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i updated ..and now doing format and re reading haha .. so excuse mistakes :P
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2 updates dun ?? 🤣
u guys must be annoyed :P
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previous ka format kar lun 😉 its double update today 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update. Brij took geet to his home. Geet has a fractured arm and Brij taking care of her. Maan is looking for Geet.
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lovely update.. maan ki chori chori chupke chukpke muskaan ki raaz ko pakadliya dadi ne 😉😉😉brij took geet to his home and to the room which he is used to decorate for his dora..poor maan waha jungle mein jaakar geet ke saath waqt bitane ki socha par wo waha mili hi nahi..patha nahi ab kya karega geet ko na paakar..
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Part 18...bj and geet are now together... Thank god geet isn't leaving him... Am I right??.. She will not go from him... There is so much to know about her past... Why did her dad left her ... She suffered as her dad thought that she is a bad luck... Bj decorated her room with her favorites... But the most amazing thing is that itne jaldi fracture .. Xray wagera hojata hai..lolxx... Maan was caught red handed by dadima as he was smiling but now he is worried as she hasn't came out... Now when they will meet??
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Originally posted by: doll.12

Now waiting for next..

2 minutes 😉
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Part : 19


maan was pacing restlessly in his cabin , he didn't know where has she gone , he didn't know her name , neither anything else to search her ... all memories lingered his mind , making him more restless ..

He couldn't find out why was he so restless , not meeting her for one day ... but he was worried too . worried about her ... his mind was shouting at him , telling him that she left him but his heart refused to believe , that she could go without telling him ...

a girl clad in western dress came to geet's room , and instantly hugged her ... geet didn't recognize who she is ...

... she broke the hug .. " finally u here ..." she hugged her again ... but seeing her expressions ,she made a baby face

"muje bhool gai ??" [ u forgot me ?]

Geet didn't say anything , but her expressions were clear that she didn't recognize her , meanwhile bj came too ...

" oh so u both already started ur girly chat "

" no yaar ,see she don't recognize me .." and made a face,while geet looked confused , trying hard to remember who can she be ..

" meri dora ki galti nai ha[ its not her fault] , u look too different now " ...

Bj said making her frown and she said her ever famous dialogue " choro main baat nai karti " [ i wont talk to u ]

That's when geet recognized her ... " anni .." .. geet said n blinked twice , hugging her .. ... she couldn't believe they r still together ...

" see , a little hint and she recognized u "bj said proudly

" tum hamesha us ki side dete ho .. main nahi baat karti tumhaaray sath " [ u always take her side , i wont talk to u ] ..anni said making a fake angry face ...

"tu jealous ho rai ha ??" [r u getting jealous ] geet said narrowing her eyes ...

" haan dora , see ... Her face is turning red "

" g nai !! main jealous nai ho rai ... ok !! .. " [ i m not getting jealous ok ]

They became silent for a second and then trio started laughing ... they were still arguing like they used to do in childhood ...

Brij took them both in a warm hug saying .. "' I missed this a lot"' ...

" me too " anni said , while geet didn't say anything ...

It was late evening , anni left and bj was working on his laptop , sitting beside geet on bed ..he didn't leave her for a minute ... done all his work from home ..more precisely from geet's room ...

Geet was in her own thoughts .. she missed the jungle ...though she got her happiness , her bj , care everything ... but she couldn't forget her life so easily ... she missed her pond , tree climbing , picking fruits ... she didn't like the food here , ate very less ... she was now used to , with the taste of those fruits ...

And HE ... suddenly , he came to her mind ... a smile crept her lips ... oh lips , she touched them , reliving the moment ... "

" hero ... Mujh se milne aaya ho ga , but main wahaan nahi hun ... wo parehsaan ho ga ... main kaisay baat karun ... " [ hero must have come to meet me , and he will b worried if he didnt find me there .. how can i talk to him ?]

" bj to busy hai , aur mere paas to hero ka phone number b nai ha " ... [ bj is busy and i dont even have his number ?]

" bj se kia bolun gi ...kis se baat karni ha ??" . [what will i tell bj .. to whom i wanna talk ?] . she started getting restless ...

Now condition as that ., maan thinking about her in his bedroom , that how to contact her ... and here geet missing him ...

Both thinking about each other , and didn't know how to contact ...

Next day

Bj had an important meeting with khuranas , but he couldn't leave geet alone ... she wasn't well , her hand was plastered and wasn't eating much too ... bj didn't know why she isn't eating

He got a call ...

" hello "

" yes Mr aditya "

" sir !!wanted to remind u about the meeting time , actually , Maan sir wants to have the meeting an hour before the scheduled time "

" sorry Mr aditya , actually I cant attend the meeting in ur office today ... I m working from home , from few days , due to some personal reasons "

"u know sir ... we have to finalize the design soon , and construction must start now , as per requirements "

" yes , but as I already said , I have some problem and cant attend the meeting in office "

" ohk !! let me find some solution "

" mr aditya , why don't u n Mr khurana come to my mansion for meeting ?? I mean we can discuss here and u can show me the designs too .. if its convenient for u ??"

" that's a good idea too , let me confirm from maan sir , if he is ok with it .."

Aadi puts the call on hold , and turns to maan , who was in bad mood today ,coz he went to jungle early morning again and she wasn't there ...

" sir ." adi called while maan was busy in finding ways that how will he find her ...

" maan sir ... " adi called again , bringing him out of his thoughts ..

" yes aadi ?? whats the issue now ?"

" actually Mr handa , want the meeting in his masion ..he cant join the meeting in the office today "

" y ?? don't he know we have to finalize the design and start construction too ?"

" yes sir , he knows but still he cannot come "

" unprofessional ... cancel the deal aadi ... I m not going at his place for meeting "

Aadi was taken aback , how could he loose the loyal client just coz he wanted the meeting at home ?

" but sir , he is loyal client .. we already bought that land and at this point we cant step back .. it would be the big loss sir "

" aadi I m not bankrupt , that I cant pay few crores ..ii said no means no "

Aadi knew there is no point arguing with maan singh khurana ... so he tried to use other way

" sir , he agreed with all our conditions always , we said buy this land , he invested without any second thought ... he has always been loyal ., n important client ... now if we step back , this will surely spoil company's repo , I mean he can sue too "

Maan could see anything but not a bad word for his company as it was his father's business .. he thinks for sometime and concludes that its not big deal , having a meeting at home

" Ok !! we will meet him in an hour "

Aadi takes the call again and tells brij about the time...

Bj comes to geet's room , her breakfast was on the side table as it is ..she had few sips of juice and half sandwich .. she was thinking how to tell her hero that she is here ... ... n how to contact him ...

Bj was worried now .. seeing her like this ...he thought she is worried about incidence that day ... ..he sat beside her

" dora .." she snapped out of her thoughts ...

" hmm" , confusingly ...

" i want to ask u something , btaaye gi muje ??" [ i want to ask u something ..will u tell ?]

" tu aisay kun pooch raha ha ?? aisa kia ho gya ..pooch na " [ y r u asking like this ? tell me ? ]

" wo , us din ... mera matlab ha jab tu muje mili to ... " [ that day i found u .. then .. ] bj left in the middle thinking she will get his question ..

" hmm to ? .." [then ?] geet didn't know what he wants to ask

Bj had to ask clearly now ... " actually , haan .. ur saaree was ripped ,wet n " he didn't know how to ask her " and ur flushed face , lips .. n u were so afraid ... did anyone try to harass u ..?? " .. bj hardly completed the sentence ... ...

Geet was listening all this , while her face was turning red in embarrassment ... what she will tell him ,,?? That she gifted her first kiss to her hero .. that too in bathtub ... ... she turned her head down hiding the shy smile , while bj mistook it as fear n worry , that's y she wasn't looking into his eyes ... n hiding everything from him ..

" dora ?? that's y u r worried n not eating anything ?? I saw u .. last night too u were in deep thought and restless .. today again when I came u were thinking ., I m always with u now ... u can share with me "

Before she could think of an excuse , his phone rang , it was anni , she thanked her stars .. for the escape ... after talking with bj , anni had a talk with geet , planning to relive their childhood memories together ...

Now bj had to attend the meeting ,as they will b here soon ..

" I have to attend the meeting dora ... u don't worry .. ok !! everything will b alright "

Bj went to check everything , as it was the first time ,he held any meeting at home ..


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Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

2 updates dun ?? 🤣

u guys must be annoyed :P



ab jaldi se do.. nahi tho main jaakar sojathi hoon..neend aarahi hai🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
done hehehe :P ... u guys awesome 😛

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