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Posted: 10 years ago
i have to update on next page ..
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other wise it will be mixed in comments ..
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Teaser or update ???





abhi teaser.. 10min ke baad update😉
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only one reader ???
all asleep ??
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Thank u peeps 😛
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Part : 18 ..


She took the filled injection from nurse and injected right in her vein harshly , without any painful expression on her face ... and threw it back in tray ...

" ab ja " [ now go ] she rudely told the nurse to go ... don't know y she was doing so ...

Bj was taken aback , so was nurse , the way she injected herself ,was so unusual...

Nurse excused herself and went off ..while bj till now had a clear idea that she isn't the same geet now ... she has changed ..she is no more a delicate doll ... She had gone through much ,and that gave him pain ...

Geet wanted to question him , wanted to ask him where was he from last 14 years?? But she didn't say anything ... she had a fear to loose him again ,..but now she had learnt to live without him too ... both wanted to talk to each other ,but didn't know where to start ..

She tried to get up,

" what r u doing ??? don't get up " he laid her down again ...

" kuch nai hua ha muje " [ nothing happened to me ] she snapped ... she hated being helpless ... hated to see those pitying expressions .. didn't want anyone to pity her ... then she realized she is being harsh with her bj , who face was clearly showing pain .. she could still read his face .. she need to b normal ... she isn't in jungle anymore ...

" muje washroom jaana ha " [ i want to go to washroom] she said softly , and bj let her go and went out to bring something for her to eat ... and asked the nurse to go into the room , to check if she is fine ...

She went in , wasn't used to ,that slippery floor , as she stepped ahead , slipped and help the null that went open and she fell with the thud !! on floor , and her hand under her ... ahhh !! she let out a cry , cold water started flowing , she was in pain and couldn't get up

" bj ... Bj " geet called out, but felt her own voice fading ... but he wasn't in room ,so how could he come ...

She found the surrounding blur and then turning dark ...

Bj came back to the room , bringing soup for her ,and waited for her to come out ,,she was taking longer then usual ... ...

Its been half an hour and she didn't come back ...

He went to the door and unexpectingly it was not locked , he tunred the knob and opened the door only to see geet on the floor , All wet yet again ... he ran toward her ... " Dora !! dora " ... she didn't reply ..

"Doctor !!!" he shouted ... bringing her to the bed again ...

Doctor came quickly , ...due to getting wet in cold water , she had high fever now ... her hand was tilted in a bad position ...and x .ray report showed fracture ... So it was plastered ...

She was given a strong dose for high fever and pain killer too .. and effect was keeping her dizzy ...

Seeing brij so angry ... Doctor said " we will take care "

" where was the damn nurse that time , I asked her to stay with her .."

" sir ..i ...I ... " nurse found no excuse . ...

" I m taking her home ... I can take care myself "

" but she ... "

" no need of ur advices ... I know whats better for my dora " he spat angrily ...

The anger brij showed made the doctor shut ... and they let her go ..

Bj picked her up from the car and bring her to the room , the room he decorated for her ... all those years he has been decorating and bringing things for room too , the rich businessman brij handa , always waited for his sister

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Next day maan got ready for office , he was all happy ... their beautiful moment brought a change , he slept so peacefully feeling himself drawn in her , ...her lips , her reaction when he touched her, her flushed face ,and the way she ran off ... her shivering with his touch boosted his male ego

Dadi came to his room ,only to find a smiling maan in front of mirror ...

" very nice change " dadi said standing right behind him ...

He turned hiding his smile so rare magical smile ...

" dadi ..."

" hmm ,I know I m ur dadi , and something is cooking up right ??"

" not really ..dadi itni subah mere room main ,sub theek ha na ??" [ dadi u r in my room early morning .. is everything alright ?]

" yeh baat to aap se poochni hai hmain maan " [ i want to ask u same ]

"muje kia hua ha dadi ??" [ what happened to me ?]

" yeh to aap hi btayen gay ... the angry young man maan singh khurana mirror ko smile kun pass kar rhay the " [u have to tell me this .. y is angry youngman maan khurana smiling at mirror ] ..dadi said in a playful voice ..

" plz dadi ! now I cant even smile ??" he was even more dramatic

" hmm , n when I knock u don't answer too right ??"

" u knocked ?? .. he was caught so decided to cover up soon " wo actually , I was in washroom "

" " hmm, hum ap ki dadi hain , sab jaantay hain ... chaliye yeh btaiye kon hain wo ??" [ yes m ur dadi and know everything .. now tell who is she ?]

" wo kon ??" [ who she ?]

" yehi to hum pooch rhay hain ??" [ thats what m asking]

" dadi ,yeh sab kia ha ? kin k baaray main btaun ??" [ dadi whats all this ?? about whom should i tell ?]

" arrey wohi jin ko aap , possessively hug kar rhay the , aur jinhain yaad kar k aap kho gay the n u were passing a beautiful smile to mirror ... ," . [ about same girl whom u were hugging possesively in parking area and u were in her dreams passing beautiful smile to mirror ] ..

he knew there is no escape , dadi knew ins and outs of him ,n easily tell by his behavior ,that something is going on ... getting no answer dadi said again

"kab milwa rhay hain ??"

" very soon " he smiled and went off ..

" arrey baat to ..." [listen maan ] But he was gone ... dadi sat on his bed feeling so happy ...finally there is someone in his life who could make him smile even in his absence ... dadi knew any girl would marry him but she wanted the one who can make him happy ... and there is one , whose mere thought brought smile on his face ...

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Maan was heading towards the office after attending an important meeting , but on his way he turned the car , to some other destination , a strange but a very known lovely destination .. he never knew he would b that happy to go there ever ...

He went to jungle but she was not there .. confused ,he checked here and there but she was no where ... this was the time for her to come back from jungle but y she didn't comeback yet ?? he was worried ...had anything happened to her ?

Their first kiss gave maan a pleasing sensation ,and he wanted to capture more moments , the moments before they name their relationship ... So he decided to spend more time with her , but she was no where ...now where will he search her ?? he didn't know where has she gone and its been almost 28 hours since he last met her ...

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" main leftie hun , tu bhool gya na ?? " [ i m leftie m u forgot ? ] her voice chocked , as she said that ... and then tears made their way ... Both let them flow ... were these tears of happiness for meeting after so long??? Or tears of sadness for not being together all these years ...

" kaisay bhool sakta hun ?? tuje mere hath se khaana hi acha lagta ha na " [ how can i forget , u like to eat by my hands ] he said hugging her back ... ever so protectively ...

He heard her sobbing , with her head in his chest ...

" kun chali gai thi ?? apne bj se dur ?? kitna dhunda main ne " [ y did u go , far away from ur bj ? how much i searched u ]


Geet woke up with heavy paining head , she opened her eyes lazily .. the surroundings didn't look familiar... she looked around , everything decorated ... her favorite plum colored room dcor ...

Everything of her choice .. her favorite dolls , frames ... multi colored pillows , yeah she liked more pillows on bed ... she tried to get up , but her hand hurted , looking at the bandage she tried to recall where it came from but nothing made sense ... she didn't know for how long she has been sleeping , the clock showed 2 ... ...

She heard the door opening , tunred her head in the direction as she didn't get up yet feeling weak ... bj stepped in along with 2 nurses ..

There was an awkward silence , as neither geet nor bj said anything .. there was too much to say , too much to ask but both didn't know where to start ...

" dora , u still sleep too much ... " bj said breaking the silence ... a smile crept her lips , her nickname sounded ever so cute ...

She opened her mouth to say something ,but stopped hearing him

" nurse , help her with bath , and I don't want any carelessness "

nurse obeyed , and helped her ...

Coming out ,she looked fresh , but hated her hand being plastered .. as she sat back , her food was brought ... bj signaled everyone to leave ...she looked at him for a brief minute , his authorative voice ... everything changed , her bj was too strong now but for her he was still same caring bj ...

He picked her sandwich and put it near her mouth , tears formed in her eyes , and memories of childhood flashed ...

How bj used to feed her whenever she hurt herself mostly hands , falling from cycle ..even she loved to eat from his hands that she sometimes wont eat , just because she knew he will feed her ...

She took the sandwish from him by her left hand , and hugged him tight

But she didn't answer all she did was crying harder ...

" shhh ! !! tu roti hai to muje acha nai lagta " [ i dont like when u cry ] he wiped her tears ... she did the same cleaning his wet cheeks ..

" kuch kha le , bht saari batain karni hain ... phir se behosh ho gai to ??" [ eat something .. i have so many things to share ..what if u faint again ?]

He said in a softer tone , trying to lighten the moment ...

She picked her sandwich and offered him first bite ... she didn't forget that , ... she still wanted him to have first bite ... as he ate , she took a bite herself ... but that tasted weird for her .. she is so used too with junglee fruits... now she seem to didn't like the taste of these things ... and her hunger was suppressed too ., eating same things over and over again ... ...

She had half of the sandwich and half glass of juice ... ...

Bj wanted her to eat more but she refused ... Both of them started talking , bj showed her mansion ... ... both avoided talking about past ...bj didn't want to stress her right now ... he knew it will hurt her


Next : Part : 19

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Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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kitne der mein dene waali ho aamna?
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Originally posted by: priya111111





abhi teaser.. 10min ke baad update😉

wish granted hehe ...teaser here

He went to jungle but she was not there .. confused ,he checked here and there but she was no where ... this was the time for her to come back from jungle but y she didn't comeback yet ?? he was worried ...had anything happened to her ?

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Originally posted by: priya111111

kitne der mein dene waali ho aamna?

just now 😛 5 minutes
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Originally posted by: abba12

just now 😛 5 minutes


waiting padne ke baad hi sojaongi😆

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