LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 67

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the pm...great work...keep going...waitung for next one
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Posted: 8 years ago
jai s prank on geet
lolz..usiko baari padi
maan beat him black n blue without thinking
or hearig geet
geet shouted on both n intro both
maan n jai apologies to each other
but geet angry on maan
n she left
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
maan went behind geet to manofu her
but she is not ready
he got the clue regarding the case
he even sent the pic to gautam
n asked his help to manofy geet
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
maan realise his blunder but now he want to manofy his janglli billi
some stranger gave clue to him
maan told gutam about it and
got idea to manofy geet by making kheer
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

hi dear, thanks for pm..

i read ur prolouge and cs ..interesting concept..police and crime..different genre..
this weekend i read ur previous part and then i will comment ..
sorry for late



Will wait and waiting for your comment
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopaamrutha

this one is very interesting yaar... yu revealed a lot in this... aur maja aagaya ... mujhe lagtha hain vo informer bahut greedy hain agar acp sir uska help kiya tho vo paiso leke bina bhi help karsaktha hain na nahin usko tho paise se hi mathlab hain... uff and the person jisne maan ko dhakka maara mujhe uspe shak aaraha hain... mujhe lagtha hain vo geet aur maan ko follow kar raha hain. ... so many unsolved mysteries... and tatoo... infact i loved the tatoo yaar. ... ab isse hi kuch patha chala saktha hain shaayad... geet bahut gusse mein hain yaar... aur maan usko manane ke liye goutam se help le raha hain... aur jai ko bhi lucha lafanga bola maan ne lolzzz agar geet vo baat sunli tho uska murder kar dethi... hahaha.. ab tho agle update ke liye wait kar rahin hoo main... and geet loves kheer infact jai sir aur goutham ko bhi kheer bahut pasand hain ... pasand tho milna hi hain na kyunki ek family jo hain and taste bhi ek jaisa hi hoga... next update bhi dhedho bonus 😉😉 loved it... waiting for next



Hi roopa

I am glad you like the revealtion it was needed and informant is money minded you will get to know when i will update his character sketch... and the guy who hit it... ab jaan bhooz k maari yaa glti se yeh nhi pata depends uponm my thinking lollzz... thanks for liking the tattooo yaa it will reveal much hehehee... Abhi Gautam ko shak nhi hua but don't worry ... possessiveness k liye Jai hi kaafi hai you will see in future... dhamaal machaayega... yaa something will be similar ofcourse they are related..

With Regards
Ila


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Superbbb update...
loved it...
now Maan got one more lead...
Geet is Angry on him...
loved d way Maan asked Gautam to help him to shan't Geet gussa...
looking forward how he gonna manaofying Geet...
and Excited for Jajraj and Maan meeting too...
Thanks for pm dear...




I am glad you like it and i am sure you will like the maan and geet manofy session and jairaj maan meet too...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Awesome cute update geet was cribbing and cursing both maan and Jai here maan thinking how to mano geet when he met an informant who gave him pic of s tatto when maan remember he thought he saw on it on jairaj arms he immediately called Gautam who told that it isn't possible as his dad is allergic to tattoos it was very interesting lead so probably there was a duplicate involve who has the tattoo maan asked Gautam to help him manao geet he told she like kheer maan could see so much resemblance between geet Gautam and jairaj let's see how maan manos geet




Hi Nakh5683


Glad you like it yes there was someone behind it the scenes and yes Maan is intelligent he is getting the thoughts... little by little...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 updating again! fab update! well written! Geet angry! Maan's informant gives him a pic of a tattoo! he explains hw it well help Maan! Maan thinks where he saw this tattoo! who bumped into Maan?? Maan realise where he saw the tattoo n calls Gautam! Gautam says his dad wld nt have a tattoo. Maan asks 4 help as Geet angry! he tells him wt happened! nice of Gautam 2 tell Maan that Geet likes kheer! update soon


Well the person who bumped maan it will reveal in next post i will post here the new character sketch with photo...


Wait for next i am sure you will like it too
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

interesting update...

geet angry on maan and maan asking tips from gautam...
wonder who has that tattoo and how was the guy who bumped into maan???
getitng highly interesting...
waiting for nxt part...



I am glad you are liking the part thanks for commenting

and you will got to know who was that person and what is the relation between tattoo and jairaj

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