Web of Love (3) - [Ch 69/70- P. 100] 30th April - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
A very painful part...Did their love story deserve such a tragic ending? did they deserve such an ending?
One persons fault and sooo many people are suffering now...If only naina's father was a much better person, each one of their lives would have been different,...

All this took away that beautiful bond geet n tweesha shared with each other...

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 52 - omg...Sameer was dead...he saw naina dying on her wedding day...he was self guilty for not being with her...and he ended his life...tragic end of love story
poor geet...has to witness Sameer's death...she could not stop him from dying...no wonder she has nightmares and she became so quite and introvert...she still could not forget his death...she gone into her shell ...she had to attend rehab ...
tweesha, andy & her father-bro thought she and Sameer were together...but no one knows the reality and that's why tweesha and she had drifted...
she still didn't know that naina is also dead...she thinks she is married and alive...it will be very shocking when she comes to know about naina also accepted death...
waiting for what more coming in next part
pl update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
past is really painful that incident changed her compeletly n looks like she hates naina what will happen when she will learn the truth of naina
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Posted: 10 years ago
Non Existent

My life was full of joy and merry
Sports, academics and great friends like Imran, Andy and Adi

A rough start at life, and some struggles along the way
I was living a dream now, with most of my troubles at bay

I heard back from the university of my choice, they had approved my application
Not just did they accept me, but they also were willing to sponsor my education

What more could I ask for, or so I thought
Till I reached Naintal for a match, and all of the above I forgot

There she stood, fragile and delicate, the girl I thought can never be,
Angel, out-worldly heavenly beauty, she stole me from me

Naina, she was all I could remember thereafter, even against my will
The beginning of destruction, and a walk down that memory lane is still painful

Our admiration for each other was a secret to the whole world but two
Not just did this episode destroy us, but it did the same to them too

We were both happy souls, content with everything we had around us
The begs to question, is love more a negavtive feeling, and not worth all the fuss?

Would things have been different, had I not tried to be friends with her at all?
I am forced to believe that it would be better, for she would be alive today and well

A few months is all it took to break my illusions of happiness apart
But was I happy before, or was it all just in my thought?

If that is the case, then what is the relevance of love, happiness, joy, sorrow
For although everything else is just the same, without her I cannot face tomorrow

Other than her, to every other emotion I feel an alienation and discontent
As I die, I feel the same happiness again, for today, without her I am Non-existent

Sameer Rana
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Non Existent

My life was full of joy and merry
Sports, academics and great friends like Imran, Andy and Adi

A rough start at life, and some struggles along the way
I was living a dream now, with most of my troubles at bay

I heard back from the university of my choice, they had approved my application
Not just did they accept me, but they also were willing to sponsor my education

What more could I ask for, or so I thought
Till I reached Naintal for a match, and all of the above I forgot

There she stood, fragile and delicate, the girl I thought can never be,
Angel, out-worldly heavenly beauty, she stole me from me

Naina, she was all I could remember thereafter, even against my will
The beginning of destruction, and a walk down that memory lane is still painful

Our admiration for each other was a secret to the whole world but two
Not just did this episode destroy us, but it did the same to them too

We were both happy souls, content with everything we had around us
The begs to question, is love more a negavtive feeling, and not worth all the fuss?

Would things have been different, had I not tried to be friends with her at all?
I am forced to believe that it would be better, for she would be alive today and well

A few months is all it took to break my illusions of happiness apart
But was I happy before, or was it all just in my thought?

If that is the case, then what is the relevance of love, happiness, joy, sorrow
For although everything else is just the same, without her I cannot face tomorrow

Other than her, to every other emotion I feel an alienation and discontent
As I die, I feel the same happiness again, for today, without her I am Non-existent

Sameer Rana


If Sameer had written something that night, it would be this... you warmed my heart and broke it all the same Priti.

I am honored at the gesture, touched by the words.

Indeed, they were happy souls in their own world. They hadn't thought to run away or make their future beginning that day. They were comfortable in their present where they stole few moments to be with each other.

The bold lines broke my heart P.

Is love a negative feeling? Was it such a bad thing to force violence of that sort on your own child?

Sameer have had been happy before...with his friends, with his game, with his family... But the rainy night where he spent with Naina serving her cold with ginger tea gave him more happiness than any other... The only good things that left in his life was those memories but he would trade it and let them all go, if that would bring her back to life and let her live, if not with him, but just live...

The Sameer Rana i know would never commit suicide. But the Sameer Rana who saw the one person that he loved dearly lose her life before his eyes, wouldn't be willing to fight death and so the last words were true...


Oh Priti, what did you do!

This is beautiful and rendered me speechless. How can I thank you🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
"shocking...shocking...shocking"
Watching ur love dying in front of ur eyes n nt able to take her in ur arms ...isn't it cruel.

Geet doesn't know abt Naina , tweesha doesnt know abt Sammer n Maan???????? How much he knows ?

Such a painful end of such a beautiful love story , Naina's father doing took two people lives , took away the sweet bond of friendship of geet tweesha n naina , snatched a brother from geet n now...

is it going to ruin their future too...???
Edited by fantasy..4me - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
S, your writing is an inspiration in itself. I should thank you for writing so well... not the other way around 😆🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Non Existent

My life was full of joy and merry
Sports, academics and great friends like Imran, Andy and Adi

A rough start at life, and some struggles along the way
I was living a dream now, with most of my troubles at bay

I heard back from the university of my choice, they had approved my application
Not just did they accept me, but they also were willing to sponsor my education

What more could I ask for, or so I thought
Till I reached Naintal for a match, and all of the above I forgot

There she stood, fragile and delicate, the girl I thought can never be,
Angel, out-worldly heavenly beauty, she stole me from me

Naina, she was all I could remember thereafter, even against my will
The beginning of destruction, and a walk down that memory lane is still painful

Our admiration for each other was a secret to the whole world but two
Not just did this episode destroy us, but it did the same to them too

We were both happy souls, content with everything we had around us
The begs to question, is love more a negavtive feeling, and not worth all the fuss?

Would things have been different, had I not tried to be friends with her at all?
I am forced to believe that it would be better, for she would be alive today and well

A few months is all it took to break my illusions of happiness apart
But was I happy before, or was it all just in my thought?

If that is the case, then what is the relevance of love, happiness, joy, sorrow
For although everything else is just the same, without her I cannot face tomorrow

Other than her, to every other emotion I feel an alienation and discontent
As I die, I feel the same happiness again, for today, without her I am Non-existent

Sameer Rana

👏
Beautiful
To fall in love is to lose yourself
Those with doubts and questions can never undertake this venture
Only those that chose to lose their existence for this feeling
succeed in drinking from the fountain of love
living in it and dying for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
51. Of Words and Promises-

Haila! Maggie maar dala 😃 Oh I love you so much for this short but deep update.

"Leaving is never an option, I learnt it the hard way"
He speaks so less but the words that he speaks are so true and heartfelt that he touches me with his sincerity. He's hurt so many times and many times has been let down by people he loves knowingly or unknowingly ... and inspite of it all he is again opening himself up for being the vulnerable human he would some days back detest to be. His words are indeed promises ... and I fall for his gestures each time.


Her. What to say about her... she intrigues me each time. She accepts that he knows her well.. that he won't make it easy for her but still willingly goes and chooses him each time even after uttering words that would keep him at distance but at the same time will go and bind him to her by being the person who can heal him the way only she can. It used to be him who would hurt for being let down by fate each time and would spew venom towards the ones he actually deeply feels for... but this time it's her who is causing him to have a taste of his own medicine. they both are entangled in such a web created by destiny that they hurt and live it each day... but only find solace through each other might be because it's the similar event and the two people who they were connected to were the ones who were the cause for all the bitterness.


She pushes him but he instead of going away this time remains like the wall for her on whom she can vent out everything and yet later can lean on for support and comfort. And he proves it by giving her the right to hurt him... This only shows his trust and selflessness to keep himself vulnerable for hurt.

I only hope his trust shouldn't shatter completely by future revelations ... and that they sail through it somehow, even if they resist it and hurt each other in the process ... but alter should be there to soothe and heal all of it for the other.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Doc🤗
I read your comments and fall in love with it all over again😃

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