MG OS: Deewanapan - Ek Ishq Nai Junoon Hai, epilogue- page 18, 2 nov

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DEEWANAPAN - EK ISHQ NAI JUNOON HAI

PART 1


A man is standing infront a potraite of a girl.
In the potraite the girl is smiling. He touched
the smile of the girl and said, "Jaan, plz come
back. Look, it's been 5 years. How can u still
be angry with me? Bolo. I can't stay alone
anymore. I need to see u. Mujhe pata hain,
maine jo kia woh mafi ki layak nehi hain. Bt
still u know na, how am i? Gusse mein kuch
bhi bol deta hu. Par tum toh humesha mujhe
maaf kar deti ho na. Phir iss baar bhi maaf
kar do. I promise age se aisa galti kabhi bhi
nehi hogi. Bas ek baar mere pass wapas aa
jao. Main tumhe phir kahi nehi jane dunga.
Plz jaan, i can't live without you anymore. You
have to come back to ur Maan. Yup, ur Maan.
I knw jab tum yaha thi main kabhi bhi tumse
pyaar nehi kia. Bt jab tum mujhse durr chali
gayi tab mujhse pata chala ki main tumse
kitna pyaar karta hu. Tumhare bina main
adhura hu Geet. Geet k bina Maan adhura
hain. And now i'm promising u ki in next 3
days i'll find u. Be prepared jaan, i'm coming.
Mujhe pata hain tum itni asani se toh manogi
nehi bt main tumhe mana lunga. I LOVE U
JAAN."
Yup this is The Maan Singh Khurana, the multi
billionaire. Bt he stays alone as his family
refused to talk or keep any relation with him.
He very well knew that he deserved it. Still it
pains him a lot. Bt he have to bare this
punishment for hurting his jaan. He still
remembered his past, which hunts him still in
sleep also. Thinking all this he sliped into his
past.
-PAST-
Maan's and Geet's family are friends. Maan's
family are rich bt Geet's family are middle
class. Bt this things never come between their
friendship. Maan was 1 year old, when Geet
born. Everybody was so happy. Maan's father
Raj wants to take their friendship in
relationship. So, he asks Geet's father
Mohinder for Geet's hand for Maan. Mohinder
and Rano was hesitate first as they are middle
class. Bt Maan's Daadima aka savitri devi
assured them. Atlast they agreed. Bt they kept
it as secret. They want to bring that topic
when Maan and Geet will be big enough. As
Maan and Geet started to grow up, they
always used to stay together. And the elders
feels soo happy to see them together. Bt when
Maan and Geet starts going to school from
then problems starts. At first they stayed
together in school. Bt after that Maan starts
making friends who are also rich like him. He
starts stayed with them and aviod Geet. First
first Geet thought he is busy, thats why he is
not talking with her. Bt as time pass by Geet
realise that Maan was avoiding her
intentionally. She was deeply hurt bt she
didn't say anything. At first Maan avoided her
bt after that slowly slowly he starts insulting
her infront of everyone. Bt Geet always forgive
him because Geet loved him since childhood.
Bt as time pass by it became unbearable for
her. In college Maan makes gf. Her name was
sameera. She was cunning and gold diggar.
She was with Maan because of his money.
Whenever Geet used to see them together it
always pinced her heart. Bt she always wants
Maan's happiness. Bt Maan used to insult her
infront of sameera. There family was unware
of the situation. So, they thought that this is
the right time for their marriage. They starts
talks among themselves. That time Maan was
passing by the room. He listened their talk
and anger rushed though his veins. He went to
Geet's house. Geet's parents was sitting in the
hall. They were kinda surprised seeing him
there at that time.
Mohinder: arey Maan beta. Tum yaha iss
waqt?
Maan: mujhe Geet se baat karna hain.
He said rudely. Rano smiled and said.
Rano: Haan, beta. Woh apni kamre mein hain.
Maan went to Geet's room. Geet was studying
that time. Maan starts clapping his hands.
Maan: Congratulation, Geet. Tum logo ki
planning successful ho gayi.
Geet got confussed listening his talk.
Geet: yeh tum kya bol rahe ho Maan?
Maan: akhir aahi gaye na tum log apni aukad
pe, u Bitch...
Maan spatt. Geet stood shocked there. Maan
always insults her bt never used this kind of
language. Geet got angry.
Geet: Mind ur language Maan. How dare u
talk to me like this?
Maan got angry and pinned Geet in the wall
and said.
Maan: How dare i? How dare i? Huh? How
dare u and ur flithy family thought that u can
trap me and my family?
Maan's grip was tight and it was giving
paining to geet.
Geet: yeh kya bol rahe ho tum mujhe kuch
samaj nehi aa rahi hain.
Maan: dn't show this innocent face to me, yeh
mere family ko dhoka de sakta hain par mujhe
nehi.
Geet: Matlab?
Maan: yeh planning tum aur tumhari ghatia
family ki hi hain na, humari shaadi karwane
ka.
Geet: what???
Maan: itna chauk kyun gayi? Tum log yahi
chahte ho na. Toh tumhe yeh bhi toh pata
hain ki shaadi k baad suhagraat hoti hain.
Toh chalo hum shaadi se pehle hi suhagraat
mana lete hain.
Saying this Maan started to force himself on
Geet. Geet panicked.
Geet: Maan... Maan... Yeh tum kya kar rahe
ho? Maan... Chodo mujhe. Chodo.
Maan: kyun.. Yahi toh chahte the na tum.
Geet: maan, plz chodo mujhe.
She starts crying. Maan held Geet's jaw tightly
and said.
Maan: Maan nehi Mr. Khurana kaho. Tum
jaise flith k muu se mera naam sunne mein
dirty lagta hain. Mera bas chale toh tumhari
shakal tak nehi dekhu, shaadi toh durr ki baat
hain. Isiliye tumhari bhalai isi mein hain ki
mujhse aur meri family se tum aur tumhari
family durr raho, u low class people.
Saying this Maan pushed Geet away. Geet fell
in the floor shattering her heart into pieces.
Geet sat in the floor numb by the situation.
Maan zoomed away from the room without
noticing the Mohinder was standing side of
the door listening everything. After Maan left,
Mohinder felt a sharp pain in his heart and
fell in the floor. Rano saw this and rushed
towards Mohinder.
Rano: ji, aapko kya hua? Suniye ji, uthiye..
Geeettt, geeettt. Jaldi yaha aa. Dekh tere
papaji ko kuch ho gaya hain.
Listening her's mothers screaming, Geet stood
up from the floor and rushed to them.
Geet: papaji, papaji. Uthiye. Kya hua aapko?
Papaji...
Mohinder opened his eyes slowly and said
with difficulty.
Mohinder: Geet puttar, inn.. Sab.. Sab.. Ka..
Zim.. Zimmedar... Main.. Main.. Hu.. Woh..
Woh.. Maan.. Maan ne.. Jo.. Kuch bhi
Mohinder just fainted. Geet closed her eyes
realised this her father listened their talk.
Rano: geet, yeh kya bol rahe hain?
Geet: maa, hum iss bare mein baad mein baat
karte hain. Abhi papaji ko hospital le jana
jyada jaruri hain.
Rano nodded her head. With the help of their
servent rano and Geet took Mohinder to
hospital.
In hospital after checking Mohinder, doctors
rushed mohinder to OT as an emergency case.
Rano was crying badly bt Geet was frozed. Raj
called handa house. From their servent he
came to know that Mohinder was in hospital
and he was shocked beyond limits. Khurana
family went to hospital and asked reception
for Mohinder. The receptionist informed them
that, Mohinder is in OT. They went towards OT
and got shocked seeing Rano and Geet like
that.
Raj: bhabhiji, yeh achanak kya hua Mohinder
ko?
Rano: pata nehi bhaishab. Aaj Maan beta
ghar aya tha Geet se baat karne. Uske jane ke
baad achanak se inko kya hua, kuch pata nehi
chala.
Priya: Rano, tum chinta maat karo. Bhaishab
jaldi theek ho jayenge. Abhi toh inhe Maan
aur Geet ki shaadi bhi dekhni hain.
Listening this Geet snapped open her eyes.
Geet: kya kaha aapne?
Before priya could say something the light of
OT turned off and doctor come out from OT.

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Interesting
Waiting for update
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nice banner...looking forward to read the os..
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excellent story. Maan is so wrong and it is too bad his family does not see what trouble he has been causing.
Very curious to see what happens next.

Edited by 4ever4love - 9 years ago
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The Khurana Family and the Handa Family are close friends
but their financial status differ its not a problem for the elders but
it had become a problem for Maan and Geet
as Maan grew up he started becoming friends with the rich kids and started
ignoring Geet she was hurt by his behaviour yet she always felt his happiness
comes first than he found himself a girlfriend and Geet was more hurt still she accepted
One day Maan overhears his family speaking about his and Geet's marriage and it angers him
he rushes to Geet's house and accuse her and her family for trapping him and his family
as they are rich and the Handa's middle class
Geet's father overhears the conversation between Maan and Geet and he shocked to know
how Maan feels about all of them he is sad that because of him his daughter had to hear to
such harsh words and at the same time too Maan tried to force himself on Geet than he man handles her with this Geet's father faints and is taken into hospital
while Geet's mother does not know why or what is happening
now at present Maan is all alone and missing Geet now he calls her Jaan
waiting for next update
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I am very angry angry on Maan. 😡Hw can he accused Geet and her family for trapping him. It's his father who told Mohinder to convert their friendship to relationship.
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