ff(kaash tum mere hote-shtj-aylth!) update 48 page 138

Hey guys
Mein geet forum pe 2 saal se reader hu.par ab ek story mere mind mein aayi hai, mein use geet or Maan ke version mein likhna chahti hu.ye story reality par hai.meine ise bahot karib se dekha hai.mujhe aap logo ka sath chahiye.meri English itni achhi nahi isliye jyada tar story hindi mein hogi.or kyunki story mein phone mein hi type karke update karungi to time lag sakta hai.par story mein puri jarur karungi.abhi prolouge or cs update kar rahi hu.Kyunki writing ki field mein nayi hu agar koi mistake ho to bata dena. 😊 iss story ka naam mein selfless love rakhna chahti hu plz koi mujhe batao ki ye kisi or ki story ka naam to nahI hai.agar hai to mein change kar dungidungi 😊

Aasmaa ko zami ye jaruri nahi jaan le, ishq sachha wahi jisko milti nahi manzilein. Rang the noor tha jab karib tu tha...

Kyu koi kisi ko itna chahta hai ki wo apne dukh ko bhul kar dusre ki khusi ka khayal rahta hai...use koi takleef na ho bas ye chahta hai...


Note; guys mein iss ff ka naam change kar rahi hu kyunki ek to pahle hi uss naam se story hai.
Or jo naam meine ab decide kiya hai wo iss story ko jyada suit karta hai.
Ab iss ff ka naam hai
'' kaash tum mere hote,
Saans hi tham jati,
Agar ye lafz tere hote!"
ff name in short(kaash tum mere hote -shtj-aylth)

Prolouge
Ma:Tujhe karna hoga geet, nahi to kaise hogi Teri shadi, shadiyo mein thoda bahot jhuth to chalta hai, dekhne mein nahi lagti tu badi ,ladka dekhne mein tujhse bada lagta hai koi fark nahi padta.
Geet:Nahi ma mein jhuth nahi bolungi mujhse nahi hoga.baad mein pata chala to kya hoga. Wo log naraz hue to tab kya karungi mein.mein to kahinki nahi rahungi.isse achaa hai mein aise hi rahu.
Mein chote ladke se shadi nahi karungi bas.
Ma gusse me:par ladke ko koi prblm nahi hai to tujhe kya prblm hai.
Geet: ladke ko ye pata hai ki ladki 1 ya 2 saal badi hai isliye use prblm nahi usse ye nahi pata ki mein 5 saal badi hu.
Ma: tu aise hi karti rahegi to ek din mein bhi chali jayungi tere papa or chacha ki tarah.wo log to chale gaye Teri shadi ke khawab dekhte dekhte.mera nikalna mushkil hai sab kahte hai kab kar rahe ho geet ki shadi.ladka dekha ke nahi,ab to log cast se bahr ke rishte batate hai or wo bhi jinki pahli biwi mar jati hai ya phir talak huya hota ha.mein to bas itna chahti hu tera ghar base or baap ki ijjat bani rahe jaise puri zindagi bani rahi.
Geet: thik hai jaisi tumahri marji.kar do mein dekh lungi baad mein apne aap.hamesha mujhe tum emotionally blackmail karti ho.pichli baar ka yaad hai na wo ladka 2 saal chota tha or 12 pass tha uske liye mujhse ha karwa li aapne mujhse par usne bhi mana kar diya ki ye kah ke ki ladki 2 saal badi hai.
Ma: iss baar nahi hoga tere mama bich mein hai unhone pakki baat kar rakhi hai.

CS
geet chauhan: 30 year old beautiful ,lovely & sweet girl.
She is M.A. B.ed.going to be a teacher.bahot hi sanskari.aaj tak no boy friend.kyunki use hai apne humsafar ka intzar jise uske gharwale choose kare.papa chaha ki pari hai.very pamper girl.sabko pyar karne wali.friendship ko bhagwan ka diya hua gift manti hai.bahot samajhdar.kisi ko pareshan nahi dekh sakti.bachpan se ek rule no boys se baate no boyfriend.dusro ke dukh ke aage apna dukh bhul jati hai.
Maan shekhawat :smart & good looking 25 year old boy. Done graduation.doing job in a good company as a manager.jo decide kar liya wahi karna hai.bahot hi innocent. Or very emotional.ganv se delhi aaye huye 8 saal huye hai.apne chacha ji ke sath rahta hai.Delhi mein ghar banana hai.ek girlfriend hai.5 saal se sath hai bahot pyar karta hai (ya nahi pata nahi story mein aage pata chalega).girlfriend cheat bhi karti hai phir bhi uske piche pagal.prblm se nikalna chahta hai par kuch samajh nahi pata.
sameera: Maan ' s gf, beautiful girl.same age as Maan. Have one bf alongwith Maan.doing job in one store.Maan ne hi job dilai hai.
Geet family:
rano(ma): geet ko bahot pyar karti hai.bas chahti hai geet ki shadi ho jaye.
Brij; geet se 2 saal chota bhai.doing job in army.married to soni.geet kI bahot respect karte hai.
Lucky: geet se 6 saal chota bhai.searching job.geet ki bahot respect karta hai.
Geet' s friend: preet,& reet bahot karib friends jo har baat jante hai.mahima or naina bhi best friends hai. Par kam mil paate hai.priyanka is childhood friend.bahot Dino se mili nahi par phone pe hi baate karte hai.
Dia: geet ke tau ji ki poti .23 year old .beautiful.doing graduation.geet ke bahot karibi
Other member will introduce later.
Maan's family.
Meena : Maan ki ma.Maan ko bahot jyada pyar karti hai.Maan ki khusi chahti hai.par ye bhi chahti hai kisi tarah Maan sam ke jaal se nikal jaye or shadi kar Le..
Raj shekhawat: Maan's father.pariwar ki shan or ijjat pe aanch nahi aane chahiye.Maan ko pyar karte hai.
Vicky; Maan's brother just 12 th pass ki hai.or army mein job ke liye try kar raha hai.
Anvesha: Maan's sister.Maan se choti hai. Maaried to Dev. Anevesha ki shadi geet ki bhabhi ke ganv mein huyi hai.love Maan very much.
Pari: Maan ki sabse choti bahan.doing graduation.very bubbly girl.
Savitri; Maan's Dadi.love Maan very much. Maan ki shadi karwana chahti hai.
Yashwardhan shekhawat: Maan's dada ji.he have his own rules. Love Maan most
param: Maan's chacha ji .Maan jinke yaha rahta hai.
Abhi ke liye itna hi.

Index
Part 1 : page no 3
Part 2 : 4
part 3 : 5
Part 6: 7
Part 7:7
Part 8:8
Part 9: 8
Part 10 :10
Part 11; 12
Part12:14
part 13 : 14
Part 14;17
Part 15 ;19
Part 16;20
Part17; 23
Part 18;24
Part 19; 25
Part 20 ; 27
Part 21 ;30
Part 22; 31
Part 23 ;34
Part 24;37
Part 25;38
Part 26 ; 42
Part 27;45
Part 28 ; 48
Part 29 ; 50
Part 30 ; 52
Part 31; 55
Part 32; 58
Part 33;62
Part 34;65
Part 35;68
part 36;71
part37;75
part 38;79
part 39;85
Part 40; 89
Part 41; 95
Part42;100
Part 43 ;108
Part44;114
Part45; 119
Part 46; 123
Part 47; 129
Part 48;138

Thanks dear
Yes geet is elder than Maan.
Maan khurana ki jagah shekhawat isliye hai kyunki story ki demand hai warna mujhe khud khurana pasand hai.par itna promise karti hu naam chahe jo ho par ye story jarur aapke dil ko chuyegi.plz aage suggestions dete rahna.

Originally posted by: CookieMonster.

Hey congrats for ur first story...
awesme concept :)
geet is elder dan maan..nice cs but ye kya!!! Maan shekhawat😭 plz change d surname to khurana..

Congrats for ur first maaneet story

Good luck Kasi with your first story, sorry I'm afraid since it would be in hindi i would have to give it a miss but i know you'll do great

All the best

congrats for ur first story...
nice concept...
geet is elder than maan..
Waiting 4 d update... cont. Soon.

Congrats on new story!!
Nice concept...geet is elder to maan..interesting
and here Maan is not a business tycoon
just a normal man
Maan Shekhawat..can u plzz make it as Khurana. ..the KHURANA name has such an aura 😆
and Yes!! There is a story with the same name...its an os but has many parts..written by arpitaji!!