You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

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spoorthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara
loved update...now geet is talking freely to maan...and waiting for him...loving their bonding...waiting eagerly for next :)

Thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: chiki143
Awesome one dear... now everything is getting in the right tracks... atleast that is wat I hope unless u give some twists😉. The restlessness of the newly wed is very nicely written. Wat u said is absolutely correct dear,.. once after marriag, though u go home to meet parents u stii miss ur hubby and home it happens. 👏 such a sweet and wonderful convo between maaneet... loively update

u have become quite smart must say😆

thanks for reading!🤗

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#453

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Hay pep!

firstly let me wipe my eyes... such a good response Babaji!

People who know me are aware of the fact that my any thread wouldn't be complete with out a Note😛

hmmm... so coming to the point next part is the last part according to me... how n y u will know once I post the part!

n also one of my friends wanted me to build maan's character before closing this one.. ab dosto ki baat taal bhi tho nahi sakti na so let me know what do u think about it!

Either part 10 will be the end or part 15...

I ur poor bachi of babaji will be waiting as usual

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago