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Posted: 10 years ago
Painful update. Poor geet. Dev tried to seek help but no one helped him . Really i hate mann. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 12



DARKNESS all around. Her bruised eyes were aching,where he hit her hard to overpower her struggle. Her left side face were turn bluish black and swelled to. Now it take
weeks to settle. Her eyes clenched hard but the window on right side allowing soft breeze to come inside and craessed her messy hairs spread all over her face. Its not soothing at all. Wounds of his wild act, aching badly. In a swift her life goes ups and down. Before this she know about pain but now realized what the word actually meant. Pain, frustration and anger all towering her senses but body pushed her back. She didnt even able to move an inch. She was his now. No matter she wants or not. His possession.


Geet was still praying that it was only her worst nightmare and she awaked in her bedroom. But truth not changed. When she opened her eyes, a dim light giving the view of the room. She was all naked under the comforter with him.



She tried to slipped away from him. Breathing with him is chocking her lungs. Suddenly she felt a strong grasp around her waist. His preying eyes staring her only.


"leave me alone..." she whimpered in sobs and he pulled her to him. Once again she was underneath him. Geet turned her face dont want to look at tha one who runied her.


Maan's brows knitted and face stern. He squezeed her cheek inwards and made her look at him. Her bruised portion scanned by him. "see what you had done?" Maan blamed her for her wounds. "this is the consequences when you deny MSK without even a thought." he blew cool air on her eye. She gave a jerk to her body and Maan applied his pressure on her. "if you agree then it not happened. Choice is yours. Obey or get punished." his voice was stable and authoritive.


"you are sick. You got what you want. Now let me go." she tried not to poured out her tears but her sobs not ready to take a pause.


He firmed her wrists and right hand stroked the mound of her left breast. She body shivered. "don't you understand simple thing? You belongs to mine only. Your past life is over. So forget about your dream to get back to that." he growled. He stretch his hand and open the drawer of side table. Searching for something. Soon he got the ointment. "now be a good girl." he allow his sleek fingertips to roamed over her body. Geet cried but her body felt relief with the caress of cream. Lust rolled through him again. He want to explore her again. Sply when she was here between his arms,then how he resist.



His shaft against her send a wave of fear and panic. Her eyes pleading. Maan grasped her hand before she start protesting. He leaned over her face and bite her ear lobe,before whispering against her ear. "if you love me back then i we both live the moment."


Geet was scared and numb. Already her body ached with last encounter and here he demands for more. All this made her mute. Plus Maan squeezed her nape so hardly that the went down through her throat. Her silence gave him authority to used her in his own way.



Definitely this morning wasn't pleasent. Maan again intimate without her will. Her cries,sobbings,pleading were not hit his ears. Geet had no choice because whenever she snap back or defend he hit her more brutally. She was in her hell where no scope of escape.



Sitting under shower she just thinking only what mistake she had done. Warm water soothing her body pain but what about the wounds he gave on her soul. Will she ever able to get rid of this monster. Or her it become her destiny to live a life of some wh**e,where her body used by her owner,wheather she want or not. Here he owned her freedom by tying her in a marriage cage. She very well aware of his powers. She knew outside also,there is no one who go against him. So where she will go to rescue herself or it was the end of her life.


Geet was sat like a life less body when Maan invaded inside. He turn off the knob. Her nubile form provoke urges to grab her but he thought of giving her time to eat something. Maan wrapped towel around her and lift her. His musculine sent brought her back to senses. She start struggling,but wont effect him. He placed her on bed and compressed her arms,pushing her back to bed post. "dont force me to act roughly. Now let me clear one thing and its good for you as soon you adapt it. You had no route to turn back. I closed all. And dont even think of running or killing yourself because if you do then your uncle will pay for your deeds." Maan cautioned her and Geet's ears opened her eyes wide in a shock.



"what you have done with him?" She asked without even bothering about her state.


"abhi tak to kuchh nahi but if you create problem so will i." he moved and dragged out some papers from his wardrobe. "this was your uncle's only property papers which he mortgage to some Kashyap for your studies. Isi ko chhudane k liye bank loan lena chahti thi na tum." Maan waved the papers and raised her shock.



"ye tume kaha se mile?" she whimpered in panic.



"usi kashyap se. I payed him for this. Every bank reject your loan demand because you dont have a job but i am the MSK,no one can denied me." he smirked evily on his win and her faded face. "you are fool enough Geet. Itne paise to tume Dev b de deta,usse kyu nahi liye? And now this become your chain in my hands."


This was for what she ran from one bank to another but all rejects the case. She reminded when her Uncle hopefully called her and she only gave him a bad news that her case rejected this time too. Maan was right,this amount can be paid by Dev,but her self respect not allowed this,that's why she don't even let him got to know about this and always talk in private so he will not got to know and force to help.




"now eat and obeyed. Keep my words in mind. You dont have any other choice but to accept your fate,which is glorious. With me you can get everything you desired for."


"at what cost?" Geet was in pain which comes out time to time in form of words.



Maan fists her hairs. "i warned you. Stop provokig me." he glared her and she stared him with tearful eyes which again blurred her vision. Next she was hear a sharp sound of shutting the door behind him.



She curled her legs and tagged against her chest. Tears following down. Her all senses blocked and mind denying helping her out of this mess. Neither she able to live this shameful life nor she would die. Or else her only relation will pay and she knew it was not a threat only. Maan can execute into a reality. Tears remain her only well wisher in her life now. They wont leave her like others.




NOTE: RESPONSE IS DECREASING. PLS TELL ME ARE YOU INTRESTED OR NOT. IF NOT THEN I WILL SHUT IT.
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Posted: 10 years ago
me first i liked todays update and i really want to continue with the fiction. Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Poor geett
Bad maan
he shud nt had forced hr
Hopee happy days come soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
painful update. Maan is truly a monster and has trapped geet badly. no hope for her to escape also.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet badly trapped wiith maan here...she dt hv any escpe frm his clutchess n..w he threaten hr with hr uncles safety...she is crying on hr destiny...maan is muh cruel...he is all obseessed with Geet...updt soon...dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part.. geet was crying and in pain.. what is maan doing, he was telling her that he loves her but he only gives pain to her.. he blackmailed her also.. poor geet dont know what to do.. waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Painful update...
Feeling bad for geet...
Waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting part.
hope maan will change soon.
Edited by ksasi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is so cruel
poor geet... still she is strong ...

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