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sanafatima35

@sanafatima35

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Awsum prologue n interesting cs

Different concept..romantic maan urf nandu with different geet

Will be waiting to read more

Update soon

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Great character sketch.maan no I mean bandy he is very poor. And geet belong to a very reputed family in village. Waiting to read more.

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

very interesting... is nandu maan,,, geet is not the soft natured girl and not from middle class family.. she is very rich... nandu is a poor boy and also have speech problem... waiting for the story to start...

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Nice prologue and cs

Poor nandu! Shahji ke saath kaise kaam karta hoga?

Waiting for unfold the story

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

wow lovely cs..very interesting yar..

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turbulence

@turbulence

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Cool concept as always.

Yaar tum aisi ideas kaha se lati ho? Seriously i will need tution from you very soon.

Yaha poor maan is so helpless n exploited too. Shahji kinna cruel aadmi hai. N maan stutter bi karta hai kya??

Maan yaha shuru se romantic n geet different hogi! Is geet gonna be his support system later on? Geet bi ek headstrong character hai!

Both seem like opposite poles, well kehte hai dat opposites attract! Dekhte hai.

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

New story

Lovely CS

Mera Maan ban gaya Nandu, he is poor and having problem of stuttering

but romantic

Geet is rich and stubborn, umm!!!! very interesting

Waiting for update

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Prologue is Interesting but Captivating at the same time

Nandu working for low wages yet Shah ji deliberately has not given him a pair of slippers as his are torn and now he has to go out in the boiling sun and peck mangoes
It seems this Shah ji must be inhumane towards his workers