The Princess and the Pauper (2) Ch 12, pg 123, new thread pg 1 ****

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shruti

@gshruti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#881

Nice update

Thank u for the quick update

Maan has introduce geet as wife but geet denies it

They both are in pain

Waiting for your surprise

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#882

awesome part..

maan is irritated seeing romeo instead of geet

he loaded him with works to keep geet away from him

adi beating maan

n geet rushing to help him

maan intro her as his wife

geet denied it making maans heart bleed

he let her speak n know she is lying

now what maan wants for his ehsaan

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jasika

@jasika08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#883

Awesome update

Love it😛

waiting for next update

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shree2

@shree2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#884

chapter 12

Nice update...

Maan overloaded romeo in order to avoid his presence with geet , shows how much possesive he is...

Maan & adi friendship is nice and maan intro her as GMSK is superb...

The talk between maan & geet clears maan what she expect from him and how well he is going to overcome the hurdles in future...

Waiting for the surprise...

continue soon...

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Kshitija

@krndr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#885

Romeo ruined Maan's surprise for Geet

But Maan is Maan God he's overburdened Romeo with indepth detailing of work so that he doesn't come near Geet

So Maan rearranged the whole surprise for Geet again once he sent Romeo away

Geet also loved the surprise but thought that was Maan's way of taking care of his best friend

Loved Adi and Maan cute fight scene

But Geet's words left Maan hurt

And he realised what his rejection might have done to her at that time

Geet's words about leaving him and going away once she's a bit stable with life has pierced Maan like anything

He will definitely not let her go away from him now at any cost

Waiting for more

I may not be reading the updates regularly for the rest of the month due to exams

So plz pm me the blog link and password

Will comment on all parts once I am free

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#886

Lemme guess ...maan is going to say...geet kya tum meri jhoothi biwi banogi kuch dino ke liye...dadimaa ki khushi ke liye...hi hi
Aree whatever he is going to say - it it going yo take the story to beautiful maaneet moments.

I m so excited.can't wait.

N phir apni matchmaking dadimaa to hai hi to act as a catalyst.

Jaldi avi next part.luv u

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#887

Chapter 12
You had to stop there. This is Dusht Danavgiri.🤔

Maan cleverly overloaded Romeo with work removing the speedbreaker away from his ruki-ruki si love story.

Hayye! He arranged everything anew for Geet. I thought that this would go under another failed attempt with Geet arriving to witness the same site of Romeo gorging on food. But thats MSK.

She was happy with Maan's efforts. Adi is a funny guy.

Oops! He struck Maan's raw nerve. Finally, finally,, finally they have it all out in open.
She dismissed all her love under the veil of friendship and craziness. Welcome Maan, that was just the tip of iceburg she suffered with your rejection.

She kept on building walls around her fragile heart, unsuccessfully trying to mask her pain. Ab toh she is not going to believe him if he confesses, her hurt is too deep. His every gesture is going to look like an obligation in her perspective.

Geet is too naive otherwise this cold attitude would have been a perfect revenge.

He was shattered. And now he has to rebuild his love story from scratch.

The whisper of her heart was so poignant.

Good that instead of drowning in guilt, he is ready to suffer her punishment and is going to ask her something.

And song dedication for Maan:

"Ehsaan tera hoga mujhpar, Dil chahta hai jo kehne do,
Mujhe tumse mohobbat ho gai hai, Mujhe palko ki chao mei rehne do."

Edited by pearl.white - 9 years ago

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miss_mystery

@miss_mystery

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Posted: 9 years ago

#888

Chapter 7

Amazing Update Avi...firstly Sorry please accept my heartily apologies

Superb Update And Beautifully written

Eagerly waiting for next

Take Care

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Aishwarya

@Drashtirocks1

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#889

Brilliant update.. I sooo loved Adi's character.. its hilarious and seeing Adi and Maan's relationship is sure gonna be fun. I also liked the concern that Romeo showed for Geet and as I said earlier, he's gonna be the perfect ally for geet for a long long time. Maan has a long way to go before he removes Geet's pain with his love. He has a lot of things to mend and lot of healing has to be done in Geet. Eager to know what he asks Geet.

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#890

Awesome update. Maan gave so much work to Romeo to keep him away from Geet. Loved Adi and Maan bonding. Geet is trying to let Maan free from her responsibility and tell him to ask anything in return to the favor he did for her.