MG,FF Yodha the unknown warrior last part & note on 9-28 dec - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
nice update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
finally... itni mushkiil se mila
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Posted: 9 years ago
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LAST PART OF YODHA

Ma took decision for pinky future and she took pinky with her to that village lady doctor ,massi also went with her ...Ma don't have any small clue that what storm she is going to face with such decision ,they all reach to hospital

Other side adi who don't want to go to his village , but his close friend give a news about maan and he took decision to went to his village, ...pinky and adi both start to feel something different like kuch to hone wala hai unki zindgi main jo unki zindgi badal dene wala hai ! ... Adi don't want to went to his house he went to that hospital where his friend work in office staff ...his friend gritted him and say all about maan adi closed his eyes in frustration and say kisi ki havas ke liye pata nhai kine innocent logoki bali chad gai.

Ma took pinky to women doc of hospital ,ma say all to that lady doctor and there doubt also ,lady doc was very co oprative she lesion all ,and took pinky for check up Till now she get that she have to take virginity test of pinky after 10 min doc come outside with pinky

Doc look to ma who is all tense for pinky

Doc - maji good news hai she is still virgin

A tear escape from ma mouth and loud gasp from pinky mouth ,pinky feel blank for while like she lost ability of thinking .

With so much courage she ask to doc ,ye such hai kya doc ...its true doc

Doc nodded and say yes pinky u r pure

Poor pinky hug ma and cried ...ma ma main ...wo unke kabil hu ma

Ma - a happy tear come in ma eyes

Other side adi who r going outside of hospital stop with hearing pinky cry ,he missed his heart bit for while ,he himself don't get that his leg start to walk to that doc room where a sound is coming ...with shaking hand he open door of room and he froze with word of pinky ma ma main ...wo unke kabil hu ma.Pinky word escap from adi mouth and 3 lady gasp with different reason doc with frustration ,ma with anger that who is disturbing them and pinky with shock ...she very well know whose voice is this but she lost courage to turn and look to her life once .

Adi - again called out pinky ...pinky kab tak bhogogi tum ...

Ma get confused with talk of adi she once look to pinky and pinky tear say all story that who is this person , with heavy and happy heart she come near to adi ,once caressed his cheek and went out side of room other side doc who all confused with happening ,but old lady act give her hint that they r not ajanbi , she also went out from there

Adi closed door and bolt it ...

He again called out ...muje pe tumara bharosa nahi tha na pinky ,that's why u run away from me like this ...har din muje laga kash main mar zata ku ki tumara ye avishwas muje har din ek nai mot de deta tha pinky ...kash main mar...and before he say anything further pinky run to him and closed his mouth with her plam and mummer ,maaf kiziye muje mear app par bahrosa tha ...lakin I don't want to become reason of your sorrow ,mera saya bhi apke liye acha nahi tha daag lag gaya tha mere upper

Adi pull out her plam and push her harshly and ask her with angry tone ,kya daag daag bol rahi ,kiasa daag ...tum ajj bhi utani hi innocent ho jitnai tab thi ,ye body se badakar bhi ek cheez hai pinky wo hai tumari soul , tumari soul jo ajj bhi pavitra hai ...muje nahi fark padata kisne tumare badan ko chuha ya nahi ...muje anhi farak pata ke tum vergin ho ya nahi ,muje nahi farak padata ...ke tumre body pe kisi aur ne chuha ke nahi

Muje tab farak padat pinky jab koi tumarhi mann ko tumari soul ko maila kar deta pinky ...ku ek baar bhi tume apne pati pe vsihwas nahi dikhya pinky Adi ask her with pain ...ku pinky ku

Pinky today get how wrong she was , uska pati uski body ko nahi uski aatma ko pyyar karata hai ye itni choti si baat usko kaise samje nahi aayi a pain of adi eyes make her so much guilty and before adi say anything further pinky with lots of courage took adi lips in her lips for a kiss ...

Other side in jungle

Geet turn her face in shyness and a beautiful sound acco in place ,geet with surprises look to maan yes he is singing ...

Hmmm Hmm, Hmm Hmm Hmmm

Hey Hey Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmmm

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Chaaya Hai Nashaa, Meri Aankhon Par 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar...

Maan once pointed to moon than to her ,geet ckeek turn red in shyness

[Mere Dil Mein Hain Armaan Kayee Kayee

Meri Chaahat Hai Abhi Nayee Nayee ]2

Reh Jayee Na Pyaasa Pyaar Mera

Meri Baahon Mein Bhar De Yaar Mera

Itna Sa Karam Tu Kar Mujh Par 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar...

Maan make sine of hug like sayng her dekho main khud ko kitna rok raha hu ...jab ki main ye sab karna chahata hu apni chiuya ke sath

Hmmm, Aa Haa Aaa

Aa Haa Aa, Aye Hey Hey

[Abhi Labon Ko Labon Ne Chua Nahin

Armaan Koi Pura Hua Nahin ]2

Abhi Aas Ka Gulshan Khilna Hai

Abhi Do Jismon Ko Milna Hai

Maan cares his own lips when he sung this line , geet eyes turn big in shock ...with maan songs word and action she closed her face with her plam ...maan come near to her and opne that with his hand and sung this lines in her ear with soft voice

Abhi aas ka gulshan khilna hai

Abhi do jismon ko milna hai

Dekhoonga abhi main woh manzhar

Dekhoonga Abhi Main Woh Manzhar 2

After lesions this word geet just hug maan in passion and shyness maan also hug her back both soul just thinking when this four days going to finish

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Aaya Hai Nazar 2Hmmm Hmm, Hmm Hmm Hmmm

Hey Hey Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmmm

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Chaaya Hai Nashaa, Meri Aankhon Par 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar...

[Mere Dil Mein Hain Armaan Kayee Kayee

Meri Chaahat Hai Abhi Nayee Nayee ]2

Reh Jayee Na Pyaasa Pyaar Mera

Meri Baahon Mein Bhar De Yaar Mera

Itna Sa Karam Tu Kar Mujh Par 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar...

Hmmm, Aa Haa Aaa

Aa Haa Aa, Aye Hey Hey

[Abhi Labon Ko Labon Ne Chua Nahin

Armaan Koi Pura Hua Nahin ]2

Abhi Aas Ka Gulshan Khilna Hai

Abhi Do Jismon Ko Milna Hai

Dekhoonga Abhi Main Woh Manzhar 2

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai Nazar

Aye Raat Zara, Tham Tham Ke Guzar 2

Mera Chand Mujhe, Aaya Hai nazar

When this four soul busy in reunion and love ,in village a wife of brij get news about maan place and she play a game she give this tip to British soldier ,who want to arrest maan because maan and his men's always trouble them they went to maan place and start to destroy place and start to kill them

Adi friend also get this news and he knock the door of doc ,because he saw adi when he entered in room ...

Adi and pinky come out from there kiss with knock red hu come on pinky cheek

Somehow adi open door and his friend word took land from his land he just pull pinky with him and start to go to jungle side , pinky miss several heart bits with adi sudden action after half and hour both reach to inside of jungle and lesion sound of swords ,liking its cutting something with so much force ...

A painful cry escape from pinky mouth maan bhiya ,bhabhi maaneet is surrounded by British men's ,they r drench in blood ...but soldier is not stopping to hurt them ,MAANEET both in each other hug like they r not feeling any pain ...its like they r in other world all away from this painful world who always give them pain ,dard ,nafrat

Maaneet look to each other eyes and give smile ...like saying dekho no one is going to snach our love ,abhi hum kabhi bhi alag nahi hoge kabhi nahi ,abhi hum to apne baba ke pass jaayenge unka ashirwad ,blessing lene ke liye , now they r becoming Maaneet in every sense they r not any maan or any geet they r only MAANEET ...VEER BABA KE MAANEET ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
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FINALLY I FINISH THIS STORY

JO MERE DIL KE BAHOT KARIB
THI BUT I DONT GET GOOD RESPONSE
FORM ALL OF U
ANYWAYS HAR EK STORY PASAND AAYE YE TO
MUNKIN NAHI HAI BUT ONCE I WANT TO KNOW
YE STORY MAIN KYA KAMI THI KI MOST OF MY
READER WNET AWAY FROM IT
YE WAISE FINISH NAHI HUI JAISE MAIN CHAYATHI
THI BUT SO POOR RESPONSE KE BAAD I LOST
COURAGE TO WRITE ON THIS STORY
LAST PART MAIN 3 LIKE ,MEANS ISASE TO KAM
KUCH HO HI NAHI SKATA 😆
TRULY SAYING MUJE TO ISE STORY KA SEQUENCE BHI BANANA
THA BUT ...
Mahi ...
Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Yeh kya its not happy ending adi aur pinky to mil gaye magar maaneet ka kya plz eshe ese end na karo waiting for ur second season
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
sorry mommy for not liking previous parts because i didnt knew you updated it.
lekin itni jaldi kahani khatam ho gayi.
very sad ending
atlast adi got pinky back in his life.
maaneet abki baar aise mile ki koi unhe juda na kar paye
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Part 24 to last part. Missed the updates somehow. just now read from part 24. very emotional ending.. brij and his wife are responsible for pinky, adi and geet and maan miseries. pinky escaped from brijs abuse because of maans presence. adi and pinky met finally. maan and geet are being tortured by britishers. hope you will give an epilogue to give happy ending to maan and geet and punish brij and his wife.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
lovely update mahi so maan babu bade utavle ho rahe the he went to see his jharna aka his geet who was in her own world but pretty soon came ut and was shocked to see maan had kidnapped her only so that he can spend some time with his chuhiya she litreally screaming at him that she cant come near him maan in a teasing mood he has become naughty making geet blush hard making her forget everything with his passion he has for her she scolding him for bringing her veer baba maan kissing her while there r 2 souls that r dying in afgony and seperation both wants to be with eachother but the circumstances is playing a cruel game with them while there is someone else also plotting against maaneet pinky and adi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update brijs wife plotting against them her first target adi who is a school teacher where he was summoned and was blamed for misbehaving with a teacher but adi knows these r all tricks t get him out of school but he promiused he will come back with proofs of his innocense pinky was lost in her thoughts her ma asked she said that when brij was forcing her she saw maans shadow and fainted her maa knows something must have happened she has some doubts and she wants pinky to get checked but it requires a male doc and coem th question will maan or pinky agree but its for sake of pinkys life here maaneet r lost in their passion geet is cribbing as maan kissed her what will others think maan makes her understand that what happens between should stay between them
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very painfull end
Yeh kyaa ho gyaa

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