GHSP Family FF Thread 2 Part 27 PG 53 & 27A Pg 55 28/7

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Pt22
awesme part
maan father alive...dats gr8 news..waiting 4 next

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JaasChowdhray

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Part 19

A big round of applause for the wonderful part. It was an interesting base for next part which I tried my best to make it more interesting with twists. Great job Sangeetha! 👏

Part 21

My this is really a cluster of new tracks. I loved the way you put up the strong base for past present and future. Thanks for supporting the track of loka and also you have gave a clear insight on loka's past enmity with khurana's and present link with mystery person who is behind Mr.Senior Khurana & wife's kidnapping. you have done a fabulous job idunno! 👏

Part 22

For a moment my heart stopped beating reading your part, especially the dream sequence where maan is dead! phew but I am glad you didn't get him killed. loved Daadi's teasing and Maan's resolution. I find geet's behaviour bit meek but never mind I loved every bit of it. you have a great potential to write comedy stuffs coz I believe you have funny bones in you. All in all great part sophiexx! 👏

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...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Phew it was only just a dream :)

Lolzz dadi :P

She's so cool ;)

Last part was superb maan :D

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

amazing update glad that was a dream she is very scared for maan he is falling hard seeing her care so rudra will make another plan dadima just awesome such a drama queen loved her lovely part thnx 4 update

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Krupa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Hi ...to all future writer...!

One thing I had forgotten to mention in part 21 that, I had try to make story different by portraying Mann's character in double roll, as father and as son, if any one has read this update in detail they could have notice me saying He look carbon copy of recent maan.

The reason why is so,because i had read many fictions of Manet but so far didn't come across father son duo as humsakal, and that is the reason I had elaborated that track too long as guru is in double roll , and that was the twist to my update thanks for reading.

Edited by idunno - 10 years ago

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BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Part 22

Nice light hearted chapter ... I liked dadi-Geet-Maan interaction . Dadi being all filmy and Geet slowly coming out of fear and shock about the hospital firing incident . Maan decides to take some action against these dons and with Geet in Khuarana Mansion hope to see what Maan does about Mission Geet😆

loved it❤️

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Superb Update..
Very well written..
First half I thought Maan died..
You gave me mini heart attack 😆

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Krupa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: Kawan
part 21 second part..

loved it

both maaneet feeling different for the other..

is maan father still alive?..
nd who is vikrant?? i dont remember

Part 22
thought that actually maan is dead.
but it turned out to be geet dream...

dadima is great..
knows how to cheat up the mood...
making geet blush

loved it
and what about mr.khurana

part 21

vikrant is new character i had introduced he is cousin brother of Raj khuranna father of maan and he is scamming against him to capture khurrana empire, that is what my plot was but i back ot for other writers to write so in my update he is just cousin brother of Raj and uncle of maan.

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

lovely update sophie yaar geet ke nightmare ne to mujhe dara diya 😲 thank god it was just a dream geet is really scared when maan decides it high time to show the real msk ka power nobody can scare his geet and live peacefully maan returned to delhi only to witness his dramebaaz dadi who didn't know abt the attack he told dadi how geet was blaming herself thus the drama to cheer geet which id its charm he was staring at her dadi sure knows how to ruin their mahi moment he was being possessive for her which both failed to realize as now maan had decided she will only go from his life when he wants to maans dad is alive wonder what happen to maans mom nice sophie fab job dear I absolutely loved it

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Krupa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#220

part 22-very cool update.

when I read initially i didn't got at all what is happening there so decided to read again,today i read again and finally realised ,that it was dream of geet and rudra has taken back his man,maan geet went back and there was comedy circus was going on between 3 of them,and ultimately maan told her she will obey to him,still she find out guy of her choice, and will protect her always, so far they have not given name to their feeling.

as you said to me that you are sorry and cant follow my track as u are diff rant writer, but i had wrote in such a way people can write to their perspective angle and all writer has their own creativity, so I deent feel ill, every one are free to wrte what they want to write, i had tried to follow previous writer,you dont want to follow but i think each story has so many faces and people can go any direction they wants to so chill pill.

(Even in my plot if i could have not given past of sameer handa i could have foil the rudra's plan killing maan, as maan has his own security and were quite vigillance ,the firing took place between the guards and rudra's snippier dead in that incident and maan immediately took geet to Delhi, by defeating rudra.)

so every writer has their own imagination and your update was quite entertaining, keep it up-👍🏼

and finally we came back to Manet track and best luck to new writer-