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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: jasika08

Nice update

Waiting for next update.


Thanks deardear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#990099">Just Came Across This FF</font>

<font color="#990099">Concept , Characters And Storyline Is Fantastic</font>

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<font color="#990099"><strong>Geet is 30 years old while Maan is 25 years </font>

<font color="#990099">her family wants her to marry quick while he wants to wait for another two years </font>

<font color="#990099">lets see now what will happen</font>


Thanks dear 😊
Yes dear he wants to wait for another two year.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: crazy-dd-fan

Awesome update...
everyone in geet family like maan...
eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...
cont. soon...


Thanks dear 😊
Yes everyone like Maan

Kya aisa ho sakta hai ki koi maan ko pasand na karekare 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Nice story... I read all ur parts in one go...
Geet is matured than Maan... Waiting to know how they make a successful couple...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Part-4
In the geet home
All r sitting in a room( soni,geet,Rano,or lucky).
Rano in happines: he is good boy & really he is good match for u.jo bhi dekhega yahi kahega ki ladka bahot achha dhundha hai.
Geet:ok, but ma main issue is difference between our age, what is his age.
Rano: I don't know, ur mama know . Soni call Raj or tej & ask his age.
Soni : ok ma . Then she called tej . Tej gave maan's phone no to soni.
Geet: ma where is my second photo. only one photo is in this envolope.where is my photo in sari.
Rano: wo ek hi photo laye.sari wali shayad unhone rakh li.
Soni Maan ko phone milati hai.
Soni ; hello r u Maan.
Maan; yes
Soni: namaste ji, I m geet' s sister in law, jaha aapki shadi ki baat chal rahi hai.
Maan: namaste, sorry to say but I do not recognise u.meri shadi ki to bahot jagah baat chal rahi hai.
Soni: jo log aapko dekhne aaye the rajnagar se(geet mamaji village) delhi wali ladki.
Maan ; ohhh,ji boliyo
Soni; dekhiye baki sab Hume pata hai par age ka chakkar padega kya aap apni date of birth bata sakte hai.
Maan; ji yes 25/10/1990.
Soni: ok ji, par ek baat hai humari didi aapse 2 ya 2.5 saal badi ho sakti hai.
Maan; dekhiye umar se koi fark nahi padta . Thoughts milni chahiye . Ye jaruri hai. Par aapke yaha ka address kho gaya mere se mein kaise aayunga .
Soni ; ji bilkul thik kaha aapne soch milni chahiye.or address mein aapko bata dungi jab aap aayege.
Soni phone rakh deti hai.
Soni : lo ho gai baat .ladke ko koi problem nahi hai.
Geet; ladke ko aapne 2 ya 2.5 year bada bataya hai . Isliye use koI prblm nahi.jab use pata chalega mein 5 saal badi hu. Tab bhi kya wo yahi kahega batayo.
Soni; tum 5 saal badi ho.
Geet: ha uski date of birth ke hisab se .
Rano : to kya hua mat batana usse, kya fark padta hai.
Geet: mere saare document mein hai likhi meri age.ganv mein chalta hai ye sab .sahro mein to documents hote hai.kaise jhuth bol sakti hu .shadi ke baad agar usne dekh liya to kya hoga tab.kya kahungi mein.mujhe jhuth nahi bolna .shadi mein vishwas ka hona jaruri hai.pahle hi jhuth bolu aisa nahi karungi mein.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Part- 5
Prolouge
Ma:Tujhe karna hoga geet, nahi to kaise hogi Teri shadi, shadiyo mein thoda bahot jhuth to chalta hai, dekhne mein nahi lagti tu badi ,ladka dekhne mein tujhse bada lagta hai koi fark nahi padta.
Geet:Nahi ma mein jhuth nahi bolungi mujhse nahi hoga.baad mein pata chala to kya hoga. Wo log naraz hue to tab kya karungi mein.mein to kahinki nahi rahungi.isse achaa hai mein aise hi rahu.
Mein chote ladke se shadi nahi karungi bas.
Ma gusse me:par ladke ko koi prblm nahi hai to tujhe kya prblm hai.
Geet: ladke ko ye pata hai ki ladki 1 ya 2 saal badi hai isliye use prblm nahi usse ye nahi pata ki mein 5 saal badi hu.
Ma: tu aise hi karti rahegi to ek din mein bhi chali jayungi tere papa or chacha ki tarah.wo log to chale gaye Teri shadi ke khawab dekhte dekhte.mera nikalna mushkil hai sab kahte hai kab kar rahe ho geet ki shadi.ladka dekha ke nahi,ab to log cast se bahr ke rishte batate hai or wo bhi jinki pahli biwi mar jati hai ya phir talak huya hota ha.mein to bas itna chahti hu tera ghar base or baap ki ijjat bani rahe jaise puri zindagi bani rahi.
Geet: thik hai jaisi tumahri marji.kar do mein dekh lungi baad mein apne aap.hamesha mujhe tum emotionally blackmail karti ho.pichli baar ka yaad hai na wo ladka 2 saal chota tha or 12 pass tha uske liye mujhse ha karwa li aapne mujhse par usne bhi mana kar diya ki ye kah ke ki ladki 2 saal badi hai.
Ma: iss baar nahi hoga tere mama bich mein hai unhone pakki baat kar rakhi hai.

Precap :
Mamaji: ladke wale 3 may( after 5 days) ko aayenge geet ko dekhne.tab tak Brij bhi aa jayega army se.
Rano: achha,thik hai.kon kon aayega.
Mamaji; 5 ya 6 log to aayege.tayyari kar lena.
Rano khusi se ;thik hai.
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Maan; aap ladki ko lekar metro station ya kisi restaurant mein aa jayiyo. Hum punjabhi bagh metro station pe hai.
Soni: ji ye aapko pahle bolna tha.aap is time bol rahe hai. Hum ghar pe aapka intzar kar rahe hai subah se.saara intzam ghar pe kiya. Ab aise ekdum to hum nahi aa sakte.agar aapko aana hai to ghar pe aayo.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: shree2

Nice story... I read all ur parts in one go...

Geet is matured than Maan... Waiting to know how they make a successful couple...

Continue soon...


Thanks dear 😊
Yes geet is matuared than maan.
Wo successful couple banege par abhi usme time hai story abhi bahot turn legi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Part -6
Next day on phone conversation
Mamaji: ladke wale 3 may( after 5 days) ko aayenge geet ko dekhne.tab tak Brij bhi aa jayega army se.
Rano: achha,thik hai.kon kon aayega.
Mamaji; 5 ya 6 log to aayege.tayyari kar lena.
Rano khusi se ;thik hai.
Rano; 5 din baad ladke wale aa rahe hai geet ko dekhne.abhi Sunder ne bataya. Soni tayyari kar lo.or geet tu bhi kar Le jo tujhe tayyari karni hai.
Soni; ji mummy ji.
Geet akele mein yahi sochti hai kya karu tayyari har baar karti hu kuch nahi hota.
In phone conversation (3 may)
Mohan(maan's uncle): hello ji mein Maan ka chacha ji bol raha hu
Soni; namaste ji, ji boliyo aa to aap log aa rahe hai na.
Mohan: ji ha par hum ye puch rahe the ki kya hum ladke ko la sakte hai.
Soni.ha ji bilkul.hum to chahte hai ki ladka aaye or ladki, ladka ek dusre ko pasand kare.
Mohan: thik hai phir hum aate hai.
Soni; ladke walo ka phone tha puch rahe the ladke ko la sakte hai ya nahi.wo ganv ki tarah soch rahe honge.jaise ganv mein parents pasand karkr hi rishta pakka kar dete hai. To unhe lag raha hoga ki kahi hum mana na kar de.
Rano; chalo tayyar ho jayo wo log aa rahe hai to.
Geet ke sabhi gharwale tayyar ho jate hai or ladke walo ka intzar karte hai intzar karte karte 2 pm ho jata hai to Brij Mohan ko phone karta hai.
Mohan; hello
Brij; ji namaste , mein ladki ka bhai bol raha hu aap aane wale the . Aap kab tak aayenge.
Mohan : wo kya hai na ji plan cancel ho gaya.
Brij: ji hum to aapka wait kar rahe hai .
Mohan; wo baat aisi hai ki ladke ki chuuti nahi hai.hum parso Sunday ko 9 am hi aa jayenge.
Brij in amazement: ji ye aap phone karke bata hi dete. Chalo thik hai aap Sunday ko aayiye.
Rano; kya hua
Brij: wo aaj nahi aa rahe Sunday ko aayenge. Ladke ki chutti nahi hai.
Soni: ye kya baat hai, yaha hum paaglo ki tarah unka wait kar rahe hai or wo ek phone tak nahi kar sakte.ajeeb log hai.
Rano: pata nahi geet ki kaisi kismat hai, kitni rukawate aati hai Jab bhi kahi baat chalti hai.
Chalo Sunday ko baat ban jaye to bhi thik hai.

Geet whatsupp pe reet se baat karti hai use sab kuch batati hai rishte ke baare mein.
Reet; waise hai to wo log ajeeb hi, par koi nahi Sunday tak wait karte hai.
Geet: mujhe ye prblm nahi reet.prblm age ki hai.yaar iss baar bhi waise hi sabkuch hua to. Bura lagta hai har baar reject hokar.
Reet; tu aise kyu sochti hai , ladke ne jab khud kaha hai use prblm nahi , tu tension na le khus rah bas.
Geet; sab kah rahe hai age ke liye jhuth bolu.mein nahi bolna chahti.
Reet; nahi bilkul nahi tu sach boliyo ,use karni hogi to karega nahi to na kare.tere liye or achha rishta aayega.
Geet; ok .chal bye.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-7
Sunday 10 am
Brij Mohan ko phone karta hai.
Brij; ji aap log kaha pahuche.
Mohan; ji abhi to hum ghar se nahi nikle, 11 baje niklenge.
Brij; ji aapne kaha tha ki aap 9 baje hi pahuch jayenge.thik hai phir.
After 3 hour
Mohan Brij ko phone karta hai ki aap ladki ko lekar kahi bahar aa jayo ladka mana kar raha haI ghar pe aane se.
Brij: ji humne ghar mein tayyari kar rakhi hai.aap pahle batate hum aa jate .thik hai mein ma se puch kar batata hu.
Brij ghar mein puchta hai ki kya kare.
Rano: ye kya baat huyi .soni ladke se phone pe pucho kya pareshani hai.
Soni; ji mummy.
Soni kayi tarah se Maan ko samjhatii hai par wo nahi manta.

Maan; aap ladki ko lekar metro station ya kisi restaurant mein aa jayiyo. Hum punjabhi bagh metro station pe hai.
Soni: ji ye aapko pahle bolna tha.aap is time bol rahe hai. Hum ghar pe aapka intzar kar rahe hai subah se.saara intzam ghar pe kiya. Ab aise ekdum to hum nahi aa sakte.agar aapko aana hai to ghar pe aayo.
Rano; ye to Inn logo ki ajeeb baat hai.
Soni; ladka soch raha hai jaise hum jabardasti usko pakad ke yaha shadi na kara de..
Soni: ab nahi karni iss ladke se shadi.
Rano ; aise mat kaho, tej se kaho wo baat kare ladke se.
Phir tej Maan ko 1/2 hour tak samjhta hai tab Maan ghar pe jaane ke liye tayyar hota hai.

Ghar pe Maan , Mohan or dau ji, aate hai lucky , Brij or geet ke dusre mamaji unka aadar satkar karte hai.
Unko tea or snacks serve karte hai.
Geet sab ke samne isliye nahi aati kyunki unki family mein bahu sab ke samne aise nahi aati balki unhe gunghat karna hota hai.
In a room
Soni,geet dono room mein hoti hai tabhi Maan aata hai.
Maan soni se namaste karta hai or geet ki taraf dekhte huye hello kahta hai usi time geet namaste kahti hai, geet andar hi andar nervous hoti hai par jaise pahle or ladke aaye the tab shivering hoti thi is baar aisa kuch nahi Ho raha tha.
Maan mushkurate huye soni ki taraf dekhkar : meri picture to bilkul saaf hai.mere baare mein aap sab kuch jaante hai par inke baare mein mujhe kuch nahi pata.
Soni;inhone to m.a kiya hai or b.ed kiya hai.
Soni geet se kahti hai aap batao na apne baare mein.
Geet; neeche muh karke kahti hai meine b.ed ,m.a kiya hai.
Or abhi private school mein padha rahi hu. Govt job ke liye koshish kar rahi hu.or kisi private achhe school mein job ke liye try kar rahi .
Tabhi soni waha se chali jati hai.kahti hai mein abhi aayi aap Dono baat karo.
Maan: aapne apni study regular ki hai.
Geet; ji meine B.A regular ki hai phir M.A correspondence se ki hai phir B.ed regular.
Maan: dekho mein graduation ki huyi hai or abhi mein M.B.A karne wala hu.ab tak ho jati par kuch problem ki wajah se nahi ho payi.
Maan ; aapne graduation konse year mein ki thi.
Geet; 2004 mein.
Maan mushkurate huye: meine10th ki thi 2005 mein.
Geet;ohh,hmm,age mein gap to hai hi.
Maan; nahi itna bhi nahi ha.
Geet Maan ki taraf dekhti hai.kuch alag hi mahsoos karti hai.
Maan: aapko mujhse kuch puchna hai.
Geet: ek baat puchu
Maan: ha
Geet: kya aap drink ya phir
Maan ekdum bolta hai; nahi nahi mai bilkul pure vegetarian hu means mein drink, tabacoo, cigarettes etc in sabhi chhejo se dur rahta hu.
Geet andar hi andar khus hoti hai; ji mujhe bas yahi puchna tha,.
Maan; agar aap mind na kare to kya mein ek baat puch sakta hu.
Geet; ha
Maan; aapki date of birth kya hai.
Geet thoda ruk kar bata deti hai: wo kahti hai ki meri age documents mein galat likhi hai ek saal jyada likhi hai.
Maan : koi nahi wo to kayi baar ho jati hai.
Geet : ji meri 84 likhi hai jo galat hai.
Maan; nahi mein to aise hi puch raha tha.
Maan: aage aap kaise karoge.
Geet innocent way mein; ji mein to job karungi.
Maan;nahi mein shadi ke baad aap kaise manage karoge wo puch raha hu.
Geet:ohh,wo to mein kar lungi, usme kya hai aajkal to ladkiya job bhi karti hai or ghar bhi achhi tarah se sambhalti hai.
Or phir mein to job ab bhi karti hu.
Maan: ok, par agar manage na ho paya to kya karegi aap.
Geet confidence se kahti hai: mein kar lungi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maan; ok, dekhiye mein abhi do saal tak shadi nahi karna chahta. Par ma or papaji chahte hai ki mein shadi karu.
Pichle ek saal se kuch jyada hi kah rahe hai.
Geet Maan ki baato ko bahot hi dhayan se sunti hai.
Maan; jo ma or papaji chahege wahi hoga, mein to dekhne bhi nahi aata wo to mujhe kaha ladki itni padhi hai, (geet Maan ki taraf confusion se dekhti hai) tabhi ekdum Maan bolta hai ki aisa nahi hai ki mujhe apne upar confidence nahi, par phir bhi samne wale ki expectations ka pata hona chahiye.
Geet: ha ye to hai Hume pata hona chahiye ki samne wale ki kya expectations hai nhi to difference aate hai aage chal kar.
Maan; ha, aapko aur kuch puchna hai mujhse
Geet : nahi .
Maan; ok thanks.
Or phir Maan chala jata hai.or soni upar aati hai.

Precap
Rano bahot hi khusi se geet ke sir pe hath rakhti hai or kahti hai; pahli baar meri beti ko shagun ke paise mile hai,aaj mein bahot khus hu.Rano ki aankho mein khusi ke aas aa jate hai.
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Brij; wo log phone nahi utha rahe.
Rano; kya ho gaya jo wo humara phone nahi utha rahe na hi unhone koi phone kiya

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