You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#461

having chance of more uds so

y denies

i go fr 15 pt

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Mamta-Maaneet

@Mamta-Maaneet

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#462

arey abi toh maan and geet k beech friendship b nahi hui.. 😕

story kaise end ho sakti hai.. i want their romance nok-jhok etc..

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#463

the story has just started , why do u want to end it soo sooon

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#464

i also what that maan character to be built before last part :)

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#465

How this beautiful story can be so short.

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zornitsa

@zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

As you started from geet POV.

Maan char... From geet POV.. As her understanding.. Him..

She learning things..naturally falling in love.. Comes nxt...

Vice verse ...Maan knowing ..Ture self of geet...

So will have ..more than 15 ...😃

Waiting nxt update...

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Preeti Menon

@OmushDefo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Beautiful update

Geet went to her mother's only to fulfill some rituals and spend some time with parents. She is restless thinking about Mann. She stole his number from her father's mobile and gave him a miss cal. They talked and now she seems releived and embarassed of feeling so desperate..

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jyotiagarwal

@jyotiagarwal

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#468

Hey plz dont end it so soon...part 15 plzzz

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#469

You the writer its completely your decision
but it would be interesting to make Geet aware and show her that even though her husband is not much educated like she is yet he is very wise .
Then again ending the story now maybe Maan coming to take Geet back will also be good where they now start developing
communication between .