Longings #2|| Maneet FF ||Thread completed || - Page 92

nice update
geet saw maan completly changed frm his looks n now looks like a gngster ... she felt bad fr him
maan wanted to fulfill geet's dream project ..fr dat he went to d site which geet choosed land .
n he determind to get land
maan aftr reaching d village ..recognized it ...n also recognized his house ..where he used to live wid his parents

eagerly waiting to see maaneet's reaction
cont soon

OMG ,can't wait to read your next update
Well she hides in the right place (his home).
😃

OMG...fantastic episode...!!! U stopped on the verge..need the next update...so Geet living in maan's home. oh..god's destiny...they meet in his favourite place for their next life...i hope maan returns to old maan not this one ;-)

wow ...wat a place u guys seem to stop..ek aur line lik leti tho kya jaaata...
can't wait for next part...
amazing.. so she is were she belongs..i mean maan ka house..
so rathod..mane...tara ka devil.papa na...kamina kahika..
waiting to see..d sparks nd some fataka...ki gunjjj...
offcourse now as i told in earlier..wanna see...
hatred fill love nd passion nd junnoon...
hee ll mistake her nd she already msitakes him..
so ab nafrat nd pyaar sir chadke bole...

me waiting for dhamaka..

Wow! !!! So geet has bought without knowing maans home...and maan is going straight to geet...hope they meet eventhough maan will be very angry...but in that case geet should tell him what hurted her..

Realistic And So Fabulous

U stopped in wrong place.. Pls update soon

wat a timing
maan want th project in same land which geet approved
but listing its sold to someone else he went to see that
land and he don't know that was his land which naina's
father took it by cheating
waiting fr geet maan meeting

A small Sunday special para is on the way :-) ..

..SUNDAY SPECIAL ...

He moved in further ... and hit the wooden block ..

" Kon ha !!! " .. he heard a familiar voice ... a very familiar girly voice ... that belongs to his beloved ...

" this voice ... ??" ... he can recognize it in his sleep also ... he created more sound deliberately ... he wanted to hear same voice again ...

" kon ha , ander a jao ... main kitchen main hun " ... she shouted from kitchen , she guessed it to be some girl from village , who usually come at this time ..

His feet moved towards kitchen effortlessly ... what was he going to see ??

He saw her a girl , with slim figure .. wearing yellow shalwar kameez .. a color he hated .. and the dressing style , which he never examined in city .. This is not "my geet " ... no , only geet .. he corrected to himself ...
" this can't be geet .. she wasn't this simple .. she was modern .. she wore jeans top only ..and she left her hair open ... braid and geet , a big no no .. " .. he reasoned himself .. For a second he went to past , and the girl was replaced by his mother .. he sat on shelf when she used to cook , her dressing style was same .. only difference was , his mom always had old dresses, and the girl is wearing new ones ..

Geet felt someone's presence ..

" aaj kuch bolti nahi ??" .. she said , putting water in dough ..

The voice was same yet again ,it brought him out of his thoughts ... was he hallucinating ??

She forgot to blink , when she turned around , He was there, standing right in front of her .. he was same as he looked yesterday , but seeing him closely , he looked like maan but completely different person .. no he can't be maan ...

He stood rooted at his very place , is she geet or her duplicate ?? face is same but getup ?? she was present there , in flesh and blood .. all fine ...she is Geet his heart couldn't mistake, recognizing her ...

"Maan " .. she whispered in sheer disbelief .. he didn't need any more confirmation ...

He ran like a predator towards her and took her in his embrace .. ...

" Geet !!" ..

" Maan !!"

They murmured in each other's embrace ...

" kahan chali gayi thi tum ??" .. he asked tightening his grip ..

" kya haal bna rakha ha apna??" she asked , patting his back with her dough covered hands ..

They hugged each other like they would never let go now , like its new birth and they are not old maan and geet , like they had nothing in life till they met , like he was thirsty for her sight ... like she was craving to be in his arms ... Like they were born to stay like this forever , so close , to never separate again .. ... they didn't answer each other's question , there was no place for words ..

this is small update .. sunday special .. for all who asked to update soon 😆😉 specially vali , shona , tintin and nilanjana :)

pm nahi send kar rahi hun ..will add same portion in next update too ,so that everyone reads it .. thank u for awesome response .