MG SS#3:The Deadly Husband Note Part 39-Page 140 13/8/2018

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#571

Amazing update. Wow finally geet took the step his time knowing maan is waiting for her to take the initiative as she knows how he feels. It is her turn to show her trust in him. And is glad they did. Like geet said there is a time and place for everything to be done to make it right. If they had become one earlier it would not have been the same. Love their moments. How possessive our sher is. Even tho she was teasing he got scared of the distance from her.

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#572

Aaj tou ek aur SPECIAL UPDATE banta hai 😉 😃

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
Aaj tou ek aur SPECIAL UPDATE banta hai 😉 😃

g nahi...
special update pe no special comments
so i m gonna be specially late with next chap...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..

g nahi...
special update pe no special comments
so i m gonna be specially late with next chap...

Plz explain special comment kaisa hota hai.. should I give u some pappis jhappiss like Maan gave to geet 😲 😆

If u r busy then take ur time update whenever u can 😳

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Plz explain special comment kaisa hota hai.. should I give u some pappis jhappiss like Maan gave to geet 😲 😆

If u r busy then take ur time update whenever u can 😳

nahi...not pappis jhappis...
but atleast give a proper review na...
you know sab ko one liner se mana karti hoon tau kia likhte hain...

Awesome update...
waiting for next...

abh ye one liner nahi raha...but ye comment b nahi hai...
imean, cant a writer demand a proper review??

nahi, i m working on few os...uske baad will start writing next chap :)

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427936

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#576

Thank you for special update...
really awesume finally maan and geet become one an love their bonding and the way their relation is blossoming...
👏 👏
early updating for next..
please update soon and also waiting for your os...

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swastisinha

@swastisinha

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#577

I did not expect so much of after-love romance in this update. It was cute😳. Geet is still discovering other shades of Maan. Hope to see their bond strengthening now as they have become one now.

It's interesting to see now how the story moves as Maan's ultimate motive that is making geet fall in love with him in every sense in this story has been accomplished.😉😆

Waiting for next! Update soon!😊

Edited by swastisinha - 9 years ago

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

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Posted: 9 years ago

#578

I thoroughly enjoyed this update. Ana, it was one of the best update for me of TDH. Not cos finally MG consummated their marriage. But cos the way you wrote it. The portrayal of MG's feelings was written outstandingly.

You know, when a couple in fiction is finally shown doing the deed, it's usually the same foreplay and them having sex and then done. But you rather wrote what they both were going through. You described their emotions and made me connect to MG more.

I loved so many scenes in this update. First was when finally Geet takes that one assured step towards Maan, he walks the rest of path for her. And that has always been the case in this story and so I loved that you continued with it. It has always been Geet taking one step then Maan taking 4 steps forward.

The next best scene was Maan complaining to Geet about the 'alarm' fixed in her head. The disappointment he felt when he woke up alone all the time she had slept with him in his room. He has never been a man to whine or sulk but he is also a human. And like every person he has his desires and wishes as well. Geet has always been the only one with whom he has shared his deepest darkest secrets.

And last but not the least was Geet filling her hair partition with sindoor. That was like icing on the cake. It highlighted the whole update for me.

I already read this update thrice cos I loved it so so much. The beauty of this update is indescribable. Loved it.

Sorry for the late comment.

-Sanjana!

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momi

@-BreakingDown-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#579

tht was the best update so far

i really loved the way u potrayed their emotions

no rushing just gowing with the flow

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..

nahi...not pappis jhappis...
but atleast give a proper review na...
you know sab ko one liner se mana karti hoon tau kia likhte hain...

Awesome update...
waiting for next...

abh ye one liner nahi raha...but ye comment b nahi hai...
imean, cant a writer demand a proper review??

nahi, i m working on few os...uske baad will start writing next chap :)

Oky will be waiting for your OSs.. aage se proper comment hoga Promise 😃