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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
maan is attracted to geet
maneet scene was just superb
loved it
waiting for next love v/s lust
hey plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
maan is gone...
never thought such feeling will come to him..

loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome story dear..loving it each and every scenes..update soon dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
So the stage is set and you are attempting a different story. Geet is so innocent! Hope maan will keep her safe from everyone, including himself hehehe... great job heytal :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing n lovely update
Edited by priyasree - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
maans plight is very well written
n geet is always a disaster n does blunder
n endsup making maan arouse
accidental k..
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
geet is torturing maan so innocently 😆
poor maan geet par chilla bhi nahi sakta...
geet is a disaster queen...her disasters are arousing maan...poor maan...
accidental kiss
loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally started reading dis
Was so eager actually n seriously worth d wait
Damn intresting concept
Prologue bowled me over totally unimaginable
Maaneet are just wow der wat more do v need
Helpless geet n maan her saviour goddd superb
Maan is totally smitten by her n geet being unaware of dis totally trusts him wowwe
Dat hug hayeee soo dreamy loving it
CS intresting
Daadi seems like more or less like serial wali it ll make it more fun d main cupid
Only person in maan's life who wants d best for him total positive feel
His parents damn feel so bad for him especially his mom godd
Annie dnt knw wat to say she is giving me negative vibes already but hav to wait n watch
Geet's family more broken seems like
only well wisher her dad n her sibilings if i can say so
Step mother cant expect much
Rest of dem seems like negative
Aadi for a change is friend if maan intresting
Part 1. Maan ki kashmakash litreally
Cant blame him geet hai hi aisi
Goddd a person who is almost d age for her father tried to molest her seriously needs a big lesson
Good dat maan arrived on tym
Loved d way she totally trusted though she was broken badly
Hayeee highlighted part dat hug
Ufff taking a lot of maan's selfcontrol poor him seriously pity him lollz
Even if he has ine night stands he gas never forced
Most importantly respects women if dey deserve no matter wat dats wat make me love him
Him taking care of her totally loving it
Even though his mind is saying him to do something else lolz even d situation is nt helping much
But respect giving her coat n dressing her wounds ufff totally impressed
His aim for d day just to safeguard her n drop her safely
N must say he gave d best well deserving punishment to dat mehra
Geet's total history revealed to maan
He has a total respect for her dad good yaar
N worried abt her age dat she has to work at such a small age
Part 2.
He himself went to meet her next day n assire her family so sweet n promised to let her work with him nw
I c geet is already so fond of maan even b4 seeing him
again 1st day of geet in KC
Her dream come true day workinv under her mentor great platform n no worries if i can say so
Sooo true words her saviour is her predator n she isnt aware of it
N maan ki toh bohot buri halat hai goddd
I feel so bad for him
Her innosence is going to kill him so naive so pure
She is in her lala land where bichara maan suffering
A totally perfect disaster day god itni saari mistakes
Maan didnt burst on her surprising too much 9f self control taken
Roses
Masala chai lollz galati pe galati jawala mukhi kab phatega
Poured d tea over him hahahaha
Cleaning k chakar mein more torcher
Poked his eyes hahaha
Helping k chakar mein seducing sooo close
N omggg dat unknown almost kiss
Dis 1st official meet cudnt hav been better lollz
Totally loved it
D thing touched most is her tears hurting him
Hayeee
Amazing start
Sooo sorry for late comments
Thanks for writing heytal love ur works

-Ruchita jain (FB)
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 2 - lovely mixing of serial scenes with your diff scenario...geet is so nave & innocent...she not at all aware of her effect of innocent touches on maan...omg...how much he has to control himself when geet is around...loved the accidental kiss...
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update

so the beauty has stepped into his territory when he is trying hard to stay in control but he isnt and this will be the biggest war between love and lust...

maan is simply smitten by her in a way tat he himself does not understand while geet the innocent.. how will she take this war

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