MG OS: Deewanapan - Ek Ishq Nai Junoon Hai, epilogue- page 18, 2 nov - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fantastic update! wonderfully written! Maan lets his family knw that Geet n Rano left! Raj livid! Maan nw stays at the OH! he has no contact with his family! Maan totally crazily in love wid Geet! he finally gets 2 knw where she is! He is gng 2 get her! Geet in London! Her mom died! she is living all alone! Its her bday! she prays 2 her babaji n gets her parent's wishes! Geet at the office! New boss will b arriving! Geet is wished by her colleagues! the new boss MSK arrives! Geet stunned! Maan kisses her n says she is his fiance! Geet stunned! She is upset! Maan says their families knw each other! Maan apologises! Geet angry! She asks Maan if her can bring her dad back! she throws his words in his face! Maan sad bt its his fault! he has wrk hard 2 get her forgiveness! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice part dear
Update soon waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
awesome update dear...and its true that maan will do anything to get his geet,...ab bada maza aane wala hei...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb part...
loved it..quite an intense story and very gripping...
geet anger and hatred is justified..
waiting to see how maan make geet believe and love him again...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really good.
Geet in London and Maan coming back
Announcing Geet to be his fiancee.
Waiting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous update.. Geet lost her Mom too and living alone in London.. Maan got information about her and reached her and announced everyone as her fiancee and boss..Geet shouldn't forgive Maan as she lost her parents becoz of him.. Waiting for next..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG I am totally shocked with Maan's behavior with Geet. He is going in bullet train speed to get his Geet. But hold on Mr. Khurana it's not easy to get back Geet after ur sin.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'M SOO SORRY IF I DISAPPOINTED U GUYS. BT THIS IS AN OS AND MEANT TO FINISH LIKE THIS ONLY. NOW EPILOGUE REMAINS ONLY. THANK U ALL FOR LIKING MY OS. ANYONE INTERESTED IN CHUP CHUP KE'S NEXT PART??

LAST PART

Maan didn't knw that Geet left office. So, he
called his secretary and asked her to send
Geet in his cabin. His secretary informed him
that Geet left the office. Maan get very
disappointed.
In Geet's appartment
Geet is sitting infront of her maa-papaji's pic
and crying very badly.
Geet: kyun maa? Woh phir se kyun aya mere
zindagi mein? Main toh agey baad chuki thi
na. Phir kyun? Aaj unhe mera pyaar chahiye.
Kya main koi khilona hu? Jab mann kia phek
dia, jab mann kia pyaar kia. Aur sabse jyada
gunah toh mere yeh Dil ka hain. Jo itne sab
kuch ho jane k baad bhi usse nafrat nehi
karta, abhi bhi sirf ussi k liye hi dhadakta
hain, usse hi pyaar karta hain. Bataiye na
maa-papaji. Kya karu mein? Kya karu? Nehi
nehi, Geet. Tu kamzor nehi pad sakti. Sambhal
khudko, aapni DEEWANAPAN ko. Iss baar
main unhe jeetne nehi dungi.
She starts crying bitterly and fall asleep.
Someone is banging her apartment door
continuously. Listening this her sleep broke.
She went towards her door and opened the
door. Her breath caught in her throat. Maan is
standing there with his luggage.
Maan: hiii, Jaan. May i come in?
Geet: Mr. Khurana. Aap iss waqt yaha?
Maan: jaan plz i'm telling u again. Call me
Maan. I'm ur Maan.
Geet: nah baba na. Aisa ganda kaam mein
kaise kar sakti hu. Aapka naam dirty ho
jayega. Toh mere liye Mr. Khurana hi theek
hain. Aab bataiye, aap yaha kyun aye hain?
Maan: woh kya hain na Jaan. Mere apartment
abhi tak puri tarha se taiyyar nehi hui. Aur
Tumhari yeh apartment Office k taraf se hain.
So, aaj se hum yeh apartment share karenge.
Kitna maza ayega na.
Geet: WHATTT!!!
Maan: Jaan, tum aise reactions kyun de rahe
ho. Aise maat karo na. Mujhe kuch kuch hota
hain.
Geet turns her head digustingly.
Maan: chalo. Mujhe andar toh ane do.
Saying this Maan forcefully came inside the
house.
Maan: wow, jaan. Tumne kitni achche se ghar
sajwaya hain. Shaadi k baad na hum yeh
humare hide out rakhenge. Ok. Achcha yeh
batao Rano Maa kaha hain? Mujhe unse
milna hain.
Geet was just blank. When Maan turns around
he felt ground slips under his feet. He saw
Rano's pic with garland. Maan turns towards
Geet.
Maan: Geet, Rano maa?
Geet: 2 years pehle maa bhi mujhe chodke
chali gayi.
Saying this Geet starts crying badly. Maan
rushed towards her and hugged her tightly.
Maan: shhh, jaan. Kuch nehi hua. Main hu na
tumhare sath. Main tumhe chodke kahi nehi
jaunga. Plz tum rona bandh karo.
Geet pushed him.
Geet: chodiye mujhe. Yeh jhooti hamdardi
maat dikhaiye. Dn't u dare to touch me. Ghin
ati hain mujhe, jab bhi aap mujhe chutey ho.
Maan: Jaan..
Geet: mat kahiye mujhe jaan. Jaan ka matlab
bhi pata hain aapko? U hates me, remember.
Toh aab yeh dikhawa kyun?
Maan: yeh dikhawa nehi hain jaan. I really
Love U.
Geet: Hahahaha. Love. Love nehi lust kahiye.
Maan: Geettt...
Geet: chillaiye maat Mr. Khurana. Woh raha
guest room. Aap waha reh sakte hain. Aur
haan, plz dn't bother me for anything.
From that day they starts living together. Bt
like strangers. Maan did everything to make
happy Geet. Bt nothing works. In apartment he
used to did Geet's every work before Geet
could do anything. In office he used to flirt
with her. Bit by bit Geet's resulation starts
breaking. Bt she didn't want to show that to
Maan. So, she starts behaving rudely with
Maan. Bt Maan didn't mind anything. He can
do anything for his jaan. Maan's every effort
starts showing it's effects. Geet starts
smilling again. Slowly slowy starts responding
to his care. Bt she still calls him Mr. Khurana.
It pinced Maan's heart. Still he didn't said
anything.
Today is Maan's birthday. Nobody wished
him.bt He is not sad, because he knew that he
deserved it. In morning Maan starts making
breakfast. He wants to make Geet's favourite
aloo paratha. Bt he didn't knw how to make it.
So, he download the recipe from internet and
starts preparing aloo ki paratha. While making
this he burns his hand. Bt he didn't care as he
is so happy for His Jaan. After preparing the
breakfast, he gets ready for office and went to
dinning table. He saw Geet already starts
eating her breakfast. Somewhere he felt
disappoint. Bt he brushed it off.
Maan: Good morning jaan.
Maan wished her while taking seat. Now-a-
days Geet didn't say anything when Maan
called her Jaan. Geet too wished him politely.
Geet: Good morning.
Maan: aaj ka tumhari kya plan hain?
Geet: mujhe aaj office mein bohot kaam hain.
Phir shasha aur pinky k sath shopping pe
jaungi.
Maan know she forgot his birthday. Still he
smiled and said.
Maan: ok. Kya tum aaj raat ko ghar jaldi aa
sakti ho?
Geet: possible nehi hain.
Geet finished her breakfast and left for office.
Maan sat there numbly. It hurts him so much
when she avoids him. Now he can realise the
pain of hers. How much hurt Geet bore for
him, when he avoided and insulted her
brutually. A tear scaped from the corner of his
eyes. He immediately wipes it.
Maan: aab galti kiya hain. Toh saza toh
bhugatna hi padega. Aaj mere pass sab kuch
hote hue bhi kuch bhi nehi hain. Koi aisa nehi
hain ki jo mujhe mere birthday pe wish kare.
He didn't went to office that day. He sits
infront of Geet's parents photo and starts
talking.
Maan: Mujhe maaf kar dijiye papaji. Main
galat sangat mein pad ke behek gaya tha.
Mujhse bohot badi galti ho gayi. Par uss galti
ka saza aapko aur aapke family ko mila. Plz
mujhe maaf kar dijiye. Main Geet se bohot
pyaar karta hu. Bohot jyada, DEEWANAPAN ki
hadd tak. Usse kahiye na aap log, mujhe ek
aur mauka dede. Main usse bohot khush
rakhunga. Plz maa-papaji.
He starts crying infront of their pics. After
sometime he got up from there and starts
walking towards his room. Bt suddenly Geet's
door caught his attension. It's unlock. He
wants to go inside her room. At first he felt
hesitate bt later he went to her room. Her
room is beautifully decorated with small small
things and toys. He felt peace there. He sat
on her bed and starts touching the sheets. His
eyes went towards her dressing table. He
cares the things. He went towards a table.
There were 3 diaries there. Maan opened 1st
diary and he saw Geet's beautiful hand
writing. He know ki if Geet comes to know that
he read her diary, she is gonna kill him. Still
he wants to read it. He want to knw her inner
pain, jo woh khud kabhi batayegi nehi. He
starts reading he diary. She wrote everything
in her diary. How Maan always avoids her,
how he treated her badly, how he insulted her,
how he accused her, her father's dismiss, their
moving to London, her pains, her love for
Maan everything. After reading those diaries
Maan starts crying bitterly and sat on the
floor.
Maan: main itna haivan kaise ho sakta hu?
Maine usse kitna dukh diya phir bhi ussne
kabhi uff tak nehi kia. Humesha mujhe pyaar
kia. Aur maine usse aur uske hasta khilta
family ko barbad kar dia. Mujhe koi haq nehi
hain jeene ka. Nehi hain. Main kaise sab theek
karunga? Kaise?
Maan starts crying wildly.
In evening after office Geet, shasha and pinky
went to a shopping mall. The bought some
clothes and went to a gift shop as pinky
wanted a buy a gift for Adi. They starts seeing
the things. A greeting card caught Geet's
attention and today's date. She stood there
shocked. sh** she forgot Maan's birthday.
Now she remember, how Maan makes today's
breakfast, his hopefull eyes and how he asked
her to come back home a little early. She feel
sad.
Geet: plz Maan. Aab bas karo. Tum jo karne ki
kosish kar rahe ho, woh namumkin hain. Kyun
khudko taqlif de rahe ho. Sath mein mujhe
bhi. Plz chale jao mere zindagi se.
She thought of something and called Maan for
the 1st time.
Maan: hello, Geet.
Geet: Mr. Khurana. Kya aap xyz cafe mein aa
sakte hain abhi.
Maan: jaan, kya hua? Tum theek toh ho na?
Maan starts panicking.
Geet: i'm fine Mr. Khurana. Plz aap yaha aa
jaiye. Phir hum baat karte hain. Ok. Bye.
Maan: ok. Bye.
Geet cut the call and went to the cafe for
doing some arrangement. Otherside Maan
thought that Geet is in some problem. So, he
rushed his car towards the cafe.
When he reached inside the cafe, he stood
shocked there. The full cafe is beautifully
decorated with Happy birthday written in
middle. He got surprised. Geet come out.
Geet: Happy birthday Mr. Khurana.
Maan: Geet, yeh sab tumne kia hain?
Geet: ya, thought to surprise u. Aapko achcha
laga?
Maan hugs her and said.
Maan: thank u so much jaan. Tumhe nehi
pata aaj tumne mere upar kitna bada ehsaan
kiya hain. Kya tum mujhe ek gift dogi?
Geet: kahiye. Kya chahiye aapko?
Maan: Jaan, plz call me Maan.
Geet pushed Maan slightly.
Geet: i'm sorry Mr. Khurana. Yeh main nehi
kar sakti.
Maan cupped her face.
Maan: Jaan, I Love U. Plz aapne Maan ko
maaf kar do. Main aisa kya karu jisse tumhe
yakin ho jaye ki main tumse pyaar karta hu.
Main tumhare bina jee nehi paunga. I'll die
Geet.
Geet said coldly.
Geet: Toh mar jaiye.
Maan smiled at Geet and starts going outside.
He turns and Said I Love U Jaan.
He walkout from the cafe and starts walking
in the middle of the road. Geet also come out
from cafe.
When Maan was middle of the road, a truck
come and hit Maan badly. Maan lay in the
pool of blood still smilling. Geet saw this and
screamed.
Geet: MAAN...


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Edited by janna341 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice part..Maan get accident..I hope he save..Let see what Geet do..Maan know what he gave to Geet, that he get back from her..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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maan is so guilty for breaking g geet heart.
he know he deserves the coldness but still seeing geet so rude his heart breaks.
she doesn't remember his birthday. but maan didn't said anything.
she said mar jayege and he met with an accident.

continue soon
Edited by Kawan - 9 years ago

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