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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Lovely Chapter.. I think here no one is wrong neither Geet nor Maan 😊
He's thinking he is just acting but ye sab dil se ho raha hai usko ehsas bhi nahi 😳
They are falling for each other.. Maan shouldn't leave that arora [:X]
Waiting for. More
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Amazing update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Amazing Just Mind Blowing Awesome Update

Maan and Geet meet everyday and from the restaurant itself they escape Geet's guards and they enjoy themselves until Geet heard he is an ACP but then when she called her husband again he was busy enjoying his life so she decided that she will remain friends with Maan
and they somehow got close and Maan kissed her but he also told her that whatever her husband is doing is wrong

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Geet is being pulled in all directions by her feelings for Maan, the hurt and betrayal from Nikhil and her own sense of right and wrong. Maan is also in a dilemma as he too has feelings got her when he needs to be impartial to carry out his mission. Maan explained that she has nothing to apologise for and she should listen to her heart and not worry about what people will say.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Amazing part
Loved it
There was unkowing pull between maan and geet
Their friendship clicked instantly
They shared their first kiss both are feeing guilt at the same time both felt cantonment


Eagerly Waiting for the next part
Continue sson
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
WOW!! superb update dear...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Part 3

Nikhil is a beast and not the man geet met and fell in love with

maan gave her respect which was lacking in her marriage and that is what attracted her to him

but even then it was wrong of her to sleep with him
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

beautiful update
though it was wrong to get close, both felt complete with each other
and for geet, maan was her safe haven

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Feel very sad fr geet . Her husband betray her n her she start giving her heart n trust to maan... Wondering what she will do once known he is using her for his mission...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello everyone,
a very happy eid mubarak to u all. May the Almighty Allah bring lots of happiness for all of ur on this beautiful eid ..
here ur eidi from my side ..

thank u all for ur lovely likes n comments ..

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MG OS : BreakFree



PART 5

Geet's came out of her memories when she heard someone opening the door of her bedroom ..her father and mother-inlaw both are out on a holy trip of different temples none of the servants would have the keys to her room so this can be none other than her husband ...geet braced herself n sat upright ..covering her body with the duvet fallen on the floor ...nikhil entered n stood at the far end of the bedroom looking at her all bruised ...this was the girl he fell for in one of his foreign trips to california ..she was beautiful ...smart ..wild but he knew the art of taming wild cats n so he did ..made her see a future with him ..coz he knew she can be all he wants in a girl as his wife ..n he was right since last 2 years he had been able to get all the pleasure of owning her body ...n showing her off to his friends ..enjoying the jealous stares they gave him n yet being able to deceive her occasionally when he likes a change of taste ..life was simple ..she was the perfect wife he wanted until last week when her guards reported her dodging them to get away with some friend of hers ..he took it casually thinking even she had the right to get away from people's eyes n media's judging cameras to enjoy herself but he was so wrong ...she wasn't just having fun with SOME friend ..she was having fun sleeping with the ACP of delhi police ...SHE WAS BETRAYING HIM ..!!

Geet tried to judge whats going on in his mind but he looked blank ...n finally she asked getting pissed with his constant stare ..n asked in a cold voice casually ...

What r u here for nikhil ...wanna beat me some more to have slept with someone else ...

What was it in him ..that I couldn't give u ?? I've been thinking since I left this room n I m still not getting any answer ..

Geet looked away n smiled ...then looked back straight in his eyes ..

Respect ...love ..care ..support ..everything u never gave me ..i was always a slave to u ..all u ever did was to order me around ..u never cared for my feelings ...u never even had a minute for ur own god damn wife without those party members calling u ..

N so u choose to to go out n sleep with some else ..is this how u r going to justify ur self geet ..

I m not justifying myself here Mr. Nikhil Arora ...coz the minute u slept with another girl ..u lost ur right to have any justification by me for any of my actions ..if I have crossed my boundaries then even u have ..
Jo tum karo wohh sab sahi ...aur agar wahi kaam mene kiya tu galat ...kyun ??

Nikhil took a step forward but stopped clinching his fist at his sides ..

Stop making me loose my temper again geet ..

U can't control me anymore Nikhil ..i am free ..free from all ur ties ..u can hold me captive here as long as u want to but u can no longer make me urs ..

Nikhil came forward n stood beside her towering her first n then held her chin in a harsh grip making her gasp ..

Ek raat mien itna khush kardia uss ne tumhain ..han geet ...is he that good ..??

Geet was in unbearable pain but she would never fall week in front of this bas***d ..she stared right back in his ice cold eyes with burning fire in hers n answered in a hoarse whisper ..

U can't even imagine ..

Her answer burned him with rage n he lost his cool ..jerking her face hard making her fall flat on the mattress ..he began walking away ..
But stopped just at the door step n turned to her with eyes spitting fire ..

U know what geet ...this was all u could do ...iss se ziada tum kuch nahi bigaar sakti mera ..even if I f**k a random girl right in front of ur eyes ..u can't do anything ..n now that u know I don't have to book room in an hotel after all I have a house n a very cozy room in here as well ..now sit here all ur life n stop me if u can from doing all what I ve said ..

Nikhil bolted the door close n the long held tears of geet were cut loose ..she couldn't believe he was the same man she went against her brother to marry ...she was disgusted with her own self to have loved him at first place ...what was she thinking ...she looked around her room with teary eyes to find a escape ...her in-laws were out of town for a month ..she alone here except for some servants n that bas***d ...she didn't knew how she will ever escape this hell ...or will she ever be able to ..?? defeated she sat thr crying at her own stupidity to have gone against her brother to marry this guy ..thats when sun lights entered her room she looked at the shadow of her own forming on the floor n then glanced at the large window that opens to the backyard of this house ...she wiped her tears n walked limoing her way towards the window thr were servants working down ..the back door of the house visible ...but her body was too weak to jump from first floor ...n she slipped down the wall not having enough energy to keep standing n fresh tears made thr way out of her eyes at her helplessness ...what is she going to do ..

***^^***

Maan was still at very hotel room ...he couldn't sleep a wink ..neither could he walk in the room sitting in the balcony he watched the sun rose remembering the last night ...

Nothing he did made sense ever since that kiss on the beach ..he was loosing it for her n he knew it ..he still couldn't understand why he said all that to her ...it was utter non-sense on his part ...although when asked by swati he had very conveniently said it was all for the mission but he knew it wasn't n what happened the next day was definitely not ...!!

Geet wasn't being herself ever since she came to meet him the next day.. guess she wasn't over her insecurities of yesterday ...n he suggested to shopping earlier ..she wasn't in a mood but obliged n went to shop ..she selected a nice black jeans n shirt for him with a dinner jacket while he selected for her a black jeans n blue top ...she looked stunning in it ..just that her eyes were gloomy ..lost in some thoughts ..he noticed she wasn't wearing her wedding chain that day ...he couldn't believe the kind of happiness it gave him .they went in the near by restaurant to munch by the time they ended she was much better thanks to his non stop talks ...finally by evening she was completely herself ...didn't knew why but he asked out to the disc in the same hotel they met in n he was staying at ...it had one in its basement ..she obliged happily n went with him ..the dance ..danced ..n danced on numerous numbers ...until maan's phone vibrated with an incoming call ..he didn't realized it until geet made him aware of it ..it was swati calling ...the color from his face drained as reality sunk in ...ever since she came this afternoon his whole focus was to get her back to normal forgetting all about the mission ...while swati was going on n on about what he was doing since morning he was lost cursing himself until she broke the big news to him ..

Listen maan u have this night only to hit the iceberg right ...kal nikhil arora is meeting with the owner of india's biggest drug racket owner to fix a deal if we get a proof of this meeting nikhil arora n that drug mafia both r finished ...u have to convince geet at any cost to help us with this ..

I ...It will be done swati ...I will do this ...

Good ...things r going good maan ..u have that girl completely in ur hands ...be the charmer n convince her ..

Alright ..alright swati I get it ...ill do it ...

Maan hung up on her n took a deep breath in the fresh air ..he couldn't believe he was going to do to that girl ...geet trusted him even after having a brutal betrayal by her husband n now even he was going to break her heart with the bitter revelation ...but y is it paining him so much ...y does I matter ..in all his career his mission had been his priority then y is her feelings now his concern ...?? Swati's words rung in his ears n he closed his eyes ...geet's smile flashed in front of his eyes n he ran his hands through his hair n punched the wall hard ...

Kya kismat hai meri ...dil dia bhi tou usko jiska dil mien khud torne wala hoon ...


**^^**

so this was a filler i figured the original line of story was bit loose so added this one just so geet should know exactly what the future holds for her n ofcourse to make grounds for the mega-update 😉
leave some nice comments n ill get back to u lovely people with the last 2 updates of t his OS 😳

waiting for ur reviews 😃

luv ya
sobia
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 10 years ago

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