Web of Love (3) - [Ch 69/70- P. 100] 30th April

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Doracake

@Doracake

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Itne chotu update

But so beautifully written.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

part 51 - almost confession...I liked his answer 'I will give you the right to'... as if he accepted her with her all flaws and compelled her to express her feelings and she kissed him...waiting for next...

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Finally both have overcome fears and accepted each other

Lovely to see that they are understanding each other

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

And geet surrendered...and what a sweet surrender it was...and this one was inevitable😊

i am soo loving this tender side of maan .. i have a always angry image for him in this story ...guess his softness is meant for her alone...

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aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Its so beautiful!! Giving the right to hurt, I believe it is always given involuntarily. you never really have a choice. I thought Maan would be the one difficult to bend, to take the leap of faith. But here he is standing halfway through waiting for her. I loved that Geet at least took the step.

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fantasy..4me

@fantasy..4me

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

beautiful update dee.

Maan ji to in complete Andy mood, loved this sweet little love confession in indirect way.

I don't know why I think "ye toofan she pahle ki shanti hain". I hope m wrong, lets see .

Already waiting

Edited by fantasy..4me - 10 years ago

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soniaz121

@soniaz121

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

read this story in two days i am so much addicted to this story characters of your stories are so different and touch one 's heart you are superb writer love your all work so much a big lover of your stories good luck for your work

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Aditi.kesari

@Aditi.kesari

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

It is small and sweet update waiting for next

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

I have read this chapter so many times now

It should have made it easy to come up with a rational decent comment

I love this chapter

she is afraid to hurt him

For all of her insecurities he is giving her carte blanche

wow! what a love!

adored the foreheads meeting part 😳

write soon

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