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Posted: 9 years ago
Very very nice update
So like all big families n village dey too hv a problm..
So wat .maan has come now nothing cud stop him from clearing all pblms fr his family
Omg meena ma yur d heart f d family
Get well soon
Geet...baby yur gone ..sher s so much angry..i dono wat yu gonna do to pacify him
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing part di . waiting to know how geet will pecify her sher
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THANKU SO MUCH FRIENDS FOR U R LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL..MUAH


Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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( THANKU PRIYA DII,LOVE U SO MUCH

FOR TIS BEAUTIFUL BANNER)



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Maan went to terrace to calm himself, he know she is not wrong but his worry came out as anger and made him to burst on her..he was lost in his thought but came back to sense wen he felt some one tapping his shoulder,he saw Shiva there

Maan : Shiva

Shiva : sory sagalai all becoz of me,after I know u didt like my closeness with Geeta I should have not behaved like tat im sory pls don't shout at her

Maan smile ,he look at him: who said im angry on u and didt like ur closeness haan

Shiva : then why u shouted ,I thought u feel jealous

Maan tap his head : I shouted becoz I was worried for u all, wat if they attrack everyone,u were alone how could u faced them ,so tat,then only Shiva node his head yes he is correct

Shiva : I should atleast informed u

Maan : hmm, but im jealous too,Shiva look at him,wat if some one try to flirt with Janani haan

Shiva :I will break his bones

Maan : me too but I know abt u all, and u r Ram's paa relative then for me too u r my brother how I will get jealous on my brother haan,Shiva smile and both hugged

Shiva : Geeta she is sad

Maan : let her be for some time how many times then only she will realize abt seriouness, waise its nce cahnce to etaes her, i cant get tis again and again, with a naughty grin

Shiva giggled : but be carefull sagalai ,both laughed

Geet was so sad thinking abt his anger and morning she went to his room to pacifly him but came to know he left early morning some where,whole day she was waiting for him,she could't be in peace without seeing him nor talking with him

Maan was furious abt te mens who trying to harm his family (hinting abt his past),once he let some one to destory his family but tis time he wont let any harm touch them, he want to know te full details so left early morning informing abt his visit to his site in Madurai which he started wen he came first time to Madurai

He sat in one of te room and his mens were giving te details,his whole day went busy as he forget te time,wen he finish everything and te time it is 8pm and he chilled himself as it will take one hour to reach his house, he left

He enter and saw everyone waiting for him,He cursed himself for hurting them again, two days before only he took owe tat wat ever may be he wont get angry and run away but today he did te same,he freshen up and sat for dinner,all sat and Rani served him,all were silent,them only it clicked him tat everyone waiting for him

Maan : Im sory maa i went to site and became busy in work so forgot te time suddenly he yelled in pain wen Rani twisted his ear

Rani : i already warned not to quit ur meals wat ever may be u r health cums first then only work..if u repeat it then u will see my other side im leaint so u all taking advantage haan,All giggling..

Maan : sory maa pls she left and served him

Ram whispered : Maan better accept u r maa i cant see her one side itself now another i cant

Maan chuckled but Ram shut his mouth wen Rani glare him..Geet thought to serve as she want to woo Maan..she placed a glass and poured water giving baby faces to Maan asking him sory, Maan ignored her..she again placed a chappati in his plate he ate silently as he don't want to create a scene in front of others..

Geet pout and thought night she will talk to him,all finished their dinner.. Geet went to his room to talk with him,without talking to him she cant be in peace,tat too when her Maan is angry becoz of her,she thought to manofly him but for tat he have to listen to her first naa..she went to his room and saw it was empty,she came out and saw all boys playing cards

Geet thought: here im restless becoz of him but sir is busy playingKALLULIMANGAN

All saw her and know why she is here, but thought to tease her

Santhose : GAP cum play with us

Geet glare at him for calling GAP

Shiva : she don't know to play naa cum mayil (peacock) i will teach u,

Maan glare at him who chuckled,Geet cant see Maan's face he was sitting other side showing his back to Geet so she cant see his expression

Santhose : GAP we need snacks go and bring

Geet : Santhose, with a deadly glare making him zip his mouth,i want to talk with Maan

Shiva : talk who stopping u

Maan : Anand ask her to leave im not in mood or else im leavinghe was abt to get up

Geet : no no u play she left with sad face

Shiva : Sagalai enough yar,i cant see my mayil's sad face,with baby sad face

Vicky : bro i wont accept tis u making my dii sad haan

Maan tap his head : Geet ki chamchi play i know wat to do

Maan was playing but his whole thought was around hisMISTY, her sad face haunting him even though he didt see her face but can sense her sadness in her voice,he thought she will pacifly him in her sherni avatar but seeing her sad face he know she is serious with his anger..yes he was angry but after some time he compose and thought wat his MISTY wil woo him but he never thought she will feel tis much sad,he cant concentrate on te game anymore, he stood up,all look at him

Maan :im tired gn guys ,All giggled

Shiva : yaa yaa we know

He give a glare and left to his room but stopped wen he got a call from one of his client,Geet thought to wait in his room but it became late so thought to talk with him in morning and came out but banged into Maan who too came into his room at te same time after ending te call

Geet : ouch rubbing her head IDIOT, but zipped her mouth seeing his stern glare

Maan who standing folding his hands staring at her..he know without manoflying him, she cant be in peace,He was just laughing inwardly seeing her cute baby face,he want to kiss her pouting lips but seeing her sad baby face he changed his face to stern and want to play for some time as he wont get tis chance again and again

Geet : sory,but he ignored and abt to move inside but she hold his hand..Maan saw her and her hold,he snap it and went inside

Geet pout but before she follow him he close te door right on her face making her to open her mouth to ground..

Geet : KALLULIMANGAN

Maan closed te door and chuckled seeing her golgappe face..he heard her moving and he left to sleep but Geet cant able to sleep and tossing on her bed she is really very sad with his ignorance, she can bear all his anger,his blasting but tis silent which really prickes her heart. She cant bear it

She thought now only everything was fine between them and his anger was controlled, but don't know whose evil eyes fall in them,suddenly shasha came in her mind

Geet : yes her evil eyes only, witch her burning also will affect us,morning i should ask ammachi ( nani) to take all evil eyes from us especialy tat witch, thinking abt it she doss off

Morning

All were getting ready for te temple,it was first day of te festival, usually it will take three days for te festival,First day pooja and SP family will start it by liting te diya..then second day it will be pooja and girls will play turmeric game, then last day chariot they pulled it and move around all te village and end from where it starts,then night they end with pooja to finish it..then dance and music will began and go on till early morning..

Geet was getting ready in her room,her face was very dull hinting her sadness and she was carving to talk with MAAN and same time angry on him for behaving like tat, she just wore her half sari and putting jewels..Janani came and put flowers on her head,she smile seeing her sad face

Janani: wat still maama didt mend, Geet node with pouting faceGeeta men's anger is like wax soon it will melt with girl's love

Geet : but he is valcano won't melt tat easily

Janani : then u have to wait, she look at her Janani ,cum lets go

Geet : u go i will cum

Geet cant be in peace,if she leave now then she cant able to see him whole day so she just rush to Maan's room,here Maan too not less than her,he was restless without his Geet,damn with his anger game and decide to talk to her,he half buttoning his shirt same time Geet barged in and pulled him holding his collar, startling him, he changed his face stern to know wat she is upto.

Geet : i know i did a mistake without thinking te consequence i went there,Maan fold his hands and staring at her feeling bad to see her pale face, i know u r angry but for tat don't ignore me, it hurts, her eyes welled up, i cant bear it

Maan got startled to see her tears he didt think she very take it so seriously..

Geet : u hit me, shout at me, do wat ever u want but don't be silent it kills, before she completes Maan just pulled her and smack his lips on her capturing her complaning lips and bitting her lips, she too respond as she missed him so much..

She clenched his hair and pulled him more over her..both are tasting each other lips and lost in their kiss..Maan hold her waist and lift her little bit high to get proper access ,her whole body glue to his..Both nibbling,chewing, bitting each other's lips like complaining, both not getting enough of each other,now Geet fully leaning over Maan who holding her..They broke te kiss wen they felt lack of air,both forehead touching and panting..

She started to wack his arms, his chest where ever her hand get access to his body

Geet : i hate u,tis is te way to punish me haan it really hurts, he pulled her and lick her tears

Both said together : im sory

Geet : i wont repeat tis.tis is te way to show ur anger haan like baby complaining face

Maan : but my MISTY know how to melt her Maan haan

Geet : she can but not his ignorance

Maan wipe her tears and trace her cheeks : u know i cant be angry on for long

Geet shocked and look at him : wat

Maan : i was angry thinking wat if something happens to everyone and blasted on u, But later im calmed thinking abt u reason to go there

Geet slap his cheek startling Him : poda DD here i was crying thinking u were angry but u teasing me don't talk to me she turn to move but Maan hold her

Maan : don't cry Geet u r make up will spoil

Geet : i did't put make up still as im sad sad

Maan : oh MISTY I love u and pulled her for hug

Geet : but I hate u, she hit his chest and hugged him

Maan : i thought my Sherni will pacifly me in her style but tis cry Geet wat happen MIRCHY wala Geet haan,Geet bite his chest Maan , ouch

Geet : i thought u were anger becoz i went with Shiva in bike

Maan then remember he pulled himself and glare at her : how dare u go with him tat too in bike, Geet showed puppy face, if u want u would have asked me i will take u in stern tone,if u go with any one mujse bure koi nao hoga

Geet : no one can be more bad than u

Maan : wat ever im like tis,Geet bite his chest, ouch

Geet : wat ever u r mine and hugged him,She broke te hug ,ok lets go,Maan node no,everyone will be waiting but he didt move,

She sighed and abt to move but before she does ,Maan pulled her and both lost te balance and fall on te bed,Maan on te bed and Geet top on him,they legs half hanging on te floor and Maan hands was on her bare waist as she wearing half sari,with te sudden fall her soft chest crush on him making him groan ,her flowers was hidding her face..Geet was wriggling to get up but Maan tighten his hold and pulled her little above on him rubbing their bodies sending ripples of pleasure

Geet : Maan leave me

Maan node no,she cant bear tis closeness and she kept her hands on his chest to avoid their body touching,her flowers falling on his face,he inhale te smell of flowers which making him crazy,she was clenching his shirt curshing in her fist

Geet : Maan pls,

Her legs was moving in air to free herself, Maan at once flipped her and brought underneath him and press her soft body with his hard body

Geet was startled with his sudden move and try to push him, he hold her hands and lock on either side and close te distance between them

Maan : Geet stop it u know u cant

Geet pout,he kissed her lips and just lingering his lips on her soft petals, but his hands insert inside her sari and shamlessly roaming around her bare tummy,she gasp as she felt his index finger inserting her belly button wat made her more shudder wen she felt his hardness poking her thighs ,she know wat is it as her body to reacting to him, she felt tibgten around her chest and lower part damn,she want to hide somewhere in her shyness

Geet thought,why it always turning hard around her,chi chi,her eyes try to look down to his but Maan lips moving all over her cheeks,his lips slowly came to her lips and kissed her lips but before they continue,Geet pushed him making him stumble

Maan frowned : Geet

Geet pout : don't bite my lips then I cant face anyone pls

Maan again hover on her : I will ,Geet try to push but he hold her,Geet was just staring at his lips,he teased her moving close like hungry lion but just pecked making her stare at him

Maan smirk : wat u thought Geet tat I will give u full kiss haan,she glared,if u want,before he hover on her,she stopped by keeping her hands between them as she don't want him to feel her tighten hard buds

Geet : enough MR.Khurana and she pushed him and sat on te bed correcting her dress

Maan sat beside and inhale her flowers : u smell nice Geet

Geet : hmm from wen Mr.MSK started to like flowers haan

Maan : from wen my MISTY came into my life

Geet flare her lips :one should learn from u how to melt girl's heart

Maan : I don't know abt others but for my MISTY I know ,kissing her cheeks

Geet pout but showed him her another cheek and he kissed her.,they stood and abt to leave but before he does Geet pulled him and glare at him,he raised his eyebrows like asking wat happen, she pulled his shirt and started to button his shirt,she saw her teeth mark on his chest as she bite him little bit wild,She caress his chest

Geet : sory and kiss his skin to sooth..she was kissing around his nipples making him groaning..he clenched her waist breaking her trance..

Maan : Geet if u don't stop now then don't blame me

Geet stopped and pout at him,she took oil and apply on his chest and closed it ,Maan smile at her

Geet : if u open think abt triangle ( family planning )

Maan gap her,she corrected his collar and drag him out but stood still seeing Shiva who was grinning at them

Shiva : so u both patch up,wat sagalai (brother) u fall on her leg so soon

Maan : wat to do bro wat ever girls do but atlast they are always correct

Shiva : tats there we did sin in last year tats why we born as mens

Maan node his head : u r correct bro

Both are cribbing abt they condition but Geet is just gapping at them, she rub her eyes and looking at both who gave a look like wat

Geet : u both pointing her fingerto them how wen i mean wen u became friends

Both look at each and hugged each other making her eyes widen in shock

Maan : wen we are enemies to became friends now haan

Shiva : we are sagalais and have some noks jhoks if u took our nok jhoks as fight wat we can we do

Maan node his head and both hifived

Geet : u both before she pounce they run to escape from her

All left to temple,row of cars stop and all got down,pandits came and escort everyone inside ,all wished them..they enter inside and stood in front of te god,Lk hold te plate which had god's jewels and sari as it was traditional tat SP family should bring goddess's jewels and sari,pandit took it and start te pooja

The pandit started to tie white silk towel around they head and put garland on their neck,as it was ritual and honour to SP family..Karthi was narrating everything to Maan and Vicky wat they doing,pandit tied to everyone along with their sons as it was only for mens

Then pandit tie for Ram and tie for Maan and Vicky too and put garland who was standing beside him, startling them,both look at pandit

Pandit : u r Ram's sons naa, with a smile

Both felt touched and look at Ram

Ram : yes pandit they are my sons,Both khuranas can sense a pride wen Ram said tat

Then pandit took arthi and gave to all, then Sp took te arthi plate and went out,showed to sun and lite te big lamp kept out side and lite te diya hinting te festival started..

Soon crackers bursted and music started,it was big festival like kumbamela happens every year,not only tis village surrounding 18 taluk will participate.

Maan hold Ram hearing te crackers sound, Ram chuckled Maan pout..

SP gesture Maaneet to cum near and asked them to give dress to poors..they both stood and started to give other side Anand and Saranya too giving and other side youngers giving prasad to all including Vicky and Anni..all enjoying girls one side enjoying in purchasing and eating sugarcanes,elders sitting and watching everything and talking..mens talking with te village peoples, ladies talking with some ladies, boys were sitting and chatting..

Suddenly group of mens came there along with their goons..they pushing girls who walking and throwing things from te shops,they came near Mens, and saw Ram and Sundarlingam

Man : wat Ram how r u, with evil smile

Mens saw them Ram smile : im fine how r u anna

Man : anna haan, he look at sundarlingam and co, oh so whole family is here haan

Ram : anna u r our family naa,

Man : family but we don't have cheap blood like u, by sending girls to sort out while mens sitting in home wearing bangles

All got angry hearing his words,Ganesh and Venkat try to pounce but Ram hold them

Ram : Ram think before u speak u r my anna tats why im silent

Man : oh im scared then wat , u don't have guts to open te temple and face us, so sending girls to owe us

At once he utter those words he got a punch from Ganesh before he realize..Tat mens got startled and mens glaring at them with fuming eyes..One man pushed Ganesh who fall on Prabhu

Prabhu : anna we have respect on u so better behave urself

Man: oh u will teach me manners, he raise his hand to hit him,

But before he does he was flying in air with Maan's one pounch all gaze turned to him who was splitting fire.. he saw some mens talking rudely with his family and he got angry but wen Anand translate wat they talking he know its related to temple issue and got angry wen they talk abt their girls and he became furious wen he raise his hand on Prabu appa,tats it,Tat man was bleeding

Man point finger to Maan : hey who are u

Vicky twisted his finger and gave a punch : don't point finger on him

Ram : they are my sons

Man : u r sons, i know u have one daughter then these two

Another man : its not new in their family having two womens, before he complete Ram punched breaking his jaw, all startled,all know how Ram is wen it cums to deal like tis issue but for khuranas its new to see a soft person like Ram will get angry

Ram : till now im silent thinking u r my family and Maama ask us to be quite but wen u talking abt my family i cant keep quite

Another man look at te man flying : how dare u hit my brother

He try to hit Ram but before he does Ram hold his hand and gave a kick on his stomach with his right leg..Maan try to hit te man who rush to Ram but Ram hold him before Maan hit him and gesture Maan to move

Maan : but paa

Ram : i said go with stern voice

Maan was startled to see anger in Ram's red eyes which shows his anger..he never seen him like tis,he thought he is very soft but tis

Sp : enough till now i stopped my kids not to fight as i dont want to increase te revenge but today u crossed all ur limits now i wont tie u Ram,show them wat we are,show them we are mens who know to break they jaws who ever talk ill abt our family

Ram smirk for tis one word only he was waiting till now..Maan was staring at te scenes..Shiva dragged him to sit and watch te show

(love u priya dii for tis edi)

Ram, Venkat Ganesh stood and folding they dhotis to fight..Maan and Vicky gapping at them,boys chuckled

Shiva : sagalai don't think they are old they can face 100 peoples at one time..

Anand : we just watch it

Santhose : with tis juice take it all took but Maan denied as he was worried for them


PRECAP : FESTIVAL CONTINUES

NEXT PART:188, PG - 45


Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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TRYING TO COMPLETE MADURAI SCENES.. SO PROBABLY ONE MORE
Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome one diii :)
waah its wonderful to see all in action
maan and vicky just gaping at them 😃😃😆
waiting eagerly :P for the next
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow.. superb update
action time
love it
thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Cute MG Sean
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan worries for his family
But geet ko derr se sm a ti ahy lolzzz
Maan angry geet pare shan
Kya maan Kitna pare shan kart ho geet ko
Maan trying to manofy maan

AhEm ahem Maaneet kiss patch up hehehe
O teri maan ki in laws tjo tho sher hay
Poor maan tun tho unke samne Msk ban hi nahi sakhte heheheh
Chaloo koi nahi

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