(new thread added)MY INNOCENT SURRENDER-2 #2 Updated P 12 on P-131

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THREAD 1


P 5 : SCROLL DOWN


P 6 - PG NO 19


PART 6


P 7 - P5 NO 34

PART - 7

P 8 - PG NO 46

PART 8

P 9 - PG NO 63

PART 9


P 10 - PG NO 84

PART 10
P 11 - PG NO 115


PART 11


P 12 - PG NO 131

PART 12




THREAD 3


THREAD 4
Edited by richa_kapoor - 9 years ago
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PART - 5



Three lives struggling with their emotions. Maan was searching her everywhere. Geet wants to meet Maan so he approved their relation and Dev seeking for a chance. Night was passed in their sleepless eyes. Maan followed his daily routine and came down for breakfast. Dev was waiting for him. He had left no choice but to told him about them. As soon he came Dev glance and assuming abour his mood. Maan looks calm so he decided to grab the chance.

"bro i want to tell you something." he starts and wait for his reply. "not actually telling only but want your approval." he added.


"hmm.." Maan gave a sign that he was listening to him,when his eyes was glued on newspaper.


"bro i am in love with a girl and now want to marry her." He expressed quickly before Maan finish his toast and left the table.


Dev was waiting for his reaction or reply but he was silent. Not even bother to utter a word so Dev said once again. Maan glance up at him. Leaving his paper Maan glance at him,"Look Dev i have many important works to do rather then listening your love affairs and whatever. You weekly change your girlfriends and i am not intrested in all that." Maan told his views.


"but bro i am serious." Dev said strongly.


"so i am. For a change main maan b lu that you are serious for this girl but for how long Dev. That girl named... Whatever i dont remember,you are serious for her also then kya hua? Dev i have no time for your games and time pass." Maan stood up and start moving.


Dev chased him and stopped."Bro pls for my sake meet her for once. I am sure you will agree with me. She have all the qualities to become a part of our family. I assure you,you will approve her." Dev insist him again and again.


Maan wasnt ready but for his brother's sake he got ready to meet the girl in evening. Maan gave time to him and Dev turned extermely happy. He thank to his brother and left in hurry. Maan reached office and enquired about his mystery girl from sources but no clue still they had. Maan burst on them and command to increase the pace.



Dev went to meet her and told her everything. Geet turned happy as finally her wish is going to fulfill. Both are waiting for evening now. Maan was frustrated. By every passing day his frustration was rosed.


Maan is rule breaker, destroyer and achiever of his dreams and the thought of his helplessnes in founding a mere girl just fuling his anger only. When he arrived at KM,his servant informed about Dev and his girl. Maan frowned and moved to his room. He changed first and came down after half an hour. Geet's anger was grewed. "what this monster think of himself? If we came late he cancelled the meeting but now Mr. himself was vanished." Geet mummered in recent voice. "Dev what the hell is this? Where is he?" Geet burst on him. She stood up and interrogate Dev,crossing her arms across her chest. She was staring him angrily.


Dev saw Maan and signaled her to shut her mouth but she dont got and shouting at him. "Dev i am not scared of your brother,so just him right now." Geet command with a dominance.


Dev clenched his eyes and Geet went near him. She asked what happend. Dev opened his eyes and trying to lighten the atmospher,giving a fake smile to Maan. Geet was standing facing Dev and Maan was stood behind her. "good to see u bro here. I told you about Geet in morning. So here is she." Geet's eyes to widened,got awared that Maan was arrived already.


Maan settled on large sofa and staring both. Dev turned Geet towards Maan who was struck with his laptop. "bro she is Geet and Geet meet my brother Mr. Maan Singh Khurana." Dev offically introduced both. Maan still wont pay heed to her.


Geet went near to him and raised her hand. "hello Mr. Khurana." she greets him.


Maan finally leave his laptop and glance up to meet her. He raised his lashes and got the biggest shock of his life. Geet,the girl standing before him was none other then but his mystery girl to whom he saw and turn insane. His whole body frozed and sholders stiffened. He wasn't able to react. Dev came near. "bro yahi hai Geet,my love. And we both want to get marry as soon as possible." Dev's word stoled land beneath his feet.


The girl whom he search madly from past few days was turned his only sibbling's love intrest. Maan turned stoned and both waiting for his reply. But he wasn't to react. She was the first girl for whom he desired but now what he do. Blood ozzing in his viens in a pace. Geet stared at Dev as he was stood like a statue.


"bro what happened?" Dev to worried from his silent reaction.


"Dev i have some urgent work." he said and leave in a pace. He straight went to his gym and threwing his anger mix frustration on his punching bag. Geet annoyed again.


"what he think of himself. I told you he is maniac." Geet remarked. Rage for him was increasing in her heart.

Maan was drenching in his own sweat. Won't even realize how many hours he spend there. Waves of thoughts strike against his mind. Same time Dev arrived there and asked abot Geet again. She was already left in anger.


Maan stopped punching his bag. "Dev are you serious? I don't think so. She don't even have a bit pf your ex's. Trust me you will bore from this marriage very soon." Maan showed hia doubt as his mind wasn't stable right now.

"Please bro trust me for once. I really love her and I promise I wont disappoint our family name." He defends.

"Par Dev wo ladki us tarah ki nahi hai." Maan argued.


"Janta hu that's why I choose her. Apko pata hai she slapped me in our first meeting for my misbehave. Bro she wasn't greedy like my other girl friends who only after me for my money and name. Bro she is best." Dev continuing praising her without even glancing at Maan who clenched hard one rod that hurts him badly and made his hand bleeds. "Bro my love is not fake for her."


"And what about her? Is she aware of your past?"

"Yes bro I told her everything about me. Bro she to love me and we both only waiting for your approval." Dev said in almost pleading way.


Maan's all hopes shattred. She knew everything still accept him that clearly means she to love him. "Maan you have to take step back for your brother's happiness." His heart first time felt any pain but he decided to step back for Dev sake. "Theek hai Dev main milunga uski family se tumhare liye." Maan said hoarsly. His eyes was burning but he don't showed. Dev hugged him in happiness so was Maan.

PRECAP : PAST SHADOW



NOTE: Guys clearly told me if you are not interested then I will stop wasting my time in typing this FF. Na likes na comments. So annoying 😡
Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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Richa are you going to update.
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Congrats for new thread
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Congrats on new thread
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New thread congo

Oh dear he found her

And what shock came when he did

She is his brother love

Now he cant do anything

Well lets see

After all it has geet and maan in the banner

And not to forget this is maneet story

What a way he found his mystery girl

The one he was looking for madly

And now she cant be his

Why do I think there is more to geet than meets the eye

Is dev really serious

For geet and he isn't just playing with her

Does he really wanna marry her

Guess he does for now

What happened in past

Geet slapped dev when he misbehaved with her

Why am I not surprised

He did ask for it

Misbehave karoge toh chamet toh kahoge hi

Poor maan feel for him

First girl he liked too

Who affected him this much

No wonder he couldn't say anything

And had to take out his helplessness and anger in the gym

Whats next

Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago
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Congrats for new thread Sweety...
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Congrats for new thread
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