Longings #2|| Maneet FF ||Thread completed ||

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: abba12
pm 😛

PM mai climax wala part nahi tha 😭 Now how will I control 😭 U usually take 5-6 days to update mera kya hoga😭

😡😡😭

Quote

..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#892

The person on bike look like a gangster... Yah ! Maan destroyed himself, he is alone Geet is alone too... Both are sailing in same boat !

Maan reached the place where he spent his childhood, unaware with the fact that the house now belongs to Geet and she is living there.

Damn curious to know about their reactions... Specially of Maan's !!

I don't want to see them fighting or hating to each other ! I want to see angry and passionate side of Maan 😳 like raha bhi na Jaye aur kaha bhi na Jaye 😛

I personally love those stories where a man fights with his own feelings... 😳 gussa cum pyaar... Both!! 😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#893

Superb update

Why did u stop there?

Wow geet lives where Maan used live before. N they going to meet. Yay can't wait.

Uplate soon Plz

Quote

Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#894

Apne hi garme upni mahebooba ko dekh kar he will be surprised and will happy for moment but will be very angry by thinking she played with him and make him his puppet, geet will be also surprised, and she will have mix emotions of love and hate, but i think in end mu will removed and they will come to knew real truth of their life and then...just my imagination,you are writer u know better than me.

Quote

-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#895

Superb update 👍🏼

Geet saw Maan but in different avatar... She was conscious when maan spoke to her😊

Geet living in maan's home which tara's dad sold

Now Maan came there... Ab Maaneet aamna saamna

I like to see Maaneet with little hatred n then show their love

But would really love to read how you have thought of😉

Quote

sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#896

u stopped at the wrong tym
why ? 😒
I can't wait for next part
plz plz plz update soon..

geet is living in maan's house
and she don't even know its her husband's house 😳
gangster maan 😲 I m still trying to imagn him 😛
plz jldi update krna
thnx for the pm