try that with my friends waking them up this Easter weekend just how Maan does it

both Maan and Geet in love and she complaints they have been dating for five years but he is too

scared to show the families and wham he pulls her out from behind the tree and kisses her in front of all now that was daring and awesome

Shivi I really enjoyed this OS it was so Beautiful it held Mischievousness , Fun , Family Moments

Love

Thank You Friend !!!!!

Originally posted by: sophiexx

ofcourse you don't (bite), but your cheesy lines do 😉 but i do love them ❤️
kids throwing slippers 😲 tantrum queens aren't they? 😆 mind you my nephew (cutey) throws his toys around then again his barely 2 😉😆 and hits his mum when his super angry kids these days, quite the stuff i don't even know the T of temper 😉😆😆

great then that makes one person that loves my goofy mood 😳 Congrats your the 1st in the world whole 👏

sorry i hadnt realised, i assumed Hollika to be a little kid just abiding by her father didn't realise that she wanted to kill her baby brother just coz her father told her so

Originally posted by: sophiexx

pyaar ka rang - take 2

since i was busy talking to you and Dona, i kinda left the story in between SOS
ok so the bad king died his deserved death and the young Maan and Geet are so cute, just like inquisitive kids, childhood has so much innocence, i miss my childhood days 😭😭😭 boy was i crazy i'll wish upon anything be it a lash or a dandelion (a weed with white fur like specks), it is believed that if you wish on it all your wishes come true. Ofcourse its a lie, neither i'm a princess (even if my name says i am), nor a witch (a good one ofc) and nor do i have a genie 😆 its all lies but i still wish on it, crazy crazy me

so Geets proper sorted this year, she has a plan and has started acting already, hmm nice one 😃 water balloons, man they hurt we have water fight, well we used to at the end of each year in highschool. i remember everyone usedd to get out of the classroom to fill ballons, guns, pistols with water reday to attack, it was a load of fun, by the time i'm home i'm soaking wet. But the worst bit was this guy (my worst enemy and first target), stupid boy really used to wait by his window with a bucket load of water and then he'll splash it on me and my friends when we walkedd past his home, its one of those terraced houses. as mush as i hated him, i still miss the school days thanks for helping me relive those days 😃

Maan as usual attacked her first, poor Geet and i likedd her plan to annoy Maan which obv worked since he was riled up, but i liked his sweet gesture when attacking her with teh water balloons. So unfair that Maan outsmarted Geet but o well i'm sure this holi tradition will keeping running and one day Geet would WIN.

So their dating without the family knowing and Geet's kinda challenged him to make it public, uff yeh maan bhi na i suppose Geet didnt expect that poor Geet blushing harder than the red paint 😆

well atleast Maan's making it official, so shall i keep waiting for their happening wedding or not 😉

awesome story now thanks to you i know about Holi. I always through it was about fun and maybe spring. I wanted to ask you whats the other guy with ten heads you burn then, they showed it in Jazbaa and Geet also mentioned in Geet, Ravan right. is that part of Holi also?

thank you shivi

Originally posted by: libros

Kids and their temper tantrums these days... tell me about it... my nephew fell down all by himself and i just helped him get up and he got so angry..started hitting me for helping him off the ground.. then started crying when i wouldnt let him hit me...

i feel like we would've been angels in comparison to them... then again I like to see myself as a cute adorable baby😆😆

Oh no no ... im sure there would be many who like your goofy mood😉

No no Holika is not prahald's sister she is the evil king's sister... she was willing killing her nephew..

your nephew sounds cool, let me just join your crew since i know my baby will be the same he already throws a fuss if we call him cute, his like NO YOU CUTE 😆😆😆 but my nephew's the life of the house, i miss him shooo much 😭😭😭😭😭 ok enuf of da melodrama 😉😆 defo i was an angel man, i was cute i've got pictures to prove it 😉😆, but yes i would have loved to spoil myself rotten, although i think i'm already at that stage 🤣

sorry so Hollika is teh aunty, so yes defo evil sorry i had assumed she was the little boys 😳

Originally posted by: libros

Well the way we were going on about food like starved humans...i was surprised you even found the time to read the amount you did😉

Yeah well the evil king's immortality boon and the way around it to kill him is my favorite part of the story... death and destruction all the way😆😆

Ah me too...wanna go back to being a child... well we have similar superstitions about the wishes... you could wish upon an eyelash or on a post-office truck by cross your fingers while wishing when you see one and uncrossing your fingers when you see a black car... or you could wish upon a train when you stand beneath a railway bridge and the train passes by... the wishing upon a dandelion is a new one for me... i probably ought to try it😆 ... you know if you're crazy to wish on them I'm the same... every time i get an opportunity i wish upon them😉...

Oh well.. I wasnt much of a water balloon person...but more of a water guns and buckets and a tank person.. I'm one of those who could be found sitting in the colored water tank😆

I threw buckets full of water (colored or just plain old water) at people but it was an eye to eye attack😆 no cowards way out of hiding and attacking... me too miss my school days like hell they were simply awesome... I glad i could make to relive those days so that you could enjoy it all over again😃

Oh yes... I'm all with you the girl team has to win one of these days... so Im rooting for Geet... you go girl we have a hunk to take down🤣

well the blush had to win... thats the only way i could justify the title😛😳 its color of love not that of Holi😆

no no Im not writing about their wedding... it was supposed to be a one shot... i dont have the time to write more abhi... only 6 days of writing before i give it a rest...

Oh no no Raavan burning is another good over evil story.. thats celebrated as Dussera..falls 20days before Diwali...

🤗 thank you sophie for you comment... my best on this one till now... i loved the discussion on it🤗

i dont know about death and destruction, but i do love a good action movie 😃 not the gruesome kind and defo not horror/thriller, i'm too screamy for that 😆

wishing, o we can wish on anything and everything really. the postman van and the train thing is new for me, next time i'll try it. You never know i might just get the three wishes like genie 😉

water balloons i dont mind as long i'm not at the recieving end but a bottle is the best, easy to fill and easy to throw on victims 😉 ofcourse GIRL has to WIN like always
and you've done justice to the title but the blush ofcourse filled the rang part 😆 and no wedding but its your choice no worries 😉 6 days matlab 😕

ahh diwali i know that, no not the story but the fact that SRK always releases a film then 😆😆

your most welcome, i loved your reply by far the best reply i've ever gotton 😆

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

nice os...pyaar ke rang

main jab chioti thi meri ek neighbour friend thi...main bahut naughty thi...aur har baar holi ke din maan ki tarha hi main usse rang lagati thi...abhi yeh padh kar maine usse phone kiya aur humaari bachpan ki baatein yaad ki!!!! thanks!

dadi ke muh se holika ki story achhi lagi...

loved naughty geet and maan...

bahut simple sabdo mein bahut achhe se likha hai...

by the way mujhe tumhara naam bahut achha laga...shivi!!.

main tumhari writing pehli baar padh rahi hoon...

mujhe pata hai ki tum GKOL likh rahi ho par adhne ka time hi nahi mila...

bahut jald padhungi aur bataungi...

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

lovely os...
loved this mischievous and naughty maaneet..
With Geet's complaint, Maan ended up declaring their love to everyone in a "Duniya bhulake...Rang de tu mohe gerua" style 😆

Happy Holi !!!

hi shivi