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Posted: 9 years ago
oops...mai ek imp ques poochna bhool gayi
this story has happy ending na??😛
plzz tell na...
warna mera nanna munna dil ka yeh haal🥺hoga

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanx for the pm.. Lovely update explains geets emotions really well.. I feel
Like ur telling my story lolzz.. Every guy ive spoken to seems like only i try but they dont do any effort.. Cont soon hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-12

Same day 1 pm in free period geet check her phone goes to whatsup.she check if maan is online or not. He is online so she sent a massage to him.
Geet; hi
Maan; hello
Geet: r u in office?
Maan; yes
Geet; ok, r u busy?
Maan; don't know.
Geet felt like he doesn't want to talk.
Geet; means u r busy.ok bye we talk later .u do ur work.

After sometime she talk to reet about this.
Geet;yaar he did not want to talk to me.
Reet: why r u saying this? He told u .
Geet: no but when I asked him r u busy? He said don't know. If he was then he could say yes .but he said don't know.
Reet; hmm, koi nahi tu pareshan na ho,kya pata wo thoda busy ho ya hone wala ho to use na pata ho.
Geet; yaar I felt like I m behind him.he is not interested.

In evening geet sit alone & think about maan & her friendship with him. She felt like she is cheating her mom & her family,bcz they have full faith in her. They thought she can't do anything like that.if they come to know about this they can't handle.and also why she want to be his friend when in first place he already refused to marry her.she also don't want to be only a gf.she don't want to make any boyfriend.it is against her rule. usne aaj tak jab koi boy friend nahi banaya to aaj kyu chahti hai uski friend ban na. Jab aaj tak use kabhi bhi koi proposal mile usne mana kar diya, practically wo isse kahi better the or wo khud aate the par kyunki use parents ki marji se hi shadi karni thi ye sab use khud pasand nahi tha to phir aaj kyu mein uske piche padi hu.pata nahi kya hai ye. Mein kyu usse baat karna chahti hu.nahi karti to bechain hoti hu. Geet iske baad sochna band kar deti hai kyunki wo or confuse ho jati hai.
Again she sentGoodnight massage but he did not reply.she felt sad but she ignore.

Next day Rano called Sunder and asked him about quickly search groom for geet bcz time they have no time left for rest.
Day by day uski age badh rahi hai.
Sunder assure Rano that he will search good groom for geet.

In afternoon geet don't want to sent massage to maan but she couldn't ignore her heart & finally sent a maasage .
Geet; hi
Maan; hello.
Geet;how r u?
Maan; I m fine. & what about u?
Geet; I m also fine.
Geet; how r ur family member?
Maan: they all r good.
Geet.r u in office?
Maan; yes,
Geet;ok,r u busy.
Maan; no right now I m not busy.
Geet;ok.what is ur office time.
Maan;9 am,9 to 6
Geet,;ok, ur timing is good.but I have to get up early in the morning.
Maan:when u get up?
Geet;5 am ,waise achha hai jaldi uthna chahiye.
Maan ;why
Geet; kyunki yoga ho jata hai agar jaldi uthti hu.
Maan; u do yoga!
Geet; yes
Maan;great, to aap apne aapko fit bana rahi hai.
Geet;hmm
Maan;I tell u one thing that, meine apna wait only one month mein 10 ki kam kiya.
Geet: really,how?
Maan; nothing more, meine bas outsider food khana band kar diya.
Geet:ok
Geet;what u like in most.
Maan in happines; I love gol gappe.
Geet ; really, me also..
Maan;ok bye, I have some work.
Geet; ok bye.
After talk to maan geet felt very happy.she share everything to reet.& reet said this is positive.

In evening geet's niece dia come to geet house, geet & dia's Relation is like friends.geet or dia ek dusre se kisi bhi topic pe baat kar leti hai.geet use maan se huyi sari baate batati hai. Dia sunkar geet ke liye happy feel karti hai.

Issi tarah geet maan ko goodmorning or gudnight massage everyday send karti hai par maan na hi goodnight or na hi goodmorning massage ka answer deta hai. Bas kabhi kabhi geet se baat kar leta hai jab geet ek do baar hi ,hello kahti hai,isi tarah 15 days ho jate hai.but maan ne kabhi bhi geet ko khud massage karke kabhi baat nahi ki, jab geet karti hai tabhi kabhi answer diya to diya.geet ko kayi baar maan se baat karke lagta tha ki use baat nahi karni chahiye wo kayi baar decide bhi karti hai . Par har baar na chahte huye msg kar deti thi.par kayi baar jab wo thik se baat karta tha to wo khus hoti hai.or bhul jati hai ki maan kayi baar uske msg ka jawab nahi deta.
Precap
Geet; what r ur hobbies?
Maan; I don't have hobbies.
Geet; means
Maan;jo pasand hota hai kar leta hu,
Or piche kisi ke bhagta nahi.
Geet felt like he is saying to her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Whoaaa maan said straight to her? Wow.. Amazing yaar.. Hope now geet realises shes running after him.. Give him some time.. Kya pata yeh doori mit jaye ;) cont soon hin
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan aur uske ajeeb jawab...😆
are you busy? don't know

Geet is in dilemma...she could not stop herself from talking to him though somewhere he is reluctant about it...she does not understand what it is about him that is making her do these things... liked the way she gets happy when he responds to her, even though he does it rarely..








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Posted: 9 years ago
part 13
next day Geet send a massage to maan
geet; hi,how r u?
maan; hello ,I m fine.
Geet; ok ,what r ur hobbies?
Maan; I don't have hobbies.
Geet; means
Maan;jo pasand hota hai kar leta hu,
Or piche kisi ke bhagta nahi.
Geet felt like he is saying to her.after this ans she does not want to talk but she ignore. & continue her talk.
Geet ; ok.

after that Geet share all her talk to reet .
Reet kahti hai tune usse pahle pucha tha ki aap mere friend banoge.usne ha kaha.tu jabardasti usse baat nahi kar rahi.agar usse nahi karni to wo mana kar de,mana karne ke baad agar tu karti to hota ki tu uske piche padi hai.or phir sahi kahu to ye ladka tere liye thik nahi.tu iss baat ko aage mat badha, tujhe hi pain hoga, Agar wo agar tere se baat karne mein interested hota to wo khud bhi massage karta.ladko ko ek baar pata Chale ladki interested hai to khud hi karte hai baat par yaha to situation hi alag hai tu usse baat karti hai or wo ajeeb answer deta hai.
geet; reet kya mein sach mein achhi nahi.
reet;tu pagal hai kya ,uske liye tu apne aapko aise kyu kah rahi hai, tu bahot achhi hai , tera dill saaf hai,jo tujhe janega wo tujhse baat kare bina rah hi nahi sakta, tu beautiful hai but usse kahi jyada tera dill beautiful hai, or ye wo nahi janta, tu usse jyada attach mat ho, mein nahi chahti tujhe pain ho.
geet; par wo aisa kyu kar raha hai.
Reet; mujhe lagta hai uski koi gf hai tabhi wo aisa kar raha hai.
Geet; par ye baat wo mujhe kah sakta hai ki uski ek gf hai, isliye wo mujhse baat nahi kar sakta.phir mein apne aap hi baat nahi karti na.
reet; kya pata aisa na bhi ho,koi or wajah ho, Kya pata wo gay ho.
geet:ha ha ha , aisa kuch nahi ok
reet; kya hua bura laga baby ko.ohho tu Mr.ego ki side le rahi hai.
geet; aisi baat nahi.Mr ego?
reet; ha wo Mr ego hi hai.usme bahot ego hai.
geet;hmm
reet; dekh ya phir wo apne parents ki wajah se aise kar raha ho. wo kahi or chahte ho.
Geet; tujhse baat karke mood thik ho gaya.
Reet; ok, bye.

After 2 days
Geet sent a happy massage to maan.(guys image nahi upload kar pa rahi mein).
"dua hai hamari ki!!
zindagi mein wo chahera aapko hamesha
muskurate huye mile
jis chahere ko aap roj
aayine mein dekhte ho."
after sometime Maan read this & sent a maasage to geet.
maan; hi
geet saw this & feel very happy.bcz maan khud massage send karta hai.geet uska ans deti hai.
geet: hello
geet; how r u?
maan; not well.& what about u?
Geet; what happen? I m fine
maan; nothing.
Geet; to phir aapne aise kyu kaha.
maan: aise hi kah diya.
geet; apki tabiyat kharab hai?.
maan; nahi meri tabiyat ekdum fit hai.
Geet think he doesn't want to tell her so she doesn't insist him to say.
geet; ok
then maan goes offline.whole day Geet wait for when he is going to online. she felt like he is in some tension,or not feeling well.but he did not want to share with her.yahi baat geet ko pareshan karti hai usse lagta hai ki chahe wo koi bhi baat ho par geet ko maan ko cheer karna chahiye uska mood thik karna chahiye isliye geet maan ko 3 massage send karti hai.one is flowers image , second is chocolate image, & third is maan's favourite gol gappe image .isse alag wo kuch likh kar bhi sent karti hai.
Geet: hi Maan
jab meine subah aapse baat ki thi tab pahle aapne kaha not well.par baad mein kaha ye aapne aise hi kaha.par mujhe lagta hai koi baat hai jo aapko pareshan kar rahi hai or aap use batana nahi chahte.warna aap aise kyu kahte .
koi nahi aap nahi batana chahte. par meine ek koshish ki aapka mood thik karne ki, pata pasand aayega ya nahi, par mera mood to aise hi thik ho jata hai.sorry agar aapko achha na laga ho to. mujhe pata hai ye mera haq nahi, sorry agar meine apni limits cross ki ho. mein to bas apka mood thik karna chahti hu.

After sending massage to maan geet eagerly waiting for when he will read this massaage.
After sometime he read & goes offline.
Geet uske massage ka wait karti hai par no reply ka use koi dukh nahi kyunki use kahi na kahi pata hai ki wo reply nahi karega.use jo laga usne kah diya.

aise hi geet maan ko massage send karti rahti hai jab maan ka mann karta wo reply karta, nahi to ignore karta.

today is friendship day so geet sent friendship massage to maan.& waiting for maan reply.
maan saw massages but did not reply. isse geet ko bahut bura lagta hai, use lagta hai ki kam se kam same to u hi send kar deta. kya itna time nahi uske pass.or massages ka ans nahi deta koi nahi , isliye geet decide karti hai ki wo ab maan ko koi massage nahi karegi.
Iske baad geet maan ko koi bhi massage send nahi karti.

After 5 days from friendship day
reet ; hi, how r u?
Geet;hello , fine.
Reet; uska massage aaya.
geet; kiska.
reet; or kon Mr.ego
geet; ohh nahi. ab kare na kare mujhe bhi nahi karna.
reet; ha bilkul thik, mat kar. tu karegi to tujhe hi dukh hoga. Wo thoda ajeeb hai.

Geet Maan ko massage to nahi karti par ye sochti hai shayad wo massage kare jab itne Dino se mera koi massage nahi gaya to wo soche ke kyu nahi kar rahi.kya pata wo puche ki mein massage kyu nahi kar rahi hu.geet ye sab sochti hai.aise hi 10 days ho jate hai par maan ka koi massage nahi aata.geet bechain hoti hai.sochti hai ki wo kaisa hoga.
par massage nahi karti.


Precap
geet; hi
maan; who is this?
geet;u forget me very fast. I m geet.
maan;ohhh,sorry but ur no is not save in my phone.
Geet ko thoda dukh hota hai ki humne itne din baat ki par uske pass mera no bhi save nahi.
geet; ok

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb updates
Maan is very straight forward
bechari geet..roz message karthi hai aur janab ka msg k liye wait kar rahi hai
and in geet's house they are searching for a groom
i think maan doesn't consider as her friend
eagerly waiting for nxt parts and waiting to know his POV
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

<font size="2">Geet is becoming an interesting character..
at times, she is like those innocent people, who will follow their heart without thinking much..
and at other times she is mature to think about the whole situation wisely..

she was so happy talking to him..and he said he is busy, did not respond to her good morning message..

and about the note...achchha hain, you have given us the scope to guess about him till next 5 parts..we can be full on with our speculations...

so Maan is a mystery, as of now he looks confused about what he wants...baat nahi karni hai to seedha seedha bol do..ke nahi karani hai..

PS -- I normally stalk the stories which I read and come to the update from the changes in the post title itself..would have anyway come to this thread to read the update without the PM :))</font>


Thanks dear for ur lovely comment
😊
Yes geet is very innocent who follow her heart.but she is mature also.
ha maan is a mystery as of now, but this mystery is going to reveal soon.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

<div align="center"><font color="#FF00CC"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">sahi mein...geet dont do dis...

nice update...but very short...

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">loved it very much...

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">thank u very much fr d lovely update...

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">continue soon plz...</font>
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Thanks for your comments.
yes Geet lo aisa nahi karna chahiye, par wo phir bhi aisa karti hai

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