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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Hi I've come across this story and read all parts in one go. Brilliant story.. Nikhil and Geet's married life took a jolt when Geet found out about his extra marital affairs.. Heart broken Geet took solace in Maan who is an ACP by profession and is on a mission to arrest Nikhil for drug dealings.. Nikhil tortured Geet when he came to know that she has crossed the boundary line and broken the marital vows..

Maan on the other hand feels guilty when he thinks that he used Geet for his mission to extract information about Nikhil.. Though he fell in love with her, he fears that he too would be hurting her when the truth comes out.. Well narrated story.. Loved it..

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

how can a man be so ungrateful and bully at the same time.. geet opposed her family to get married to this stinky creature 😡
poor geet though maan is also cheating her, what will she do when she knows the truth...

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

i wasn't able to type the end of this OS due of being busy with eid preparation so i m typing now ...any body in for a teaser ..??? 😳😉

let me know ...😃

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Yes I want..
how many parts r left

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: preeti.1
Yes I want..
how many parts r left

posting now ...n only 2 more parts r left ...😳😉

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cutekanan

@cutekanan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Nice update
maan loves geet but can't tell her the truth 😭
geet's husband is a sick man...he had no guilt of what he had done
story is getting interesting lkng forward

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

hello every one,

i m literally so happy with ur reviews ..thank u every person who commented n shared thr view with me ..😃

i couldn't manage to type the last 2 parts of this OS coz of being busy with eid preps ..now that i m typing thought to give u all a teaser as well 😉😳

enjoy it n leave me ur guesses about when were n how ..😉😉

will be waiting eagerly coz i have a habit of peeking on the thread often while typing 😆😃

THE TEASER

maan placed his lips on her eyes drinking her tears one after the other while she closed her eyes surrendering to his touch but snapped open them hearing the next set of words from him ...

I love u geet ...

Don't maan ...jaane do mujhe ..

Geet just listen to me ...

U won't dare to maan ...

Swati I have to ..this has been my final plan ever since ...I akways had this in my mind ..if geet didn't did it for us this was what I was always going to do at the end ..n u know it's the end ..

Agar yeh hi karna tha tou kya zarora thi itna sab drama karne ki maan ...we both know it's a death scheme ...just coz u think u have lost ur love doesn't mean u plan on getting murdered by those arora guards ..u get it ..wahan itne guards hain u r never going to get passed through the main hall even .. n u know this maan ...

connect the dots in ur brain while i m typing ...will be back soon with the update ...😉

luv ya all

sobia

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SHIK.LOVMAANEET

@SHIK.LOVMAANEET

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Killer; Rocking; osm Teaser 👏 👏
hats off kamal ka likti hai aap
man na padega 😃
teasing teaser tha
jaldi update ki jiyega
waiting for that n waiting for something else n u know itn if possible do that too 😳

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Divya Paul

@DIGVIPAUL

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Fast yaar.. Eagerly waiting for the update... This Pathetic shit husband of our Geet.. Isko to personally murder krne ka mann h hmko..
Seriously if given chance i'll make him Shark firh's food..
And Maan sweetheart repent all you want, your crime is nowhere less... Still atleast he's repenting but that thick headed Bas**** have no guilt for his sins...
Mann kar rha h k Pond se Bull ko bulake iske piche chor du.. What say?!?!

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Teaser is Just Teasing ...So Unfair

I'm now curious Maan confess he loves Geet but is that now in present after Nikil found out about Geet and Maan
while Swati also is warning him not to go to the Arora house
Please update at your soonest