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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 81

It's been a couple of weeks since Maan left and there is not even a single day that passed without Geet longing for Maan to come back...

Geet ko ab patha chal gaya ki Geet ke zindagi ko smabalne wala toh sirf Maan hai...

Maan ke bina Geet ki zindag adhoori ho gayi hai...

Maan ke bina Geet ke liye koi zndagi hi nahi, haina babaji?

Geet aks her babaji to bring her Maan back...

One morning Geet is sitting with dadi and dadi gets a call from Maan...

Geet pretends not to be interested but she wants to know whether Maan actually asks about her...

Dadi: Maan bete

Geet is excited to here his name...

Dadi: achcha bete, sab teek haina?

Geet wants to know that Maan is fine...

She looks at dadi's face itself for her eractions...

Dadi: yahan toh sab teek hai bete

Dadi: ye aap kya kehthe ho bete?

Dadi: teek hai bete

Dadi cuts the call...

Geet is disappointed that neither Maan asked about Geet nor dadi mention about her to Maan...

Dadi: aap kya dekhthe ho?

Geet: kuch nahi dadi

Dadi: ye aajkal ke bache bhi na? humme toh samajh mein hi nahi aathi ki aapka problem kya hai

Geet: mujhe koi problem nahi hai dadima

Dadi: mein toh Maan ki baat kar rahi hoon bete

Geet babut pareshaan ho jaathi...

Geet: Maan sir ko kya hua?

Dadi: unka kya hua ye toh humme maloom ho ya na, par aap ko toh kuch ho gaya hai

Geet: meiin teek hoon dadima

Dadi: hum dekh sakthe bete, aap kitne kush hai

Geet is not worried about herself now...

Geet: dadima, Maan sir teek toh haina?

Dadi: hum kya jaanthe, aap unko hi kyun nahi poochthe?

Geet: woh mein kaise?

Dadi: aapke Maan sir agle flight pakadke wapas aarahe hai, aap ab unko kudh pooch sakthe ho

Geet: Maan sir aarahe hai

Geet jumps in joy...

Dadi just wanted to see this, a happy smiling Geet...

And that's not possible without Maan, haina?

Dadi: sambalke bete, Maan aapko aaise dekhenge toh na jaane kya karenge, I think he'll just jump off the flight and land before you right now

Geet blushes...

Dadi: ab lag rahe hai aap hummari Geet, itne din toh hummari Geet kahan kho gayi thi?

Geet: dadima Maan sir kab aa rahe hai

Dadi: aaj raat yak al subha, humme teek se nahi patha, I'll let you know later

Geet gets ready for college soon and is excited to share the news with her friends...

Dadi is also happy that Maan is coming home...

That evening Geet goes to nizamudin to pray for Maan...

Geet comes home and starts pestering dadi when will Maan come...

Dadi herself doesn't know the exact timings as Maan's mobile is switched off...

He may come at 1 am or he may also come at 6 am depending on the flight he catches...

He nay come anytime...

Geet keeps waiting after dinner...

Dadi asks Geet to go to bed as they don't know when Maan will come and the driver is there to pick him so they can meet him in the morning...

But how could Geet sleep without seeing Maan...

She goes to her room and waits till dadi is asleep and comes back and waits for Maan...

She tries to watch TV abd read some magazines but she couldn't...

In all her excitement she keeps running to the door every now and then to see whether the car has arrived ...

Finally she hears the driver honking the horn at 3 am...

He is here, Maan is here...

She runs like a lunatic and finds him coming ...

Maan also can't wait to hold his Mishty in his arms again...

He stops seeing her running towards him...

She heads in full speed and halts just before him not knowing whether to hug him or not...

Maan nods his head to go ahead and she just jumps on him and hugs him tight...

Maan too hugs her to console her and holds her tight...

After a passionate hug Maan releases her and looks into her longing eyes...

Ohh they have been looking for him for the whole night and still they are not tired...

They are only rejoicing his return and they keep mersmerising him as always...

Maan tries to ignore them and wants to hear from her lips for a change...

Maan: kaisi rahi tummari azaadhi?

Geet: mujhe koi azaadhi nahi chahiye, samjhe aap?

Maan: achcha? Tum toh ab badhi ho gayi ho, aur ab akhele apne zindagi sambal bhi sakthi ho, jaise ki iss 15 din tumne sambala tha, haina?

Geet: aap aaise kaise mujhe yahan akhele chodke jaa sakthe ho?

Geet gets angry with him with the full rights of a wifey...

Maan: tum akhele kahan thi? Mein hi akhela tha, aur tumme patha bhi hai ki ye 15 din meinne kaise kata?

Geet: phir aap mujhe chodke kyun gaye?

Maan: tummari exams haina?

Geet: mere exams abhi bhi katam nahi hui, aap wapas kyun aaye ho?

Maan: ye toh tum bhi jaanthi ho Geet ki mein wapas kyun aaya

Geet: aap bhi na, pehle chodke jaathe ho, phir baghkke aathe ho

Maan: Geet, mein baghkke aaya hoon? Par meinne dekha ki tum baghthe bagthe aayi ho mere paas

Geet: mein toh sirf andar se aayi hoon lekhin aap toh London se hi baghthe aaye haina?

Maan: haan Geet, ab mein tummare bina ek pal bhi nahi reh saktha, chahe kuch bhi ho, hum saath hi sambalthe hai, ye dadi ke baat ko maanke meinne bahut badhi galthi kardhi

Geet: dadi ke baat?

Maan: haan, mujhe London bhejne ka plan Dadi ka hi tha

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, dadi ko pinky aur tummare koi Ms.Smiley ne complain kar dhiya ki aajkal tummara dhyaan padayi mein nahi hai

Geet: par iss mein meri kya galthi hai?

Maan: tummari koi galthi nahi?

Geet: nahiii

Geet stares Maan...

Maan: par Geet meinne suna hai ki tum hamesha apne sapnon mein khoya rehthi ho, class mein bhi? Aaise bhi kya sapna hai? kya tummare sapnon mein bhi koi Rajkumar safed godhe mein aatha hai kya?

Geet: aapko kaise patha ki mere sapnon mein Rajkumar aatha? Aap ke sapnon mein bhi aaya tha kya?

Maan: Geet, mere sapnon mein rajkumar aake kya karega? Waise mein kaise sapne dekh saktha?

Geet: kyun? Aap sapne nahi dekhthe?

Geet is disappointed...Maan ke sapnon mein Geet ko aana chahiye, haina?

Maan: mere neendh ko toh kissi ne chura liya hai Geet, jab neendh hi nahi aathi toh sapne kahan se aayenge? Haina Geet?

Maan tries to get an answer from her eyes...Geet blushes and avoids looking into his naughty eyes...

Maan: ab nazrein bhi kyun churathi ho?

Geet: ab toh babaji aap ko patha chal gaya hoga ki ye sab kisski galthi hai? aap toh jaanthe haina ki aap ki Geet kitne bolibali hai

Maan: toh kya ye meri galthi hai babaji? Geet, tummara dhyaan padayi mein nahi lagthi toh mein kya kar saktha?

Geet: toh aap ne kuch nahi kiya? haina?

Maan: nahi toh

Geet: mujhe dekhke jawaab do, aap ne kuch bhi nahi kiya?

Maan looks into her eyes and starts drooling again...he can't help but commit this crime again and again...

Maan: haan haan, mantha hoon ki galthi meri bhi hai

Geet: aap ki bhi, ye toh sirf aapki galthi hai, ek 18 saal ki masoom ladhki ko apne aakhon se hi pasakke ussko pagal kar dethe ho aur kehthe ho ki aapki koi galthi nahi hai?

Maan: achcha, mere ankhon ne tumme pasaya hai toh teri ye nasheele aankhon ne kya kiya?

Geet: kya kiya?

Geet gets closer looking for an answer...

Maan: kya kiyaaa? Abhi bathatha hoon

Maan pulls her into a hug again...

Geet too hugs him...she had missed the comforts of his cozy arms...

They get lost in each others arms...

Part82

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update! well written! Geet misses Maan! she is happy he is gng 2 b back! she waist 4 him! dadi teases her! Maan back! intense passionate hug! they talk! she doesn't want azaadi! Maan reveals dadi set him 2 London! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Finally Maaneet confessed they can't live without each other
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wow lovely superb fantastic beautiful touching update..te way geet ki restless missing my maan and her crib to dadi and dadi was teasing both maaneet was lovely..te way geet ki restless increased at once wen dadi said tat my maan is cuming and her gaze struck at te entrance was lovely superb touchy..now his geet realize wat my maan meant for her and she will stop to give her pea size brain work thinking abt freedom he he he, haina babaji..te way geet rush to my maan and my maan too hugged both felt content to be in each other's arms was lovely emotional touchy..now my maaneet realize they feelings and geet saying i dont need any freedom and my maan teasing her and they lovely romance was lovely emotional touching beautiful..i love te update so much yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful Update

Maan and Geet's conversation was good but still neither of them actually talk what they hearts want
Geet finds solace in her Maan's arms

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 81 - so it was dadi's plan to make her realize her feelings...both could not live without each other...loved their confessions...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely fantastic ud
geet missing him and daadi told
he is coming back but don't know
which flight he will take
geet waiting fr him whole nights
he arrived at 3:00 am geet run to
him maan saw her and wen she comes
close she stops but getting permission
she jumped on maan and it's wsd passionate
hug and both lost and taking their heart
maan told daadi sends him London
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Both parts are amazing
Geet mu maans words
N asks azaadhi
He left her giving her freedom
But both misses each other n
Maan come back
Both confessed n lost in each others comfort
Nice parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update..happy that they have confessed
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Part - 82

Geet: Maan sir

Maan: hmmm

Geet: ab toh humein chalna chaiye

Maan: haan Geet, chalo

Maan scoops her and takes her to the terrace...

He wants to spend some more time with Geet...

Maan: I'm sorry Geet, mujhe maaf kardho, mujhe aaise nahi karna chahiye tha

Geet closes his mouth with her fingers...

Geet: chup bilkul chup, ab toh aap wapas aagaye na, toh sorry ki kya zaroorat?

Maan: Geet, ye sorry uss din ki hai jab meinne tummara dil dhukaya tha, tummare b'day wali din

Geet: woh aap kya kehthe ho?

Geet tries to act as if she didn't expect anything from Maan that day...

Maan: meinne dekha hai Geet, tummare aakhon mein hazaroon sawaal, aur tum kitne umeed lekhe mere paas aayi thi uss waqt

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Geet doesn't want Maan to know how much he had hurt her the other day for he'll always regret it and he won't be able to forgive himself for that...

Maan: Geet, joot mat bolo, tummare aankhen hamesha mujhe sachayi bathathe hai, issiliye tum koi bhi baat mujhse chupa nahi sakthi, meinne ussui waqt dekha hai Geet, tummare aankhon mein dard, aur kaise tummare sapnon toot gaye the, par mein majboor tha Geet, aur mein tumse maafi mangne ke liye tadap raha tha

Geet: ab toh hum ek saath hai, ab uss baat ko chod do, mein toh tabhi bhool gayi thi

Maan: nahi Geet, mujhe mat rokho, bolne do mujhe. Mujhe aaisa nahi karna chahiye, tum kitne kush thi, aur meinne tummari sari kushiyon ko ek minute mein gayab kardhi

Geet: aap toh mere maan ki har baat ko pad sakthe ho, lekhin phir bhi aapne aaise kyun kiya?

Maan: Geet uss din tumse phone mein baat karne ke baat mein toh pure jagah ko apne haathon se sajhaya the, aur mein tummara intrezaar karne laga

Geet: lekhin meinne aaisa kuch nahi dekha? Kaise dekhthi, aap toh andhere mein beite hue the

Maan: Geet, tab mujhe Dadi ne call kiya tha

Maan tells Geet what happened...

Dadi: Maan bete, aaj aap jadhi ghar wapas aayiye, humme aapse kuch zaroori baat karbi hai

Maan: par dadi mein aaj jaldhi nahi aa saktha, muje ek zaroori meeting hai

Dadi: aap apni meeting abhi cancel karke aajao

Maan: par Dadi mein aaise nahi kar saktha

Dadi: what? I'll call Adi and cancel all the meetings

Maan: dadima, ye koi official meeting nahi hai

Dadi: so it's personnel, aap Geet se milne wale ho?

Maan: haan dadi

Dadi: aap ne Geet ka kya haal banake rakha hai Maan bete? Uss bechari ka padaye pe asar lagne laga hai bete, ye aap teek nahi kar rahe hai, as Geet's guardian I got a complain from her college that she missed her models and all her hardwork is going in vain, and Pinky also confirmed that Geet is pretty much distracted these days, she has completely forgotten her goal, she has promised her brother that she'll successfully complete her studies, and you should be helping her not disturbing her at this time, you know how much she has struggled to reach this level, even her professor is worried that Geet has lost track somewhere

Maan: par dadi, Geet is smarter than you think, she'll manage

Dadi: I know bete, but still we have to make sure that she gets the best opportunities, for that she needs to score high like always

Maan too had that guilt that he is distracting Geet too much and it's not easy for her to handle all this at the same time...but still Maan wanted to confess ...

Dadi: Maan bete, I don't think it's the right time for all this, you just postpone this date

Maan: par Dadi mein Geet ko disappoint nahi kar saktha

Dadi: you just promise me that you won't reveal anything until she finishes her exams

Maan hesitates...: par Dadi

Dadi: Maan bete, I'm your dadi, I know what's good for you better

Maan: Ok Dadi, I promise, but I can't cancel this date now

Dadi: that's your problem, bye bete

That's when Maan decided that he would make Geet confess instead...

He had only promised dadi that he'll not say anything to Geet but Geet can say what she feels and that's enough for Maan...

He tried his best to indirectly make her confess but Geet misunderstood him completely...

Geet then realizes her mistake, so she was right, Maan loves her more than she loves him...

Maan: Geet, pehle toh tum meri aadat thi, phir dhere dhere tum meri zaroorat ban gayi, aur ab toh tum zindagi ban gayi, Maan ki zindagu Geet ke bina adhoori hai Geet, mujhe tummari zaroorat hai Geet, tum hi meri zindagi ho, meri kushi ho, meri sab kcuh ho

Ab toh bathatdo Geet...

Geet runs and hugs him...: I love you Maan sir

Maan: Geet ab toh tum mujhe Maan bhula sakthi haina?

Geet: hmmm

Suddenly thunder strikes and Geet tightens her grip...

Maan pulls her even closer and enjoys the moment...

Behne de mujhe behne de...

Maneet come back to reality after the rain stops...

Geet then realizes that Maan must be tired and needs to sleep...

Geet: toh ab aapko sona chahiye, gud night

Geet tries to leave but Maan pulls and holds her back...

Maan: Geet, aaaj toh mein tumme nahi chodoonga

Geet: kya?

Maan: kal se dadi ke samne hum aaise nahi mil sakthe haina, toh aaj

Geet: aaj kya?

Maan: aaj ke raat mein tummare saath OH mein hi sojaatha hoon

Geet: Dadimaaa

Maan closes her mouth...chup bilkul chup

Geet stares...

Maan is not ready to leave her...

Geet: jaane do na

Geet also doesn't want to leave...

Maan: toh jaao

Maan releases her for a moment only to pull her back and hug her more passionately...

Maan: I missed you very much Geet

Geet: miss you kya miss you, pehle I love toh bolo

Maan: uss ke liye toh tumme pehle ek graduate banna padega

Geet: kya?

Maan: I've promised dadi

Geet: toh

Maan: you'll have to wait till your graduation

Geet: nahi Maan sir mein itna intrezaar nahi kar sakthi sir

Maan: phir se sir kahooge toh

Geet: toh kya sir? aap ne hi Dadi ko promise kiya haina sir, toh aap bhi intrezaar karo sir

Geet irritates him calling him sir again and again

Maan: Geeet

Geet runs off...

From the next morning they start acting infront of dadi...

Maan only gets to see Geet at BF and dinner and that too along with dadi...

This is not fair and Geet enjoys seeing Maan tight lipped infront of dadi...

Poor Maan tries his best to converse with Geet with signals but buddu Geet doesn't understand his plight and makes fun of him instead...

Maan has to do something or he will go mad playing this dumdsharades that too with Geet...

One night Maan finishes his dinner fast and waits for Geet...

He asks her to finish her dinner fast...

Geet looks at him confused...what's the hurry Maan sir?

Maan: Geet, aur kitne dher khaogi? Jaldhi karo, humme padna haina?

Geet is shocked...ye Maan sir ab kaise exam ke liye padaye kar rahe hai?

Geet: par Maan sir

Maan doesn't let her finish...

Maan: hare Geet, tumne poocha haina? Woh koi doubt, chalo mein tummare sare doubts clear kartha

Maan zabardasti Geet ko wahan se lekhe jaatha...

Dadi smiles and lets Maan go ahead...

After all Maan has been controling himself so well just as he promised dadi..


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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago

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