The Princess and the Pauper (2) Ch 12, pg 123, new thread pg 1 ****

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is a short story

It is something I was writing for the Kehna hi kya celebration thread but could not finish in time for submission date.

If you guys like it I can expand a little bit

do let me know if you want to read it.

As usual first part will be here, the remaining on the blog

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INDEX

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

THREAD 3

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks to all my readers for their likes and comments😃

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congratulations for the new thread dear 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

TEASER

"Kissi ka dil todna sab se bada apraadh hai Maan. Sazaa toh dono ko hogi aur saath saath mujhe bhi. Ab Geet ka dil jodna hai. Mujhe vishwas hai ki aap uski umeed, uska intezaar, uska pyar, uska bharosa kabhi nahi todege".

Daadima hugged him to her heart.

One the one side was her heart and on the other side were her principles.

Maan walked away from Daadima but stopped near the door.

"Aap jo sazaa de wo mujhe manzoor hai Daadima. Maine aap dono ka dil dukhaya hai so I deserve this. Par aap galat hai.

Aap jitna Geet ko mujhse duur rakhoge, utna wo aur suffer karegi. This is not my ego. This is the truth. Main Hoshiarpur main dekh ke aaya hu ye baat.

Geet mere bina kabhi khush nahi rahegi. Jo zakhm maine diye hai, wo sirf main hi bhar sakta hu Daadima.

I won't argue with you or fight you about this. Aap ko khud ye baat samajh aa jaayegi. I will wait for you to give me a chance to fix everything.

But be aware Daadima. I won't wait forever. If I find that Geet is not happy, I will not obey anything you tell me. All bets will be off then".

A/N: So Daadima and Maan have spoken. Ab Geet kya kahegi?

By the way, tum sab meri tarah pagal ho!!

Ek OS ko story bana diya.. Acche se maan jaate toh story would be done by now.

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tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

hi Avi

nice teaser

yeh part toh pehle hi bata diya tha tumne last update mein ..

abgeet kya karegi yeh jaanna hai mujhe ..

os hai hi itni mast ki yeh os choti si story mein complete hi nahi ho sakti thi ..so SS chalega ..woh bhi lambe wala 7 ya 8 parts nahi ..25 parts tak chalega..ya phir usse bhi zayada..😉

waiting for next ..princess kya karegi ..eagerly waiting for that

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TangledThoughts

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Posted: 9 years ago

Arey wah!! Teaser diya !! Yay!!

Lovely!! Chalo finally Maan understood ki Geet ke dil mei kya hai and her happiness solely and wholely lies in him. And love the way he is keeping her happiness as his topmost priority despite accepting his punishment graciously.

And abhi toh background set hua hai dear... We are crazily waiting for their love to bloom again and sherni in action. Also Maan has to woo back his lady. So yeh OS kaise rahega?? Itna strong concept hai toh let it roll!!

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nish285

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lolll..
Avvviii...ab tum stories hee itne romantic likhtee ho...ke mann hee nahee karta ke tum story end karo...

Aur plzzz jaldi update de dooo...plzzz...