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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
Hehe totally loved "girl talks"
Inayat seems to be the wise of all . Amanda , Mandy all of their inputs were very cute ❤️
wonderful part ⭐️
thanks for pms.

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
Wow that was an intense update . That was a cruel and gory deed , cannot be called a prank 🤔
The intention was to freak Geet out and to a certain extent it is successful . Hope Maan stays by her side . Loved the part⭐️

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JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
Loved it ⭐️ Geet recovered pretty fast ! brave girl ! 👏

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
Guess the Victorian cottage is their future home Maan felt something seeing such a magnificent thing abandoned and Geet understood his emotions regards that . Finally Maan gave in to temptation that too cottage but now that realization will dawn what will Maan do 🤔
Updated after a while 👏 LOVED IT !

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JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
Assumptions that too self-made Maan he broke her heart Geet Parmar is strong I bet she will bounce back but this , knowing the man you love may not reciprocate [ at least Geet felt so ] will make her distance herself . He clearly made he "cares" for her akin to taking her responsibility . Irony is that Geet can take care of herself in front of troubles but cannot protect her heart from him 😡 Wonder how dynamics will progress after this . Super Duper update 👏 painful but awesome writing ⭐️

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
Awww I love Paws already❤️ Geet's introspection is yet understanding no matter her hurt is there s well . She understood what and how Maan feels about himself . Maan sent Ridz to check on Geet , loved their conversation . But true heroine of update is "Paws"😛

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JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
Yay back with the update , Riddhi suggestions were super . Let Miss. Parmar take control 😎
lets see how long Maan denies and puts up the resistance 😈

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
Update
Maaneet full blown passion☺️ beautifully penned 👏 Awesome blossom update
do update soon please

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

nice story both love each other but someone is behind geet hope maan will save her

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

hi thanks 4 reposting! superb updates! js re read all the parts! awesome teaser! update soon

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

bookmarked earlier thread

bookmarking, again

hope I will start reading soon

😊

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mauaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

hii aura..

i've just started to read it.. your writing style is really different and unique must say.. it was v painful in the starting when the small girl had witnessed those guy and nice aunt's accident.. to save her, thet aunt hit that bad guy and he died.. for a small girl, it was too much to see and so she's v scared.. she was comfortable with the pop.. but he went away and her mom is busy with baby meera.. so she found her best friend maan to sooth her pain away..

well will comment after i will read more.. m on my vacation.. so don;t get time to read..

but liked the concept and story.. will read and tell for sure..😊

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

1-23 finished reading the story...I already bookmarked earlier thread but could not get the time to read...sorry...

poor girl...she has to witness the worst thing happening in front of her eyes, forcing smelly uncle on pretty lady...and then seeing that lady hitting him ...no wonder she have nightmares...glad her parents were with her...but maan was the one who supported her in all her bad times...

he was there whenever she needed him...any girl would fall in love with him...he fell in love in their childhood only...but maan was not accepting her feelings b'coss her parents did lot things for him...

finally she had her way with him...now she wants to open school and left her job...

who is this hunter...he knows very well about her...the murder of cat on her car was so scary...and in the lift too, I thought he will kill her...glad that she was saved...eager to know who is this man and why he is behind her...is he of her enemy from her work...

cont soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

😊

Edited by Aura. - 9 years ago

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