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~Rejected Love~

a big thank you to all my readers , for supporting me till now, i can't believe that i reached on its 3rd thread, its just because of all ur support and love for this story. I hope u all enjoy it till the end😳😃
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INDEX

Part 33-page 3
Part 34-page 19
Part 35-page 31
Part 36-page 44
Part 37-page 60
Part 38-page 73
Part 39 A/B- page 89/90
Part 40- page 108
Part 41- page 129

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Congrats for new thread
eagerly waiting 4 next part..
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Awesome story.
Read all parts in one go.
Yash is maans cousin. Lol
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Part 33

Yash(st)-Geet!!!

Geet-yash, out of shock geet whispered yash's name, as it was just a whisper so no boday apart from maan heard it...

Maan looked at geet but geet's whole concentration was somewhere else, maan followed her gaze which landed on yash, to his surprise even yash was looking at geet only..

Maan(st)- why are they looking at each other, they know each other?? but how??, yash lives in pune then how???, all these questions were wondering in maan's mind which got a break with Bd's voice..

BD- maan beta , from where are u both coming??, she said when she saw the luggage which geet was holding..

Maan knew this question will arise if BD sees the luggage and he was well prepared for a long answer too..

Maan- woh..we.. but he was interrupted by his over smart younger brother..

Vicky- arre grandma , the newly wed couple , samjh jao kaha jayege and he winked at her..

BD-oh honeymoon, but maan so long , she teased maan and maan was so pissed off with his brother that he gave deadly glare to him, poor vicky made a face and showed that he was just trying to help...

BD- oh so this was what u were trying to tell savitri aur mujhe laga koi serious baat ho gi...

Poor dadima , she was planning to tell BD everything today even on phone she tried to tell her the truth but when she heard her properly that she will hear now , so she decided to talk face to face but now seeing maaneet together she don't know what to say so she just nodded her head in agreement..

BD went close to maaneet , maaneet bowed down to take her blessing, after blessing them she said- sorry to disturb u both but kya kare mera mann maana hi nahi..she looked at geet carefully and caressed her face.. very beautiful , then she took bit to khol from her eye and applied it behind geet's ear..kissi ki nazar na lage! chaliye ab ander aayi..

while entering inside maan ordered nakul to take geet's luggage in his room..

All settled on sofa's,dadima along with a servant went to kitchen to arrange the refreshments , yash was sitting opposite of maaneet with vicky and he was still trying to figure out what's going on.. he tried to have talk with geet through eyes , but she has bowed her eyes down so it was not possible, maan was looking at yash only and seeing his continuous gaze on geet was somewhere irritating him so to clear the air of confusion , he for the first time initiated a conversation..

Maan and Yash are of same age, yash is just 3 months younger than maan, and from their younger age yash was taught by his grandma to call maan as bhai, now he have developed the habit of calling maan bhai..

Maan- aa..so yash how's life going on??, yash who was till lost in his thoughts came out of it with maan's voice..

Yash- aa..bhai..everything is going great ..

BD-won't u tell him about ur mistakes??

Yash- grandma we have already discussed this many times right, then why u drag this topic again n again..yash was frustrated now, yes he know what he did was wrong but his family has not left any option for him and to achieve his dreams he took that step ,and now even he payed more than what he have taken then what's the point of discussion on that..

BD- YASH! IS THIS WAY TO TALK TO ME!

Yash- maan bhai actually what happened is...

Yash told everything to maan , apart from his company name and about geet working there

Maan- great! but u could have come to me , u won't have to struggle that much..

Yash- nahi bhai i wanted to do it in my own way

Maan felt proud of yash but BD was disappointed to see maan supporting yash

BD- maan won't u scold him for what he did??

Maan- no i don't think he did any wrong it was ur family who forced him to take that step..

BD- so u wanted to say that accepting ur son to continue the family business is wrong!

Maan- when i said that , u can accept anything from ur child but the point is the child should also be interested in that.. by the way yash what's ur company name??

Yash- bhai , company is still growing , when we will be able to compete with KC u will urself get to know..

Maan- i will be waiting...

Yash looked at his watch and then said- i think i should go now..

BD- where r u going, going to meet meera??

Yash- u already know , then why are u asking ??

BD- how many times i have told u that i don't like ur and her friendship but still..

Yash- u never like anything about me so... leave it..i'm going.. vicky say my bye to dadima..

Vicky- hmm

BD- YASH YASH !, she kept shouting but yash left.. IT'S all because of that meera , she had made my grandson so rebellious...

Geet heard that and she doesn't like it at all but she can't say anything..

Dadima who was coming out of kitchen witnessed this and tried to cool the situation..

Dadima- didi u won't u taste these snacks , it's all ur fav..

BD- savitri i'm not in a mood to have all these , i hope my room is ready i'm going to rest..

Dadima- ji its ready..

BD- hmm.. and she left from there..

Vicky- uff BD ke mood ka pata h nahi chalta..

for dadima its not new she knows about BD mood swings but there was other thing which is worrying her right now so she turned towards maaneet and asked..

Dadima- maan why u brought geet here, i already told u not to do all this still u..

Maan- dadima please don't lecture me on this , i haven't forced geet , i shared my problem and she agreed..

Dadima-and do u think after this i will not tell the truth , then u are wrong!

Geet- nahi dadima please..i'm here on my own will, mr.khurana have not forced and seeing BD anger and mood swing's i think its better to stay here..

Dadima- geet..i know what u might be going through , u don't have to do this...

Geet- dadima u have done so much for me and what i'm doing is still very less..

Dadima- but geet..

Geet- please dadima ..promise me u won't tell the truth to BD....

Dadima-i'm fed of all this , if u want this then okay i won't tell anything.. i'm just getting tried of all this.. saying so she to left from there..

Geet- mr.khurana where is my luggage??

Maan- in my room..

without saying anything geet left towards his room... maan silently watched her going then a thought strike him and he went behind her..

Vicky- sometimes i feel my family drama can give a competition to daily soaps!

Geet reached outside maan's room, the past memory strike her ..

Geet(st)- no geet its not the time to get weak , remember that u r doing all this for dadima and its just a matter of few days and plus u don't have time to waste on these matters.. with a new confidence she opened the door and entered inside..

she glanced here and there to locate her bag , seeing it she grabbed it and pulled it to one corner.. at the same time maan entered there and saw her..

Maan- i knew that u will face this problem, don't worry i have emptied one side of my cupboard , u can keep ur things there..

Geet- no mr.khurana i will manage here..

Maan- Geet.. i don't want my room to be messy and u putting ur stuffs at one corner will make it messy so its better if u do what i say..

Geet-but..

Maan- don't forget its my room..

Geet didn't say anything but a clear anger can be seen on her face , she dragged her bag near the wardrobe , filled it with her stuffs , she was going to leave from there when maan stopped her..

Maan- geet.. thank u.. for coming here , i.. but geet cut him in between..

Geet- mr.khurana i'm doing what i should have..

Maan- geet get a habit of calling me maan..not mr.khurana BD will not like it..

With that he left from there...

Geet sat on the bed and remembered what happened in these two days with her..


Flashback

It was Friday night , as yash left in morning , it was only meera and geet in the house, both had dinner and meera asked geet to join her in watching movie , geet agreed..

They were enjoying the romantic comedy when geet cell ranged..

Geet- phone at this time??

Meera- why what happened??

Geet- nahi woh.. no one calls me at this time..

Meera- hmm may be ur lover.. meera said in teasing manner..

Geet- meera tum bhi..

Geet went to the table where her phone was kept , and looked at the screen , it was an unknown number(maan's number is not saved in geet's phone)

Geet- unknown number...

Meera- geet i'm telling u its ur deewana phone only..koi tumhare pyaar mei pad gaya hai..

Geet- meera...

Meera- meera nahi.. answer the phone and say hello..the other person might be getting impatient now!

Geet shook her head and was just going to press the call button when phone got cut..

Meera- see i told u.. meera gave a knowing look to geet..

Here on other side, maan waited for geet to pick up the call..

Maan- this geet!!! How much time a person take to pick up a call.. ahh!!!!!!! Maan ek aur baar try kar..

And he again called her..

Geet thought that call was not so important that's why the person didn't called again and her other reason for not calling back was it was unknown number..as she was thinking to get back and watch the movie her phone again ranged..

Meera- here it goes again.. geet go outside and talk , my fav song is coming up i don't want any disturbance..

Geet rolled her eyes on meera and went in balcony to answer the call..

Geet- hello..

Maan- hello geet..

Geet was shocked to hear maan..

Geet- maan..

Maan- mm..ya..woh i want to discuss something with u.. , maan waited for geet to reply but looks like geet was in some other world..

Maan- geet??? R u there?? Hello??

Geet- ya.. mr.khurana .. what u want to discuss??

Maan- geet its bit personal ..if u won't mind i want to meet u ..

Geet- regarding what u want to discuss??

Maan- geet i told u na its personal..

Geet- hmm..okay

Maan- okay then give me ur address i will meet u tomorrow..

Geet- sorry mr.khurana, all day i don't stay at home ..

Maan- okay then u tell where u want to meet and when..

Geet told him the place and time ,and then they hanged the call..

Geet came inside having a lost expression on her face..

Meera- what happened geet, u look lost, whose call was it??

Geet- nothing..na i was not that important..

Meera- okay .. now come and enjoy the movie

During whole movie meera tried to cheer up geet but geet was in her world wondering what maan wants to discuss with her, whether its regarding them but whenever this thought comes in here mind , she scold herself for this

Geet(st)- no geet don't think on those lines.. u have already decided not to accept anything from maan then why this..no this is not right later these expectations will hurt u only, so don't think on those lines..

Movie ended..

Meera- so geet how was the movie..

Geet came out of her trance and looked at meera.. meera again repeated her question..

Geet- it was good..

Meera- lair!

Geet- nahi sacchi it was good!

Meera- accha what happened in end..

Geet- woh..

Meera- geet leave it.. u didn't even watched it properly and saying it was good , geet kya baat hai?? Anything disturbing u, u can share with me..

Geet- there's nothing meera..

Meera- okay don't say , i will wait for that day when u will feel free to discuss ur life with me.. bye ..good night!

Next Day

After office hours , maaneet met in nearby park..

Geet- what u want to discuss??

Maan- see geet actually my BD is coming here to meet my family..

Geet- so??

Maan- family includes dadima, vicky, me and MY WIFE, maan emphasized on my wife..

Geet- if u have forgotten then let me remind u, we don't share any relation mr.khurana

Maan- i know.. but my BD is coming here specially to meet my wife..

Geet- then appoint someone else as ur wife, it will be easy for u as u don't have to bear me..

Geet words were direct and it was somewhere hurting maan that geet wants him to appoint someone else on her place.. but mr. Arrogrant can't accept this right..

Maan- i wish i could but the problem is she already know ur name and plus thanks to my stupid brother she have seen her photo too so i don't have much options..

Geet- but u can say the truth about our relation..

Maan- i won't do that..

Geet- why??

Maan- because of dadima..

Geet gave a confused look to maan..

Maan- look geet, my dadima have beared much pain in her life and i don't want more pain for her..

In past when my grand pa passed away , BD blamed my dadima for all that , she accused her for his death , she said she is not capable of handling her own husband emotionally , then how will she manage me and vicky and KC and what not... due to her harsh words my dadima was in depression for 10 years , i and vicky were too small to pinpoint her depression at that time but when time passed , her behaviour her non-interest in life, , she used to do everything for us but nothing for herself , she became too mechanical in her life.. , our family doctor noticed all that and conveyed it to me, that's when i came to know about her depression , at that time i was in my teens , at that time i realized how much my dadima sacrificed for us , it took another 5yrs to take her out of depression and i don't want all that to repeat again..that's why i'm asking ur help geet..its not for me , its for dadima, u know now also she is thinking about u only , she don't want to hurt u again , that's why she is going to tell whole truth to BD, but i don't want that.. because i know how situations will change after BD comes to know about my failed marriage and for this too she will blame dadima... i hope geet u understand want i'm trying to say.. i won't force u to come back but just want u for dadima give it a thought.. i will wait for ur answer , if its yes call me before 7 am tomorrow.. , with that he left ..

That night geet thought about all this..

Geet(st)- dadima have done so much for me and now also she is thinking about me only ... i think now its time to do something her, babaji is giving me a chance to say thanks to her, and if doing this will help her to escape the torture then why not.. i will do it , and its just a matter of few days, i think i won't be that difficult .. with these thoughts she decided to again go to km..

Next morning she called maan and told her decision maan was thankful to her... and asked her from where to pick her up, geet told the address of same park ..

Flashback ends..

Geet came out of her thoughts and looked outside windows to see it was already evening time..., geet decided to go downstairs ..

Dadima and BD were in living area and were discussing something, geet was confused whether to join them or not.. but dadima saw her and call her to join them..

BD- must say savitri u have found a beautiful girl for maan..

Dadima just smiled at this..

BD- so geet r u liking ur in laws , savitri take good care of u right??

Geet- ji, i'm very lucky to have a mother in law like her..

BD- hmm impressive!

They continued to have normal talks, with which time passed and soon it was time to prepare dinner..

BD- so geet, today i'm here what special will u cook for me??

Geet- cook?? Woh..

Maan- BD we have so many servants around , why u want geet to cook??, said maan who just came there and heard the conversation..

BD- why can't she?? Oh wait a second she doesn't know cooking right?? And here i was thinking first time savitri did something perfect but na.. she found a bahu who doesn't know how to cook, great!

Maan- it doesn't matter we have so many servants around to cook..

BD- oh so u want to say ur dadima is one of them as i know till now she cooks for u and vicky..

Maan- BD!!!

Dadima- maan bas!!!! Go to ur room , geet go behind him..

Dadima doesn't wanted geet to see all this , that's why sent geet behind maan..

With full anger maan entered inside his room , and throw the files on bed and left to washroom.. Geet doesn't know what to do..

Night-

All have dinner silently , maan doesn't want to have it with BD but dadima forced him and said that she is elder u have to respect her..


Maan's room


Geet was making her bed on coach when maan came out of washroom and saw her..

Maan- geet.. u can sleep on bed..

Geet- but..

Maan- geet i'm not in a mood to argue with u right now..

Geet thought that he is still angry on evening matter so thought its better not to get in argument and do what he wants..

She was going to remove the blanket from coach when maan stopped her..

Maan- wait.. don't remove it..

Geet looked at him

Maan- woh.. i will sleep there..

Geet- but u will not be comfortable here..

Maan- u don't have to worry about it, i will manage..

Geet- but..

Maan- geet i said na no arguments!

Geet-hmm..

With that she left to washroom to change.. few minutes later she came out wearing her normal night dress a salwar with printed top..

Maan who was till now busy in his file ,glanced at her but soon diverted his eyes..

Geet sat in front of mirror and started combing her hairs , maan was again n again getting tempted to look at her ,maan(st)- maan stop it! And concentrate on ur file!

Soon geet's combing completed she pulled her hairs up and tied it in bun, maan was carefully observing her every action , she got up from there and moved towards bed.. lied down and pulled blanket on her .. she behaved as if no other person was present in room..

Maan- geet u can close the lights , i'm done..

Without saying anything geet closed the light!



phew!! completed..,i was going to include yash meera and geet scene too , but then thought it will get more long..so stopping here...

hope u all liked this update..

waiting for ur reviews

thank u for reading it😊

Edited by GurTi123 - 9 years ago

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