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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: jyotiagarwal
Part 21
Hope maan and geet confesses soon

A little confused on rudra and anus part...dint rudra got anu killed after vivaan was born??...how come they were there together at the function with 2 yrs old vivaan...

none of them accompanying and children i just mention they they have son vivaan 2 years old.and I didn't remember ,the previous writer has mention the age of vivaan when Annu died , so it can be anything.

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Kawan

@Kawan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

awesome update ..

loved it...

sameer now understood rudra plan...

he now know what he is trying to do...

and instead blackmailed him with vivaan...

continue soon

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

OMG!! fabulous dear...really loved it...It was full on entertaining...but u mentioned that Rudra came with Anu with their baby Vivaan in the party...It can't be as I mentioned that Rudra killed Anu the day Vivaan was born...Can u edit that one line?😊

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Phewww sameer didn't get manipulated by rudra :D

He thew his card also :P :D

Great going sameer :)

Maaneet...I also want their fake gf bf game to be continued more :D

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Nice but Missed Maaneet in dis part...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

brilliant update! Well written! Maaneet attracted 2 each other! Rudra wants 2 kill Maan! Past wel incoprated! Sam awed by Vivaan! update soon

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Very well written 👏

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
OMG!! fabulous dear...really loved it...It was full on entertaining...but u mentioned that Rudra came with Anu with their baby Vivaan in the party...It can't be as I mentioned that Rudra killed Anu the day Vivaan was born...Can u edit that one line?😊

sorry i had missed that point i will edit it and will write only Rudra came in party thanks for pointing towards my mistake.and ya it is nice to know that serious and boring person like me can write entertaining updates ...ha ha ha...! just joke.

Edited by idunno - 10 years ago

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Hi, all Maneetians, part 21 is just filler episode ,

I know It is too lengthy update and people might have feel bore by reading it, but I think I had place the foundation for future writers to take this story in any direction they wants to and this story has lots of scope if people put their thought in it.Best luck to all writers-Idunno.

Edited by idunno - 10 years ago