ff(kaash tum mere hote-shtj-aylth!) update 48 page 138 - Page 2

congo for the new story..
Amazing concept...
update soon...

Originally posted by: jasika08

Congrats for ur first maaneet story

Nice prologue😊

waiting for update

Thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: sophiexx

Good luck Kasi with your first story, sorry I'm afraid since it would be in hindi i would have to give it a miss but i know you'll do great

All the best

Thanks dear 😊
Hey I will try to write in English.
Really this story is very heart touching.
U all will enjoying reading it

Originally posted by: crazy-dd-fan

congrats for ur first story...
nice concept...
geet is elder than maan..
Waiting 4 d update... cont. Soon.

Thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: Madhu..

Congrats on new story!!
Nice concept...geet is elder to maan..interesting
and here Maan is not a business tycoon
just a normal man
Maan Shekhawat..can u plzz make it as Khurana. ..the KHURANA name has such an aura 😆
and Yes!! There is a story with the same name...its an os but has many parts..written by arpitaji!!

Thanks dear😊
Yes Maan is not a business tycoon .just a normal man.
Me also like khurana surname but this story is about rajpoot family. & their's view & rules so if I change the surname than concept will become dull.
Par itna jarur hai ki surname se koi fark nahi padega dear.
Maan naam mein itna aura hai ki uske sath khurana ho na ho uska jaadu hamesha rahega. & I promise u will enjoy this story.
Hey plz tell me kya mein iss naam se story likh sakti hu agar pahle se hi is naam se story hai.

Nice prologue and cs...continue soon... Eagerly waiting...

very nice & different concept..cant wait for update..

Intersting concept
but can u pls provide english version too

Part -1
Geet family background:ghar mein geet ki shadi ki tension hai, sab chahte hai ki kisi tarah shadi jaldi se jaldi ho.dekhte dekhte 30 saal ki ho gayi.kahi baat hi nahi banti, sab kuch thik hote huye bhi har jagah se mana ho jati hai.
Isi tension mein geet ke mama jI ka phone aaya.
Geet : hello mama ji namaste.
Mamaji: namaste, kaisi ho geet beti.
Geet: mein achhi hu, aap kaise ho ghar ,mein sab kaise ho.
Mamaji:ghar mein sab achhe hai.mummy se baat kara yo.
Geet: ji mama ji abhi karwati hu.mummy mama ka phone hai.
Rano:hello
Sunder(mamaji); namaste didi.geet ke rishte ke liye baat ki hai.ladka achha hai , khandaan achha hai.padha likha hai.Delhi mein job karta hai.ganv mein bhi property hai thodi bahot.tum aa jayo kal ladka ganv mein aa raha hai.dekh lo pasand kar lo baki sari baate hum kar lenge.tumeh bas ladka pasand karna hai.
Rano; achha ye to achhi baat hai.isi tension mein rahti hu har waqt mein.thik hai mein or lucky aate hai.agar sab thik raha to Brij bhi chutti leke dekh lega or pakka kar dega.
Sunder; thik hai aa jayo .
Rano (khushi se): mama rishta bata rahe hai sab thik hai, kah rahe hai baat pakki hai.
Geet : har baar sab aise hi kahte hai ,phir baad mein kya hota hai.pata hai na.ladke ki age puchi .nahi na.jarur chota hoga.phir wahi sab.
Rano(gusse mein): tu pahle hi mana kar de.tu aise hi karti hai jabhi nahi hoti Teri shadi.aisa kuch nahi hoga.mama hai iss baar bich mein.jyada hai to puch Le phone karke.
Soni(bhabhi): mummy didi sahi kah rahi hai.pichli baar bhi aisa hua tha.
Geet bahot dukhi hoti hai or kahti hai " har baar aise hi hota hai kya isme meri bejjati nahi hoti, Hume pata hai phir kyu hum aage baat kare.kyu apni bejjati karwaye.dukh hota hai mujhe."
Rano: thik hai milayo mama ko phone.
Sunder: ha didi bolo.
Rano: bhai uss ladke ki age kitni hai.
Sunder; umar ka koi chakkar nahi hai, humne pata kar liya hai,tum bas ladka pasand karo.unhe koi problem nahi.
Rano: wo sab thik hai, par age ki wajah se 1 -2 baar mana ho chuki hai isliye geet ko bhi bura lagta hai tum age phir bhi pata kar lo.
Sunder: ladka 28 saal ka hai uske gharwalo ne bataya hai.or ek do saal chalta hai.ab bas kal aa jayo.
Rano: ho gayi baat.ladka 28 saal ka hai.ab khus..
Geet : pahle jaisa nahi hona chahiye bas mujhe koi problem nahi agar ladke ko koi problem nahi to.mein to kabhi mana nahi karti.wahi se hoti hai.
Geet akele mein
Geet in tears: hey bhagwan plz iss baar aisa kuch nahi hona chahiye.meri mummy ke liye hi sahi plz yaha baat bana dena.

Maan's family background; Maan ki chacha ji ki family delhi mein rahti hai, jinke sath Maan rahta hai.Maan ki family ganv mein rahti hai Unme Maan ke papaji ,dadaji, Dadi ji, ma,bahan or bhai.
Maan kisi kaam se apne ganv mein aaya hai.
Papaji; kal ladki wale aa rahe hai dekhne ke liye , ladki achhi hai padhi likhi hai.achhe khandaan ki hai.dau ji (jo rishta kara rahe hai) kah rahe the ladki m.a , b.ed. hai govt job ke liye try kar rahi hai.abhi achhe private school mein padha rahi hai.or kya chahiye.
Meena(ma): achha phir to achha hai.
Maan: par papaji mein abhi 2 saal shadi nhi karna chahta.mein pahle kuch karna chahta hu.ghar bhi banana chahta hu.
Meena: par ladki to Delhi ki hai or itni padhi likhi hai kya wo ganv ke riti riwaj nibha payegi.
Papaji; nahi dau ji bata rahe the ki ladki sanskari hai.
Dadaji or Dadiji; achha ramesh ne kaha hai to Sach mein ladki achhi hogi.thik hai dekh lete hai.
In evening Maan, vicky or pari teeno sath bethe the.
Vicky: humari bhabhi to shahar ki hogi.agar bhabhi stylish huyi to humare to maze.sabko bolenge humari bhabhi stylish hai.humari bhi dhak jam jayegi kyu pari.
Pari; ha mein to bhabhi se bahot kuch sikhungi.city jaisa makeup , style etc.. haina bhai.bhai aapko bhi to change hona padega.bhabhi aapko bhi change kar degi.
Maan: chup raho tum dono.kya baate kar rahe ho abhi sirf dekhne ki baat huyi or tum khawab bana rahe ho.kya pata idhar na ho.wo log pasand na kare.
Pari: aisa ho hi nahi sakta ki humare bhai ko koi mana kar de haina vicky.or bhai aap ladki ko pasand kar lena.kitni padhi likhi hai.mein apni friends se kahungi meri bhabhi bahot padhi likhi hai or delhi ki hai.
Maan: tum ye baate band karo or study pe dhayan do samajhe.
Maan bahar chala jata hai.
Vicky:bhai ke Mann mein to ladoo phut rahe honge or Hume upar se gussa karke chale gaye.
Pari khus hokar ; mein to chahti hu bhai ki shadi yahi ho.

Abhi ke liye itna hi.omg pahli baar kuch likha hai darr lag raha hai pata nahi aap sabko kaisi lagegi ye story. agar koi bhi kami ho to plz bata dena.mein koshish karungi thik karne ki .

Precap:
Mamaji; humari ladki bahot hi sanskari hai.padhi likhi hai, job karegi. Par apna ghar jaldi banwa lo delhi mein humari ladki ganv mein nahi rahegi.
Raj: ghar to ban ne wala hai isi 20 tarikh ko ja rahe hai bhumi pujan ke liye.agar ladke ko ladki pasand hai to Hume koi problem nahi hai.hum tayyar hai shadi ke liye